地理— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答缺乏条理，句子结构不够自然，且信息重复。建议直接表达观点，避免冗余，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: I don't like geography because I find it difficult to understand. For example, I often get low scores in exams, which makes me dislike the subject even more.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词组织句子。

範例: I don't think geography is very useful nowadays because we can easily find maps and routes online using our phones.

建議: 回答信息混乱，时态使用不当，句子不够连贯。建议用清晰的时间顺序描述学习经历，并避免重复。

範例: Yes, I started learning geography in grade 7 and studied it for about four years. However, I don't enjoy the subject.

建議: 回答较为完整，但表达略显重复。建议用更丰富的词汇表达原因，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I find the subject uninteresting and challenging. Moreover, I lack the passion to teach others.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，且信息重复。建议简洁表达未来计划，并避免重复和错误。

範例: Maybe in the future I will study American geography, but I'm not sure because I find geography difficult and don't enjoy it.

× I often have a bad exam scores

✓ I often have bad exam scores

这里的'scores'是复数，前面的冠词'a'是单数，导致单复数不一致。应去掉'a'，使主谓一致。

× as the exams last time I get the D of this

✓ as for the last exam, I got a D in it

描述过去的考试成绩，动词应使用过去式'got'，而不是现在式'get'。

× I think it is too difficult for me to study about that

✓ I think it is too difficult for me to study that

动词'study'后不需要介词'about'，直接加宾语即可。

× some because nowadays we can use our mobile to search for the map online

✓ because nowadays we can use our mobile phones to search for maps online

'some'在此句中无意义，应删除；'mobile'应为复数形式'mobile phones'；'the map'应为复数'maps'，表示泛指。

× and also it can search many useful information online

✓ and also we can search for much useful information online

'information'是不可数名词，前面应使用'much'而非'many'；'it'指代不明，改为'we'更合适；'search'后应加介词'for'。

× the next year I don't need to study it

✓ the next year I didn't need to study it

描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去式'didn't need'，而不是现在式'don't need'。

× But this semester I still study geography

✓ But this semester I am still studying geography

描述正在进行的动作，应使用现在进行时'am studying'。

× I studied for around four years

✓ I have studied for around four years

表示从过去持续到现在的动作，应使用现在完成时'have studied'。

× I hate to be a teacher

✓ I hate being a teacher

'hate to do'和'hate doing'都可用，但在表达职业时，通常用动名词形式'hate being'更自然。

× I don't have the passion to be a teacher to teach the students about the new knowledge

✓ I don't have the passion to be a teacher who teaches students new knowledge

原句结构不清晰，改为定语从句'teacher who teaches'更准确；'the new knowledge'中'the'可去掉，知识泛指。

× Maybe in the future I may study the American geography

✓ Maybe in the future I may study American geography

'American geography'前不需要定冠词'the'，因为是泛指。

× So maybe in the future I will sell it, but it is not now now

✓ So maybe in the future I will give it up, but not now

'sell it'用词不当，应为'give it up'表示放弃；'not now now'重复，应简化为'not now'。