智力游戏— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如时态和动词形式错误。建议使用正确的时态和动词形式，并简洁明了地表达观点。

範例: No, I didn't do puzzles when I was a child. Instead, I often drew pictures or watched cartoons because I found puzzles too difficult at that time.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复表达，建议使用连贯的句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored, sometimes with my friends or parents. Puzzles are interesting and help me pass the time while exercising my mind.

建議: 回答中存在严重语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议理清思路，使用正确的词汇和句型，明确表达喜好和原因。

範例: I prefer word puzzles because they are easier for me. Number puzzles are more difficult since I often get confused with math and forget the steps.

建議: 回答表达基本清晰，但句子结构单一，建议使用更多连接词和丰富的词汇，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: I think doing puzzles is a pleasant activity for older people. It can help exercise their memory and intelligence. Moreover, since they often feel bored, puzzles provide a relaxing and enjoyable way to pass the time.

× I often drawing pictures or watch cartoons.

✓ I often draw pictures or watch cartoons.

这里动词应该用原形draw，因为主语是I，且句子描述的是习惯性动作，使用一般现在时。drawing是动名词形式，不符合句子结构。

× I think puzzles is too hard for me when I was childhood when I was a child.

✓ I think puzzles are too hard for me when I was a child.

puzzles是复数，谓语动词应使用are而不是is。'when I was childhood'表达不正确，应改为'when I was a child'。

× When I feel bored, I always do puzzles, sometimes with my friends or parents.

✓ When I feel bored, I always do puzzles, sometimes with my friends or parents.

该句无语法错误，保持原句。

× Do puzzles is a interesting game, an interesting experience for me.

✓ Doing puzzles is an interesting game, an interesting experience for me.

句子缺少主语，应该用动名词doing puzzles作为主语。'a interesting'中a应改为an，因为interesting以元音音素开头。

× I usually do puzzle to pass the times and also do puzzles can exercise my intelligence.

✓ I usually do puzzles to pass the time, and doing puzzles can also exercise my intelligence.

puzzle应为复数puzzles。'pass the times'应为'pass the time'。第二部分缺少主语，改为doing puzzles。

× I like doing war puzzles because it's more easy for me.

✓ I like doing word puzzles because it's easier for me.

'war puzzles'应为'word puzzles'。'more easy'应改为比较级形式'easier'。

× Lumber puzzles is hard for me.

✓ Number puzzles are hard for me.

应为'number puzzles'而非'lumber puzzles'。puzzles为复数，谓语动词应为are。

× I used to be confusing about math so never puzzles and not easily things for me.

✓ I used to be confused about math, so puzzles were never easy for me.

'confusing'应为过去分词'confused'，表示感受。'never puzzles and not easily things'表达不通顺，改为'puzzles were never easy'。

× I always forget them when I play them playing them.

✓ I always forget them when I play them.

'play them playing them'重复且冗余，应去掉后半部分。

× I think this is a pleasant way to help old people do puzzle.

✓ I think this is a pleasant way to help old people do puzzles.

puzzle应为复数puzzles，表示一般活动。

× Old people do puzzles can exercise their memories and intelligence.

✓ Doing puzzles can exercise their memories and intelligence for old people.

句子缺少主语，改为doing puzzles。原句结构不完整。

× Moreover, old people often feel bored, so do puzzles is a pleasant way to make them feel relaxed.

✓ Moreover, old people often feel bored, so doing puzzles is a pleasant way to make them feel relaxed.

句子缺少主语，改为doing puzzles。