智力游戏— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and repetitive. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'I used to' and keep your sentences concise. Also, use linking words to improve flow and add a bit more detail to make your answer more engaging.

範例: Yes, I enjoyed doing puzzles as a child. My first one was a Marvel superhero Hulk jigsaw puzzle, which I received as a gift in third grade. I loved it so much that I would take it apart and put it back together every day.

建議: Your answer is clear and well-structured, but you can improve coherence by using more linking words and avoid redundancy such as 'engaged' and 'engaging'. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary to express your ideas.

範例: I usually do puzzles when I'm bored rather than during trips because I prefer sightseeing and adventurous activities while traveling. However, when I'm bored, puzzles help keep my mind active and provide enjoyable mental stimulation.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'I've is more easier'. Try to correct these errors and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, provide more specific examples to support your points.

範例: I find word puzzles more difficult, especially crossword puzzles, because the hints can be quite challenging. On the other hand, number puzzles are easier for me since they are more objective, and I can often find helpful apps to assist me.

建議: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and contains grammatical errors, such as 'puzzles provides'. Make sure to finish your sentences and use correct subject-verb agreement. Also, add linking words and more specific reasons to strengthen your response.

範例: Yes, I believe it is important for older people to do puzzles because, as we age, cognitive abilities tend to decline. Therefore, puzzles provide an easy and effective way to keep the brain sharp and healthy.

× It was jigsaw puzzle for the Marvel superhero Hulk and this was my first puzzle I received as a gift when I was in 3rd grade and I used to love it so much that I used to undo it and remake it every day.

✓ It was a jigsaw puzzle of the Marvel superhero Hulk and this was the first puzzle I received as a gift when I was in 3rd grade, and I used to love it so much that I used to undo it and remake it every day.

The phrase 'jigsaw puzzle' needs an article 'a' before it because it is a singular countable noun. Also, 'for the Marvel superhero Hulk' should be 'of the Marvel superhero Hulk' to correctly indicate the puzzle's image. Adding 'the' before 'first puzzle' specifies which puzzle is being referred to.

× It was jigsaw puzzle for the Marvel superhero Hulk and this was my first puzzle I received as a gift when I was in 3rd grade and I used to love it so much that I used to undo it and remake it every day.

✓ It was a jigsaw puzzle of the Marvel superhero Hulk and this was the first puzzle I received as a gift when I was in 3rd grade, and I used to love it so much that I used to undo it and remake it every day.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'of' is the correct preposition to indicate the subject or image of the puzzle.

× I prefer to do puzzle when I'm bored, not on my trip, because when I'm on a trip I want to do more sightseeing and do more things related to adventure.

✓ I prefer to do puzzles when I'm bored, not on my trip, because when I'm on a trip I want to do more sightseeing and do more things related to adventure.

'Puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' because it refers to the activity in general, which is countable and usually plural in this context.

× But number puzzles I've is more easier because it's objective and easier to find an app.

✓ But number puzzles I've found are easier because they're objective and easier to find an app for.

'I've is more easier' is incorrect; 'I've found are easier' correctly uses the present perfect and plural agreement. Also, 'more easier' is redundant; 'easier' alone suffices.

× But number puzzles I've is more easier because it's objective and easier to find an app.

✓ But number puzzles I've found are easier because they're objective and easier to find an app for.

'I've is more easier' is grammatically incorrect; the pronoun 'I've' (I have) should be followed by a past participle verb 'found' to form present perfect tense. Also, 'it's' should be 'they're' to agree with plural 'number puzzles'.

× Yes, I think it is crucial for old people to do puzzles because in our golden years we are losing our cognitive abilities and to keep our brain sharp and healthy, puzzles provides an easy way to.

✓ Yes, I think it is crucial for old people to do puzzles because in our golden years we are losing our cognitive abilities and to keep our brain sharp and healthy, puzzles provide an easy way to do so.

'Puzzles provides' is incorrect because 'puzzles' is plural and requires the plural verb 'provide'. Also, the sentence was incomplete; adding 'to do so' completes the thought.