地理— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит ошибки в использовании слов и структуре предложений, а также не соответствует вопросу. Вы говорите о гольфе, хотя вопрос про географию. Рекомендуется отвечать прямо на вопрос, использовать правильные слова и избегать лишних деталей.

範例: I really enjoy geography because it helps me learn about different cultures and plan my travels. However, I find reading topographic maps quite challenging.

建議: Ваш ответ понятен, но содержит ошибки в словах и немного нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать более точные слова и связки для улучшения связности и ясности.

範例: Yes, I believe geography is very useful because it teaches us how to protect the environment. For example, we learn about endangered species that need our help.

建議: В ответе есть грамматические ошибки и нечеткая структура. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена и более связные предложения.

範例: Yes, I am still in school, and geography is a compulsory subject that we study every year.

建議: Ответ содержит много пауз и разговорных слов, а также грамматические ошибки. Рекомендуется говорить более уверенно, избегать слов-паразитов и строить предложения грамотно.

範例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I don't enjoy working with children, and the salaries for teachers in my country are quite low.

建議: Ответ понятен, но можно улучшить связность и добавить детали. Рекомендуется использовать связующие слова и более точные выражения.

範例: Yes, I plan to continue studying the geography of other countries on my own after I finish high school because I find it very interesting.

× I'm basically love learning about new cultures and this helps me to plan my traveling.

✓ I basically love learning about new cultures and this helps me to plan my traveling.

The adverb 'basically' should modify the verb 'love' directly without 'am'. The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm basically love' which is ungrammatical. Correct form is 'I basically love'.

× But I hate the topology maps.

✓ But I hate the topography maps.

The word 'topology' is incorrect in this context; the correct term is 'topography' when referring to maps showing physical features. Also, 'the' is unnecessary before plural 'topography maps' unless specifying particular maps. However, since the student likely means maps in general, 'the' can be omitted or kept depending on context. Here, keeping 'the' is acceptable if referring to specific maps.

× There we learn how to protect our nature.

✓ There, we learn how to protect our nature.

A comma is needed after 'There' to separate the introductory word from the main clause. Also, 'There' is used correctly to indicate a place or situation where learning occurs.

× Also, we learn about engaged species that we also need to protect.

✓ Also, we learn about endangered species that we also need to protect.

The adjective 'engaged' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'endangered' when referring to species at risk of extinction.

× I'm still go to school and this is a obligated subject that we study every year.

✓ I'm still going to school and this is an obligatory subject that we study every year.

The verb phrase 'I'm still go' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm still going' using the present continuous tense. Also, 'a obligated' is incorrect; the correct article is 'an' before a vowel sound, and the adjective should be 'obligatory'.

× So yes, I learned geography.

✓ So yes, I have learned geography.

Since the student is still in school and the learning is ongoing or recent, the present perfect tense 'have learned' is more appropriate than simple past 'learned'.

× No, being a geography teacher is definitely not for me because I hate getting in touch with uh kids and umm, teachers in my country have uh, bad salaries.

✓ No, being a geography teacher is definitely not for me because I hate getting in touch with kids, and teachers in my country have bad salaries.

The phrase 'getting in touch with uh kids' is informal and the filler words 'uh' and 'umm' should be omitted. The preposition 'with' is correct here. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate the two independent clauses.

× So you know, even my teacher in school told that please don't go job.

✓ So you know, even my teacher at school told me, 'Please don't take that job.'

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Told that please don't go job' is incorrect. It should be 'told me' followed by the direct speech or reported speech. Also, 'go job' is incorrect; likely intended 'take that job' or 'go for that job.'

× Yes, I am planning to learn geography by myself after I quit high school because it's still interesting.

✓ Yes, I am planning to learn geography by myself after I finish high school because it's still interesting.

The phrase 'after I quit high school' is incorrect if the student means to complete school. 'Quit' means to stop or leave prematurely. The correct verb is 'finish' or 'graduate from' high school.