地理— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达对地理的喜爱，并举例说明。

範例: I really enjoy studying geography. For example, during my free time, I like reading extra books about geography to learn more. Sometimes, I share interesting facts with my friends, and they think I know a lot about the subject.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简洁表达观点，并用具体例子支持观点，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: In my opinion, geography is very useful. For instance, if we get lost in the wilderness, knowing some geography can help us find our way and solve problems.

建議: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，建议用简洁的句子表达学习经历，并具体说明学到了什么知识。

範例: I have studied geography for several years in senior high school. My teacher taught me many useful facts and skills, and I learned a lot from her lessons.

建議: 回答表达不流畅且有重复，建议直接回答问题并说明原因，避免语法错误和重复。

範例: Although I find geography interesting, I do not want to be a geography teacher. I prefer to study law because it is my passion.

建議: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子连贯，并具体说明原因。

範例: I plan to learn more about the geography of my own country in the future. Since I have foreign friends who visit Taiwan, I want to share useful information about my country with them when they travel here.

× I love the Geo geography lads.

✓ I love geography.

这里的'lads'是复数形式，但句意中不需要复数，且'Geo geography lads'表达不清，应该直接说'I love geography'。

× when I when I am in a leisure type I wear with some extra curricular books about geography to broaden my horizons

✓ when I have leisure time, I read some extracurricular books about geography to broaden my horizons

'wear with'用法错误，应使用动词'read'表示阅读书籍，且'leisure type'应改为'leisure time'。

× sometimes I will show the knowledge of the geography to my friend and they all all think me I I'm good at the geography.

✓ sometimes I will share my knowledge of geography with my friends and they all think I am good at geography.

'show the knowledge to my friend'表达不自然，应改为'share my knowledge with my friends'；'think me'错误，应为'think I am'。

× I think the geography is useful

✓ I think geography is useful

'geography'作为学科名词，通常不加定冠词'the'。

× when when we are in the wild and we are we got lost, we we should know some geography knowledge to help us come to help cope with the problems.

✓ when we are in the wild and get lost, we should know some geography knowledge to help us cope with the problems.

句中重复使用'we'和'come to help'不合适，应简化为'help us cope with'。

× I have learned geography for a few years in my Senior High School and my teacher taught me a lot of lots of useful, useful suggestions and knowledge about the geography and I learned, learn from, learn a lot from my teacher.

✓ I have learned geography for a few years in my Senior High School and my teacher taught me a lot of useful suggestions and knowledge about geography, and I learned a lot from my teacher.

'lots of'重复且多余，'learned, learn from, learn a lot from'表达混乱，应简化为'learned a lot from'。

× although my geography is, is interesting and and fantastic, but I, I will not be able to offer free teacher in the future.

✓ although geography is interesting and fantastic, I will not be able to be a geography teacher in the future.

'offer free teacher'表达错误，应为'be a geography teacher'。

× because because my I, I love, I love a lot. I love studying law.

✓ because I love studying law a lot.

句子重复且结构混乱，应简化为'because I love studying law a lot'。

× I think I will learn more about the geography in my country in the future

✓ I think I will learn more about the geography of my country in the future

'in my country'应改为'of my country'，表示所属关系。

× if they come to Taiwan traveling and I will tell and I should tell them a lot of the.

✓ if they come to Taiwan for traveling, I will tell them a lot about it.

句子结构不完整，'tell and I should tell them a lot of the'不通顺，应改为'I will tell them a lot about it'。