工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence stating your status, avoid hesitation sounds and repetitions, and use correct terms (e.g. 'the ORE' or 'licensing exam'). Add one specific detail about what the exam involves or why you are taking it. Keep answers to at most 3–4 sentences.

範例: I am currently a student preparing for the ORE, the licensing exam for dentists in the UK. I am studying clinical procedures and exam techniques twice a day, and at the same time I’m preparing for the US licensing process because my long-term goal is to practice dentistry in the United States.

建議: Answer directly and use correct grammar: begin with a clear topic sentence stating where you work, then give one or two specific supporting details (how long, role, patient types). Avoid fillers and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect ideas coherently.

範例: I work as a dentist at a well-known hospital in Ballula, and I have been there for over a year. Because the area attracts many tourists, I often treat foreign patients, which has improved my experience with diverse dental cases.

建議: Provide a clear reasoned answer: start with a direct opinion, then explain with specific examples and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to connect your opinion and details. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, it is a very good place to work because the hospital offers many benefits. For example, they provide a well-furnished flat for my family and comprehensive medical care, which makes daily life much easier.

建議: Be concise and specific: give one or two strong reasons why you like it and use correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid overly long sentences—split into two sentences if needed for clarity.

範例: Yes, I really like my current workplace because it offers benefits I didn’t have before. For example, they provide quality accommodation for my family and reliable medical care, which has made our life much easier.

建議: Structure your response: start with a clear topic sentence about your main plan, then add a specific time frame or steps you are taking. Avoid hesitations and correct grammar (e.g. 'for two years'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like 'first' or 'in order to'.

範例: My top priority is to become a licensed dentist in the United States. I have been preparing for this for two years by studying for licensing exams and gaining clinical experience, and I hope to achieve it within the next year.

× Currently I'm studying for the Ord.

✓ Currently I'm studying for the ORE.

The sentence uses present continuous correctly for an ongoing action, but the exam name 'Ord' is likely incorrect or inconsistent; changing to the correct exam name (ORE or 'the ORE') clarifies meaning. Use 'the ORE' if referring to a specific exam: 'I'm studying for the ORE.' Suggestion: confirm and use the correct exam name and include the definite article if appropriate.

× It's a licensed exam uh, for uh dentist in UK.

✓ It's a licensing exam for dentists in the UK.

Errors: 'licensed exam' should be 'licensing exam' (noun + -ing to describe purpose) and 'dentist' should be plural 'dentists' (general reference) and requires the definite article before 'UK' ('the UK'). Suggestion: Use 'a licensing exam for dentists in the UK.'

× So I need to clear my aisles uh, uh.

✓ So I need to pass my exams.

The phrase 'clear my aisles' is incorrect. The intended meaning is to 'pass exams.' Use the verb 'pass' with plural 'exams' for general statements. Suggestion: Say 'I need to pass my exams.'

× Simultaneously, I'm preparing for Ord as my goal is to work as a licensed dentist in United States.

✓ Simultaneously, I'm preparing for the ORE because my goal is to work as a licensed dentist in the United States.

Use 'because' to show reason more clearly; add 'the' before 'United States'. Ensure consistent exam name. Present continuous 'I'm preparing' is correct for ongoing action. Suggestion: 'Simultaneously, I'm preparing for the ORE because my goal is to work as a licensed dentist in the United States.'

× I have been working over a year in a reputated hospital in the town Ballula, uh, as a dentist and uh, I often, uh, have appointments, uh, with, uh, many tourists as, uh, this area is more are mostly.

✓ I have been working for over a year at a reputable hospital in the town of Ballula as a dentist, and I often have appointments with many tourists because this area is mostly visited by tourists.

Problems fixed: use 'for over a year' for duration, 'at' for workplaces, 'reputable' spelling, 'in the town of Ballula' for correct preposition and article, remove filler words, and rewrite final clause to 'this area is mostly visited by tourists' to be grammatical. 'Have been working' is correct for present perfect continuous. Suggestion: Use 'for' with durations, 'at' for location of workplace, and reduce fillers.

× Yes, of course it is a very good place. I have been working like it has lot of facilities like the hospital gives a well furnished, well furnished flat for our family and also they provide us.

✓ Yes, of course it is a very good place. I have been working there; it has a lot of facilities. The hospital provides a well-furnished flat for our family and also provides other benefits.

Corrections: 'like' misused; use 'there' or restructure. Add article 'a lot of facilities'. 'well furnished' should be hyphenated as 'well-furnished' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. 'The hospital provides' is clearer than 'gives' and avoid repeating. Complete the thought about what they provide. Suggestion: Break into clear sentences and use articles and hyphens correctly.

× Yes, I love the place where I'm currently working because it is quite different from the other places which I worked previously as it provide various benefits like a good accommodation for my family and also medical care which make life much easier.

✓ Yes, I love the place where I'm currently working because it is quite different from the other places where I worked previously: it provides various benefits such as good accommodation for my family and medical care, which make life much easier.

Errors: 'which I worked previously' should be 'where I worked previously' (use 'where' for places). 'it provide' must agree with subject: 'it provides' (third person singular). 'a good accommodation' should be 'good accommodation' (uncountable), and commas to separate clauses. Use 'such as' to list examples. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct relative pronouns for places.

× Pull in the future I have many planned but the but which hits the my top priority is to work as a licensed dentist in the United States.

✓ Looking to the future, I have many plans, but my top priority is to work as a licensed dentist in the United States.

'Pull in the future' is incorrect; use 'Looking to the future' or 'In the future'. 'I have many planned' should be 'I have many plans'. Remove extra fillers and fix word order 'which hits the my top priority' to 'my top priority'. Suggestion: Use 'In the future' or 'Looking to the future' and 'I have many plans, but my top priority is...'.

× I have been planning this since 2 years and I hope I will soon reach my goal.

✓ I have been planning this for two years, and I hope I will reach my goal soon.

Use 'for two years' (duration) rather than 'since 2 years' (since requires a point in time). 'I hope I will reach my goal soon' word order is improved by placing 'soon' after the verb phrase or at the end. Maintain present perfect continuous 'have been planning' for an action that started in the past and continues. Suggestion: Use 'for' with durations and write numbers in words in formal speech: 'for two years'.