珠宝— Part 1 評分報告

建議: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਸਹੀ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ ਕਈ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ ਜੋ ਸਵਾਲ ਦਾ ਸਹੀ ਜਵਾਬ ਦੇਣ ਵਿੱਚ ਰੁਕਾਵਟ ਪੈਦਾ ਕਰਦੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਤੁਸੀਂ ਸਿੱਧਾ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਜਵਾਬ ਦੇਣਾ ਸਿੱਖੋ ਅਤੇ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਸਹੀ ਤਰੀਕੇ ਨਾਲ ਜੋੜੋ।

範例: No, I don't often wear jewelry in my daily routine because they are precious to me, and I do a lot of hard and difficult work every day.

建議: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਸਹੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟਤਾ ਦੀ ਘਾਟ ਹੈ। ਤੁਸੀਂ ਆਪਣੇ ਵਿਚਾਰਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਸਹੀ ਤਰੀਕੇ ਨਾਲ ਪ੍ਰਗਟ ਕਰਨ ਲਈ ਸਧਾਰਣ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਕਰੋ ਅਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਜੁੜੇ ਹੋਏ ਵਿਚਾਰ ਦਿਓ।

範例: I mostly like to wear bracelets because they are comfortable on my wrist. However, I avoid wearing necklaces as they make me feel uncomfortable.

建議: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਗ੍ਰਾਮਰ ਅਤੇ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਵਿੱਚ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ ਜੋ ਅਰਥ ਨੂੰ ਸਮਝਣ ਵਿੱਚ ਮੁਸ਼ਕਲ ਪੈਦਾ ਕਰਦੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਸਿੱਧਾ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਜਵਾਬ ਦੇਣ ਦੀ ਕੋਸ਼ਿਸ਼ ਕਰੋ ਅਤੇ ਜਰੂਰੀ ਜਾਣਕਾਰੀ ਨੂੰ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਸ਼ਾਮਲ ਕਰੋ।

範例: No, I don't usually buy jewelry for myself. But I wear jewelry on special occasions, especially when I meet my friends and parents.

建議: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਿਚਾਰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਹਨ ਪਰ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਅਤੇ ਗ੍ਰਾਮਰ ਵਿੱਚ ਸੁਧਾਰ ਦੀ ਲੋੜ ਹੈ। ਆਪਣੇ ਵਿਚਾਰਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਜੋੜੋ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਸਹੀ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਕਰੋ।

範例: I think some people wear jewelry for a long time because they feel comfortable wearing it daily. Also, they might have jobs that do not involve hard physical work, so wearing jewelry is not a problem for them.

× No, not you often to wear jewelry in the daily routine 'cause they are the precious for me and I do the many difficult type of work and hard work in the daily routine.

✓ No, I do not often wear jewelry in my daily routine because it is precious to me and I do many difficult and hard types of work daily.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'you' instead of 'I' and has awkward phrasing. Pronouns should correctly refer to the speaker. Also, 'they are the precious for me' is incorrect; 'it is precious to me' is correct because 'jewelry' is uncountable and singular in this context.

× Mostly I like to wear the bracelet into the hand as a jewelry 'cause I still feel comfort when I have to to hear the that type of jewelry and on the other hand, when I have to wear the any can on the neck.

✓ Mostly, I like to wear a bracelet on my hand as jewelry because I feel comfortable when I wear that type of jewelry, but when I wear anything on my neck, I do not feel comfortable.

The preposition 'into' is incorrect; 'on' is appropriate for wearing bracelets. Also, 'hear' is a wrong word here; it should be 'wear'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs clarity.

× So I know to feel that there are comfort on that time. So I avoid that that in my.

✓ So I know I feel comfortable at that time, so I avoid wearing that.

The sentence uses incorrect pronouns and awkward phrasing. 'There are comfort' is incorrect; 'I feel comfortable' is correct. The sentence is incomplete and needs proper object and verb usage.

× No, I'm not to be trusted to either. Jewellery for me. In the early period but I wear the jewellery for the special occasion to for my friends and parents to as a.

✓ No, I do not usually buy jewelry for myself. In the past, I did not, but I wear jewelry on special occasions for my friends and parents.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and incomplete thoughts. 'I'm not to be trusted to either' is unclear and incorrect. The sentence needs to be restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× I think some people have to wear the jewelry for a long time. I think they have possibly they have to feel comfort in their daily routine.

✓ I think some people wear jewelry for a long time because they possibly feel comfortable in their daily routine.

The phrase 'have to wear' is incorrect here; 'wear' is sufficient. Also, 'feel comfort' should be 'feel comfortable'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs correction.

× On the other hand, they have not to type to do the that type of work to which can do face any difficulty into the work.

✓ On the other hand, they do not have to do that type of work which can cause difficulties at work.

The sentence uses incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing. 'Have not to type to do' is incorrect; 'do not have to do' is correct. 'Face any difficulty into the work' should be 'cause difficulties at work'.

× So they can do wear the jewellery in the daily routine easily.

✓ So they can wear jewelry easily in their daily routine.

The phrase 'can do wear' is incorrect; 'can wear' is correct. Also, 'the jewellery' should be 'jewelry' without 'the' as it is uncountable here. Pronoun 'their' is appropriate for 'people'.