智力游戏— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「played a lot of time with making puzzles」は不自然で、「I spent a lot of time doing puzzles」のように言い換えると良いでしょう。また、詳細説明はありますが、文が長くて繋がりが不明瞭です。より簡潔で明確な文を心がけ、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げる練習をしましょう。

範例: Yes, I spent a lot of time doing puzzles when I was a child. I enjoyed it because the puzzle pieces had pretty and interesting pictures. The process of putting them together was very memorable for me.

建議: 回答が不明瞭で、文法的な誤りや言葉の繰り返しが多いです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由や状況を具体的に説明することが必要です。例えば、「I don't do puzzles now, but I think they are good to pass time when bored」のように簡潔に述べると良いでしょう。

範例: I don't do puzzles much now, but I think they are a good way to pass time when you feel bored, especially during trips or free time.

建議: 回答が混乱していて、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由を具体的に述べることが重要です。例えば、「I prefer word puzzles because I am good with words as a journalist, but number puzzles are more difficult for me」のように整理しましょう。

範例: I prefer doing word puzzles because, as a journalist, I am good with words and sentences. Number puzzles are more difficult for me, so I enjoy word puzzles more.

建議: 回答は肯定的ですが、表現が不自然で繰り返しが多いです。より自然で明確な表現を使い、理由を具体的に述べることが大切です。例えば、「Doing puzzles is beneficial for elderly people because it helps keep their brains active and may prevent illnesses like dementia」のように言い換えましょう。

範例: Yes, I think doing puzzles is very beneficial for elderly people because it keeps their brains active and can help prevent illnesses such as dementia.

× Yes, when I was a child I played a lot of time with making puzzles.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I spent a lot of time making puzzles.

The phrase 'played a lot of time with making puzzles' is incorrect because 'play' is not used with 'time' in this context. Instead, 'spend time' is the correct collocation. Also, 'with making puzzles' is awkward; the gerund 'making puzzles' should directly follow 'spend time'.

× some pretty and cool paints are illustrated on the piece of the puzzles

✓ some pretty and cool pictures are illustrated on the pieces of the puzzles

'Paints' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'pictures' or 'images' to describe what is shown on puzzle pieces. Also, 'piece of the puzzles' should be pluralized to 'pieces of the puzzles' to match the plural 'puzzles'.

× and process of making and this was a very memorable for me.

✓ and the process of making them was very memorable for me.

The original sentence lacks articles and proper structure. 'Process' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, 'this was a very memorable' is incorrect; 'memorable' is an adjective and needs a noun, so 'very memorable experience' or 'very memorable for me' without 'a' is correct. Here, 'was very memorable for me' is appropriate.

× I played a lot of time with making puzzles.

✓ I spent a lot of time making puzzles.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used after 'played a lot of time'. The correct phrase is 'spend time making puzzles' without 'with'.

× I don't make any puzzles in my adulthood

✓ I don't do any puzzles in my adulthood

The verb 'make' is not commonly used with 'puzzles' in this context; 'do puzzles' is the correct collocation. Also, 'in my adulthood' is awkward; 'as an adult' is more natural, but since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes from the list, the verb correction is primary.

× So when you feel bored playing with.

✓ So you can play with them when you feel bored.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. 'Playing with' needs an object. The corrected sentence completes the thought and clarifies the meaning.

× a puzzle is much more easier than a number of puzzles.

✓ a puzzle is much easier than a number puzzle.

'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' already is a comparative form; 'more' should not be used with it. Also, 'a number of puzzles' is incorrect here; it should be 'a number puzzle' to contrast with 'a puzzle' (word puzzle).

× I'm a good a good at handling whatever worries and sentences capitals.

✓ I'm good at handling words and capital letters.

The phrase 'handling whatever worries and sentences capitals' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended meaning is 'handling words and capital letters'. Also, 'a good a good at' is redundant and incorrect; 'I'm good at' is correct.

× but I'm not a good at using a number.

✓ but I'm not good at using numbers.

The phrase 'a good at' is incorrect; it should be 'good at'. Also, 'using a number' is awkward; 'using numbers' is more natural.

× doing puzzles is umm, very uh, efficient for the elderly people, umm, because umm, by using brains for a long time and they can avoid it to affect it by illness.

✓ doing puzzles is very beneficial for elderly people because by using their brains for a long time, they can avoid being affected by illness.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and articles. 'The elderly people' should be 'elderly people' without 'the' for generalization. 'Using brains' should be 'using their brains'. 'Avoid it to affect it by illness' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'avoid being affected by illness'.