地理— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cavabınızda təbii və aydın ifadələrdən istifadə edin, artıq sözlərdən qaçının və cümlələrinizi daha qısa və məzmunlu edin. Məsələn, 'I used to enjoy geography at school because I liked learning about maps and capitals, but now I don't have much interest in it.' kimi ifadə daha təbii və effektiv olar.

範例: I used to enjoy geography at school because I liked learning about maps and capitals, but now I don't have much interest in it.

建議: Cümlələrinizi daha düzgün qurun və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin. Məsələn, 'Yes, absolutely. Knowing your own country's geography is useful because it helps you understand directions and locations better.' kimi daha aydın və məntiqli ifadə istifadə edin.

範例: Yes, absolutely. Knowing your own country's geography is useful because it helps you understand directions and locations better.

建議: Cümlələrinizi daha təbii və qrammatik cəhətdən düzgün edin. Məsələn, 'Yes, I had geography lessons at school, which helped me understand how the world is interconnected and how landscapes are formed.' kimi ifadə daha yaxşıdır.

範例: Yes, I had geography lessons at school, which helped me understand how the world is interconnected and how landscapes are formed.

建議: Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və aydın edin, qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin. Məsələn, 'I would love to be a geography teacher, but it's too late to change my major. Although my future career is not related to geography, I still enjoy learning about maps.' kimi ifadə daha təbii olar.

範例: I would love to be a geography teacher, but it's too late to change my major. Although my future career is not related to geography, I still enjoy learning about maps.

建議: Cümlələrinizi daha düzgün və aydın qurun, artıq sözlərdən qaçının və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin. Məsələn, 'Yes, of course. I want to learn more about other countries, especially those where I plan to study. Studying their cultures will enhance my knowledge.' kimi ifadə daha yaxşıdır.

範例: Yes, of course. I want to learn more about other countries, especially those where I plan to study. Studying their cultures will enhance my knowledge.

× I was into in like I was into maps and like reading maps and capitals, learning about landscapes.

✓ I was into maps and reading maps and capitals, learning about landscapes.

The phrase 'was into in like I was into' is redundant and incorrect. The correct expression is 'was into' followed by the object or activity. Remove the extra 'in like I was into' to improve clarity and grammar.

× But nowadays I didn't.

✓ But nowadays I don't.

The sentence refers to the present time ('nowadays'), so the present tense 'don't' should be used instead of the past tense 'didn't' to maintain tense consistency.

× Especially knowing about your own country's geography, cause having a knowledge of where you're from and can help you to understand better about everything, directions, locations.

✓ Especially knowing about your own country's geography, because having knowledge of where you're from can help you understand everything better, including directions and locations.

The phrase 'cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'because' for clarity. 'Having a knowledge' should be 'having knowledge' without 'a'. The phrase 'can help you to understand better about everything' is awkward; 'help you understand everything better' is correct. Also, 'directions, locations' should be connected properly.

× Yes, when I was at school I we had a geography lesson and it helped me understand how the world is really connected, like interconnected, and how the landscapes are shaped.

✓ Yes, when I was at school, we had a geography lesson and it helped me understand how the world is really connected, like interconnected, and how landscapes are shaped.

The phrase 'I we had' is incorrect; it should be 'we had'. Also, a comma after 'school' improves readability. 'The landscapes' can be simplified to 'landscapes' unless referring to specific ones.

× I would really love to be a geography teacher but it's too late changing my major as my carrier.

✓ I would really love to be a geography teacher but it's too late to change my major as my career.

The phrase 'too late changing' is incorrect; it should be 'too late to change'. Also, 'carrier' is a misspelling of 'career'.

× Future carrier pass don't suit with geography but I still enjoy learning about learning about maps.

✓ A future career path doesn't suit geography but I still enjoy learning about maps.

'Future carrier pass' is incorrect; it should be 'future career path'. 'Don't' should be 'doesn't' to agree with the singular subject 'path'. The phrase 'suit with' should be 'suit'. Also, 'learning about learning about' is repetitive; remove the duplicate.

× Yes of course I would.

✓ Yes, of course I will.

The question is about future intention ('Will you learn more...'), so the correct modal verb is 'will' instead of 'would'.

× I want to learn about more about other countries special the ones I want to study.

✓ I want to learn more about other countries, especially the ones I want to study in.

The phrase 'learn about more about' is redundant; 'learn more about' is correct. 'Special' should be 'especially'. Also, 'the ones I want to study' needs a preposition 'in' to clarify studying in those countries.

× I want to study my masters degree because learning about their cultures they can enhance my knowledgeable.

✓ I want to study for my master's degree because learning about their cultures can enhance my knowledge.

The phrase 'study my masters degree' is incorrect; it should be 'study for my master's degree'. 'They can enhance my knowledgeable' is incorrect; 'they' is unnecessary and 'knowledgeable' is an adjective, the noun 'knowledge' is correct here.