智力游戏— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "tiny, tiny little parts" and improve grammar, for example, use "I enjoyed" instead of "I was very enjoyable." Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

範例: Yes, I often did puzzles in my childhood because I found them challenging. I especially enjoyed finding the small pieces of pictures, which made the game interesting and fun.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains filler words like "uh" and "umm." Try to avoid these and make your sentences complete. Also, avoid redundancy and improve coherence by using linking words such as "because" and "so."

範例: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored at home because I don't have much time to do them during trips. Doing puzzles helps me relax and pass the time.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many filler words. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Also, clarify which type of puzzle you prefer and which is more difficult, using linking words to connect ideas.

範例: I prefer word puzzles because I enjoy playing with words and assembling them myself. Number puzzles are more difficult for me since they require more calculation skills.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by making it more concise and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases and try to use more precise vocabulary.

範例: Yes, I think puzzles are good for older people because they are challenging and come in many types. This allows them to choose their favorite puzzles, spend time enjoyably, and create good memories.

× I often did puzzles in my childhood because it was so challenging for me, and I was very enjoyable when I'm doing puzzle games when I need to find some really tiny, tiny little parts of these photos or whatever it is.

✓ I often did puzzles in my childhood because they were so challenging for me, and I enjoyed doing puzzle games when I needed to find some really tiny little parts of these photos or whatever it was.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'was' with 'puzzles' which is plural, so it should be 'were' (plural verb). Also, 'I was very enjoyable' is incorrect because 'enjoyable' describes something that causes enjoyment, not a feeling. The correct form is 'I enjoyed' (past tense verb). Additionally, 'when I'm doing' should be in past tense 'when I was doing' or simplified to 'I enjoyed doing' to match the past context. 'When I need' should be 'when I needed' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Whatever it is' should be 'whatever it was' for past tense consistency.

× I was very enjoyable when I'm doing puzzle games when I need to find some really tiny, tiny little parts of these photos or whatever it is.

✓ I enjoyed doing puzzle games when I needed to find some really tiny little parts of these photos or whatever it was.

The phrase 'I was very enjoyable' is incorrect because 'enjoyable' is an adjective describing something that causes enjoyment, not a feeling experienced by a person. The correct verb is 'enjoyed'. Also, 'when I'm doing' and 'when I need' are present tense forms inconsistent with the past context; they should be changed to past tense 'when I was doing' and 'when I needed'.

× I usually eat umm, and making puzzles, it's really helps me to relax and just.

✓ I usually eat, umm, and make puzzles; it really helps me to relax.

The phrase 'making puzzles, it's really helps' is incorrect. 'Making' should be 'make' to parallel 'eat' and form a correct compound predicate. Also, 'it's really helps' is incorrect; it should be 'it really helps' without 's' after 'helps' because 'it' is singular and 'helps' is correct, but 'it's' (it is) plus 'helps' is redundant. The sentence is also incomplete and should be ended properly.

× when I am at home alone that I don't have anything to do, I usually eat umm, and making puzzles, it's really helps me to relax and just.

✓ When I am at home alone and don't have anything to do, I usually eat, umm, and make puzzles; it really helps me to relax.

The phrase 'that I don't have anything to do' is incorrect; 'that' should be replaced with 'and' to connect the clauses properly. Also, 'making puzzles, it's really helps' is incorrect as explained before. The sentence structure needs correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I usually eat umm, and making puzzles, it's really helps me to relax and just.

✓ I usually eat, umm, and make puzzles; it really helps me to relax.

The sentence incorrectly uses a comma and lacks proper conjunction or punctuation to separate ideas. 'Making puzzles, it's really helps' is incorrect; it should be 'make puzzles; it really helps'. Proper punctuation and verb forms are necessary for clarity.

× I really like to make it on my own and finding and, uh, put it up together everything and, uh, try it to make a fuller so it will be worth.

✓ I really like to make it on my own, find and put everything together, and try to make it fuller so it will be worthwhile.

The sentence incorrectly mixes verb forms: 'like to make', 'finding', 'put', and 'try it to make'. The verbs should be parallel in form: 'like to make', 'find', 'put', 'try'. Also, 'try it to make a fuller' is incorrect; it should be 'try to make it fuller'. 'Worth' should be 'worthwhile' to correctly express value.

× I really like to make it on my own and finding and, uh, put it up together everything and, uh, try it to make a fuller so it will be worth.

✓ I really like to make it on my own, find and put everything together, and try to make it fuller so it will be worthwhile.

The sentence has inconsistent verb forms and incorrect pronoun usage. 'Finding' should be 'find' to match the infinitive 'to make'. 'Put it up together everything' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'put everything together'. 'Try it to make a fuller' should be 'try to make it fuller'. 'Worth' should be 'worthwhile' to convey the intended meaning.

× there are many kinds of puzzles so they can find which one they prefer and they can do it and they can spend time and make a good memories while doing this.

✓ There are many kinds of puzzles, so they can find which one they prefer, do it, spend time, and make good memories while doing this.

The phrase 'make a good memories' is incorrect because 'memories' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'make good memories'. Also, the sentence needs commas for clarity and smoother flow.