智力游戏— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时时态使用不准确，应该用过去时描述童年经历。表达重复且不够连贯，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连接词。

範例: No, I didn't do puzzles in my childhood because I found them very challenging. Instead, I preferred playing video games, which I enjoyed more.

建議: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议使用完整句子，明确回答问题，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

範例: I usually don't do puzzles. When I feel bored or during trips, I prefer talking to others or playing video games. Sometimes, I also read books instead.

建議: 回答语法错误严重，表达不完整，难以理解。建议先明确表达喜欢哪种拼图，再说明哪种更难，并给出理由。

範例: I prefer word puzzles because I find number puzzles more difficult. Numbers require more concentration, which I struggle with.

建議: 表达有些重复，语法和用词不够准确。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达，并避免重复。

範例: I believe puzzles are beneficial for everyone, including older people, because they stimulate the mind, reduce stress, and help pass the time enjoyably.

× No, I don't.

✓ No, I didn't.

这里是在回答过去的事情，应该用过去时态。"I don't"是现在时，应该改为过去时"I didn't"。

× I don't like this and I think it's very challenging for me and I think I like to play some video games instead of puzzles.

✓ I didn't like them and I thought they were very challenging for me, so I preferred to play some video games instead of puzzles.

这里谈论的是过去的喜好，应该用过去时态。"this"指代不明确，改为复数"them"更合适。"I think I like"时态混乱，应统一为过去时。

× No, I don't.

✓ No, I don't.

这里是问现在是否做拼图，回答用现在时"I don't"是正确的，无需修改。

× During my trip when all when I feel bold, I think I'll talk to others and play some video games.

✓ During my trip or when I feel bored, I think I'll talk to others and play some video games.

"when all when I feel bold"语法错误，且"bold"应为"bored"，意思是感到无聊。

× Sometimes I read books instead of do puzzles.

✓ Sometimes I read books instead of doing puzzles.

"instead of"后面应接动名词形式，故"do"应改为"doing"。

× I don't have more than number of puzzles.

✓ I don't have many number of puzzles.

"more than number of puzzles"表达不正确，应该用"many number of puzzles"或更自然的表达。

× Yes, I think the number of puzzles because I not do the.

✓ Yes, I think number puzzles are more difficult because I don't do them.

句子结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，且"I not do the"语法错误，应改为"I don't do them"。

× I think it's good for all people to do puzzles because puzzles is a good way to make people to think about, and it's a good way for all people to relieve their stress and have fun to fight against boring.

✓ I think it's good for all people to do puzzles because puzzles are a good way to make people think, and it's a good way for all people to relieve their stress and have fun to fight against boredom.

"puzzles is"应为复数形式"puzzles are"。"make people to think about"中"to"多余，应去掉。"fight against boring"应改为"fight against boredom"，因为"boring"是形容词，名词形式是"boredom"。