地理— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp lại ý không cần thiết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I don't particularly enjoy studying geography because it's not my favorite subject. However, I plan to put more effort into it in the future so I can learn about different places in my country and around the world.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn (ví dụ: 'weather conditions' thay vì 'weather condition') và có thể thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, definitely. Geography is useful because it broadens children's horizons by teaching them about weather conditions, climate change, and environmental issues such as global warming. Furthermore, it offers valuable insights into the unique features of different countries worldwide.

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'our planets' (nên là 'our planet'). Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và liên kết các ý với nhau bằng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

範例: I studied geography in secondary and high school, although I wasn't very passionate about it. However, I now realize that learning geography helps me understand different countries and cultures better. Therefore, I plan to study it more in the future to expand my knowledge about our planet's diversity.

建議: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng và trực tiếp nhưng nên tránh lặp lại cụm từ 'down the road' nhiều lần. Ngoài ra, có thể sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: As I mentioned earlier, I don't have a strong passion for geography, so I don't want to become a geography teacher. Instead, since my major is accounting and auditing, I plan to work in that field.

建議: Câu trả lời cần chính xác về ngữ pháp và rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và sửa lỗi như 'hold a an interesting conversation' thành 'have an interesting conversation'.

範例: Yes, definitely. I plan to learn more about the geographical features of different countries before traveling. This will help me have interesting conversations with native speakers.

× But down the road, I guess I will try all my best to study this subject.

✓ But down the road, I guess I will try my best to study this subject.

The phrase 'try all my best' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'try my best' to indicate making the greatest effort.

× From that I can know a few destinations from my country and other nations.

✓ From that I can learn about a few destinations in my country and other nations.

The verb 'know' is not typically used with 'destinations'; 'learn about' is more appropriate. Also, 'from my country' should be 'in my country' to indicate locations within the country.

× Geography is useful because it helps expand the children's horizons by teaching them about different weather condition, climate change, and environmental issues like global warming.

✓ Geography is useful because it helps expand children's horizons by teaching them about different weather conditions, climate change, and environmental issues like global warming.

'Weather condition' should be plural 'weather conditions' because it refers to various types of weather. Also, 'the children's horizons' is better as 'children's horizons' unless referring to specific children.

× Moreover, it also provides valuable insights into unique characteristics of various countries around the world.

✓ Moreover, it also provides valuable insights into the unique characteristics of various countries around the world.

The phrase 'unique characteristics' usually requires the definite article 'the' to specify particular characteristics.

× I learned geography during secondary and high school, but I didn't have a big passion for this subject.

✓ I learned geography during secondary and high school, but I didn't have a strong passion for this subject.

While 'big passion' is understandable, the more natural collocation is 'strong passion'.

× So in the future, I plan to study this subject in order to expand my knowledge about our planets. Diversity.

✓ So in the future, I plan to study this subject in order to expand my knowledge about our planet's diversity.

'Planets' should be singular 'planet' because we refer to Earth here. Also, 'Diversity' should be connected to 'planet' as 'planet's diversity'.

× As I was saying above that I don't really have a big passion for geography, so down the road I don't want to be a geography teacher.

✓ As I said earlier, I don't really have a strong passion for geography, so in the future I don't want to be a geography teacher.

The phrase 'As I was saying above that' is awkward; 'As I said earlier' is clearer. Also, 'down the road' is informal; 'in the future' fits better here.

× In fact, my major is accounting and auditing, so I would likely work in this industry.

✓ In fact, my major is accounting and auditing, so I will likely work in this industry.

'Would likely' suggests conditional mood; 'will likely' is more appropriate for a future plan.

× I will learn more about geographical characteristics of various countries before traveling.

✓ I will learn more about the geographical characteristics of various countries before traveling.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'geographical characteristics' to specify particular characteristics.

× By doing that it can hold a an interesting conversation with native speaker.

✓ By doing that, I can hold an interesting conversation with native speakers.

The sentence lacks a subject; adding 'I' clarifies who can hold the conversation. Also, 'a an' is a typo; 'an' is correct before a vowel sound. 'Native speaker' should be plural 'native speakers' to generalize.