智力游戏— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and some unclear words like 'apostles' which should be 'puzzles'. Try to use past tense consistently and be clear. Also, avoid redundancy and keep the answer concise.

範例: Yes, I used to do puzzles with my friends during my childhood, although not very often. We enjoyed solving different types of puzzles together.

建議: There are some grammatical mistakes and unclear words like 'bottles' instead of 'puzzles'. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about when you do puzzles.

範例: I usually do puzzles when my friends come over, and we spend hours solving different kinds of puzzles. Also, I like to do puzzles during trips to pass the time.

建議: Your answer has repetition and some grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and use correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to explain your preferences clearly.

範例: I enjoy both word and number puzzles, but I find number puzzles more difficult. Therefore, when I struggle, I ask my friend to help me and teach me how to solve them.

建議: Your answer is generally good but has some repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid filler words. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I believe puzzles are beneficial for people of all ages because they stimulate brain function. They help improve memory and keep the mind active, so everyone should try to do puzzles regularly.

× During my childhood I do apostles with my friends, but not so often.

✓ During my childhood I did puzzles with my friends, but not so often.

The sentence talks about a past time (childhood), so the verb should be in the past tense 'did' instead of present tense 'do'. Also, 'apostles' seems to be a typo for 'puzzles'.

× But yeah, sometimes we used to play a puzzles.

✓ But yeah, sometimes we used to play puzzles.

The word 'puzzles' is plural and does not need the article 'a'. Using 'a' before a plural noun is incorrect.

× When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?

✓ When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?

This sentence is a question from the examiner and is grammatically correct. No correction needed.

× Well, I used to do puzzles when my friends came home and we spent hours doing different kinds of puzzles game trying to solve the puzzles.

✓ Well, I used to do puzzles when my friends came home and we spent hours doing different kinds of puzzle games trying to solve the puzzles.

The phrase 'puzzles game' is incorrect; it should be plural 'puzzle games' to match the plural 'kinds'.

× And when I go to trip I also do bottles to spend time.

✓ And when I go on a trip I also do puzzles to spend time.

The phrase 'go to trip' is incorrect; it should be 'go on a trip'. Also, 'do bottles' seems to be a typo for 'do puzzles'.

× I like doing what puzzles and number puzzles, both of them are my favorite and number puzzles are very difficult for me to solve it.

✓ I like doing word puzzles and number puzzles; both of them are my favorites, and number puzzles are very difficult for me to solve.

'What puzzles' is a typo for 'word puzzles'. Also, 'both of them are my favorite' should be 'my favorites' to agree with plural. The phrase 'to solve it' is redundant after 'number puzzles are very difficult for me to solve'.

× So whenever whenever I find it difficult I always call my friend to solve it and told told her to teach me to solve the puzzles.

✓ So whenever I find it difficult, I always call my friend to solve it and tell her to teach me to solve the puzzles.

The repetition 'whenever whenever' and 'told told' are errors. Also, 'told' should be 'tell' to match the present tense 'I always call'.

× I I believe it is good for all people to do puzzles because puzzles are mainly made for the brain function.

✓ I believe it is good for all people to do puzzles because puzzles are mainly made for brain function.

The phrase 'the brain function' is incorrect; 'brain function' is uncountable and does not need 'the'.

× It helps to memorize and to use brain in a proper way.

✓ It helps to memorize and to use the brain in a proper way.

The noun 'brain' here needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific organ.

× I think so yeah, all people should do others sometime.

✓ I think so. Yeah, all people should do puzzles sometimes.

The sentence is unclear and incomplete. 'Do others sometime' is incorrect; it should specify 'do puzzles sometimes'. Also, punctuation is added for clarity.