智力游戏— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer should be more structured and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence clarity.

範例: Yes, I enjoyed solving puzzles during my childhood. Initially, I found Rubik's Cubes very challenging, but after practicing for about a week, I was able to solve them successfully.

建議: Try to make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer expressions. Also, avoid awkward phrases and be specific about how puzzles help you.

範例: I usually solve puzzles when I feel bored because it helps me to keep my mind active and distracts me from negative thoughts.

建議: Focus on grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons for your preferences. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms.

範例: I prefer word puzzles because I find them more interesting and often enjoy solving them with my friends and family. I have never tried number puzzles as I think they are more difficult than word puzzles.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and completeness. Use proper sentence structures and linking words to express contrasting ideas clearly. Provide specific reasons and avoid incomplete sentences.

範例: I believe puzzles can be beneficial for older people as they help keep the mind active. However, some elderly individuals may find puzzles difficult due to age-related challenges.

× Yeah, So I like to solve puzzles in my childhood.

✓ Yeah, so I liked to solve puzzles in my childhood.

The sentence talks about a past time ('in my childhood'), so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Like' is present tense; it should be 'liked' to match the past context.

× As far as I can remember, my interest in solving cubes that is very difficult for me in starting.

✓ As far as I can remember, my interest was in solving cubes that were very difficult for me at the beginning.

The original sentence is incomplete and has incorrect verb forms. 'Interest in solving cubes that is very difficult' is incorrect; it should be 'interest was in solving cubes that were very difficult'. Also, 'in starting' is incorrect; 'at the beginning' is appropriate.

× But after practice, I think for a one week I able to solve the cube.

✓ But after practice, I think after one week I was able to solve the cube.

The sentence refers to a past event, so 'able' should be 'was able'. Also, 'for a one week' is incorrect; it should be 'after one week' to indicate the time taken.

× Well, it depends on my mood.

✓ Well, it depends on my mood.

This sentence is correct as it expresses a general truth or habitual action, so present tense is appropriate.

× It's most of the time when I feel bored I try to solve the Rubik's Cube that increase my mind and prevent from the worst thought in my life.

✓ Most of the time, when I feel bored, I try to solve the Rubik's Cube because it stimulates my mind and prevents me from having negative thoughts in my life.

The original sentence has tense and structure issues. 'It's most of the time' is incorrect; 'Most of the time' is better. 'That increase my mind' is incorrect; it should be 'because it stimulates my mind'. 'Prevent from the worst thought' is incorrect; it should be 'prevents me from having negative thoughts'.

× Well I interested in doing word puzzle because it is interested for me and it's many times when I did this puzzles problem with my friends or family members.

✓ Well, I am interested in doing word puzzles because they are interesting to me, and many times I have done these puzzle problems with my friends or family members.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'I interested' should be 'I am interested' (missing verb). 'It is interested for me' is incorrect; it should be 'they are interesting to me'. 'It's many times when I did' is incorrect; 'many times I have done' is correct. Also, 'word puzzle' should be plural 'word puzzles'.

× Well I never try number puzzles because I found it is a difficult rather than the world puzzles.

✓ Well, I have never tried number puzzles because I find them more difficult than word puzzles.

'Never try' should be 'have never tried' to indicate experience up to now. 'I found it is a difficult' is incorrect; 'I find them more difficult' is correct. 'Rather than the world puzzles' should be 'than word puzzles'.

× Well, it depends on their mood.

✓ Well, it depends on their mood.

This sentence is correct as it expresses a general truth or habitual action, so present tense is appropriate.

× Some old people find to do a puzzle when they feel bored to engage their mind in activities.

✓ Some old people like to do puzzles when they feel bored to engage their minds in activities.

'Find to do a puzzle' is incorrect; it should be 'like to do puzzles'. Also, 'engage their mind' should be 'engage their minds' to match plural subject.

× But on the other hand, some old people not able to do puzzles because their age is more and they are not able to solve it because they have.

✓ But on the other hand, some old people are not able to do puzzles because of their age, and they are not able to solve them because of that.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the verb 'are' after 'some old people'. 'Their age is more' is incorrect; 'because of their age' is correct. 'They have' is incomplete; it should be 'because of that' or similar to complete the thought.