地理— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence and then support it with specific reasons or examples, using linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I don't like geography because I found it difficult to remember all the place names and maps. For example, I often struggled with the different countries and their capitals, which made the subject less interesting for me.

建議: Your answer is brief and contains unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and provide specific examples or reasons to explain why geography is useful.

範例: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps us understand the environment and global issues. For instance, it explains natural disasters like earthquakes and how they affect different regions.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, avoiding repetition and improving grammar.

範例: Yes, I studied geography at school and had a textbook covering many chapters. However, I wasn't very interested, so I often skipped classes and only learned a little.

建議: Your answer is short and repetitive. Try to give a clear opinion and explain your reasons with supporting details using linking words.

範例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I find the subject boring. Moreover, I prefer subjects that are more practical and interesting to me.

建議: Your answer is contradictory and unclear. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons or examples, using linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Although learning about the geography of other countries can be interesting, I am not very keen on studying it because I prefer subjects related to technology and science.

× I don't think so.

✓ I don't like it.

The sentence 'I don't think so' is not appropriate as a direct answer to 'How do you like geography?'. The correct response should express the speaker's feeling about geography using the present tense, such as 'I don't like it.' This aligns with the question's intent.

× I used to skip my geographic classes because I don't like the subject of geography.

✓ I used to skip my geography classes because I didn't like the subject of geography.

The word 'geographic' is an adjective, but the noun form 'geography' should be used here. Also, the tense should be consistent; since 'used to' refers to past habits, 'didn't like' is appropriate instead of 'don't like'.

× Not interested in geography.

✓ I was not interested in geography.

The original sentence is a fragment lacking a subject and verb. To correct it, add the subject 'I' and the verb 'was' to form a complete sentence.

× Geography helps us to tell us a bird tap what is happening in the earth, in all over the world.

✓ Geography helps us understand what is happening on the Earth all over the world.

The phrase 'tell us a bird tap' is incorrect and unclear. The pronoun usage is also awkward. The corrected sentence uses 'helps us understand' which is clearer and grammatically correct. Also, 'on the Earth' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× Yes, when I was a student I have a book of geography from chapter 1 to chapter.

✓ Yes, when I was a student I had a geography book from chapter 1 to chapter 10.

The verb 'have' should be in the past tense 'had' to match the past time frame 'when I was a student'. Also, 'a book of geography' is better expressed as 'a geography book'. The phrase 'from chapter 1 to chapter' is incomplete; adding a chapter number completes the meaning.

× Then I used to skip the classes of geography because I don't like the subject and I learned you ography a little bit but not interested because it is for very dull subject.

✓ Then I used to skip geography classes because I didn't like the subject and I learned geography a little bit but was not interested because it is a very dull subject.

The verb tenses should be consistent in the past: 'didn't like' instead of 'don't like', 'was not interested' instead of 'not interested'. The phrase 'learned you ography' seems to be a typo and is corrected to 'learned geography'. Also, 'for very dull subject' should be 'a very dull subject'.

× I don't like to cover our learn all geographic things.

✓ I don't like to cover or learn all geographic things.

The phrase 'cover our learn' is incorrect; it should be 'cover or learn'. Also, 'all geographic things' is vague but acceptable; the main issue is the conjunction and verb form.

× No, never. I never want to be a geographic teacher because I don't like geographic subject.

✓ No, never. I never want to be a geography teacher because I don't like the geography subject.

The noun form 'geography' should be used instead of the adjective 'geographic'. Also, 'geography subject' should be preceded by the definite article 'the'.

× Yeah, it might be quite interesting to learn about a geographic of other countries, but I'm not interested to learn geographic things.

✓ Yeah, it might be quite interesting to learn about the geography of other countries, but I'm not interested in learning geographic things.

The phrase 'a geographic of other countries' is incorrect; it should be 'the geography of other countries'. Also, 'interested to learn' should be 'interested in learning' to use the correct preposition and verb form.