地理— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和单复数形式，并且避免无关内容。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持观点。

範例: I like geography because it helps me understand how the Earth works and how people live in different areas. For example, learning about Africa taught me about its diverse cultures and environments.

建議: 回答中表达不够清晰，部分词汇使用不当。建议用更准确的词汇表达观点，并且结构更清晰，避免重复。

範例: Yes, I think geography is very useful because it helps me develop new skills and understand the world better. It also gives me knowledge about different places and cultures.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和单复数形式，避免拼写错误，并且用简单句表达清楚自己的经历和兴趣。

範例: Yes, I studied geography in high school. I was curious about how the Earth moves and how people in Africa and Europe live in different regions.

建議: 回答表达不够流畅，语法和词汇使用有误。建议用简单明了的句子表达自己的观点，并说明原因。

範例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I find the subject very complex and difficult to explain to others.

建議: 回答内容较好，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议注意单复数和冠词的使用，句子结构更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I want to learn more about the geography of countries like America and the UK. I am interested in their different climates and cultures.

× e-mail pin your geography is very useful subject and it can give me very much information about how the earth goes and how the other people in different area lives.

✓ Geography is a very useful subject and it can give me a lot of information about how the earth moves and how other people in different areas live.

这里“subject”前缺少冠词“a”，且“area”应为复数“areas”，因为指多个地区；动词“lives”应与复数主语“people”一致，改为“live”。

× And for example when I didn't get approach to the geographic and maybe didn't know some more other Africa.

✓ For example, when I didn't have access to geography, I maybe didn't know more about Africa.

“didn't get approach to the geographic”表达不正确，应使用“didn't have access to geography”；“geographic”应为名词“geography”；“some more other Africa”表达混乱，应改为“more about Africa”。

× Yes, of course geography can separate you from the others be 'cause it's like very deep subject and it can also expand the repertoire of your abilities and skills and also the geography can give you more information on your word.

✓ Yes, of course geography can separate you from others because it's a very deep subject and it can also expand the repertoire of your abilities and skills. Also, geography can give you more information about your world.

“the others”应为“others”，不需要定冠词；“be 'cause”应为“because”；“very deep subject”前缺少冠词“a”；“your word”应为“your world”。

× Yes, of course in my high school I can learn more information about this geography subject and also I wondered how the earth go around and how they are skate his cell flotation.

✓ Yes, of course in my high school I learned more information about this geography subject and also I wondered how the earth goes around and how they skate his cell flotation.

“can learn”时态不对，应为过去时“learned”；“how the earth go around”主谓不一致，应为“goes”；“how they are skate his cell flotation”语法错误，句意不明，建议重写或删除。

× And also I wondered about how the Africa and how the European people lived in different errors.

✓ And also I wondered about how Africa and European people lived in different areas.

“the Africa”前不需要定冠词；“errors”应为“areas”，表示地区。

× No, because actually I saw its geography so very complex subject and I didn't say deep. Information about it and I can't be the teachers to get others understand this subject, so I don't think it's a good opinion.

✓ No, because actually I saw geography as a very complex subject and I didn't say deep information about it. I can't be a teacher to help others understand this subject, so I don't think it's a good idea.

“its geography”应为“geography”；“so very complex subject”前缺少冠词“a”；“didn't say deep. Information”表达不通顺，应改为“didn't have deep information”；“the teachers”应为“a teacher”；“get others understand”应为“help others understand”；“good opinion”应为“good idea”。

× Yes, of course, I will try my best to know more about the geographies like in America or in the UK.

✓ Yes, of course, I will try my best to learn more about the geography of places like America or the UK.

“know more about the geographies”表达不自然，应为“learn more about the geography”；“in America or in the UK”前冠词使用不当，“the UK”前需要定冠词，“America”不需要。

× I want to know why there are some different climates in here, there's hometown and I also like to know about some more deeply informations like the cultures and some others.

✓ I want to know why there are different climates here, in my hometown, and I also want to know more detailed information like cultures and others.

“some different climates”中“some”可省略；“in here”应为“here”；“there's hometown”语法错误，应为“in my hometown”；“some more deeply informations”中“informations”不可数，应为“information”，“deeply”应为形容词“detailed”；“some others”表达不清，应为“others”。