地理— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
How do you like geography?
考生
Yes, of course, Geography is one of my favorite subjects because it helps me understand the world better. For example, I enjoy learning about different countries and different cultures, which inspire me to travel and explore new places in the future.
考官
Do you think geography is useful?
考生
Yes, of course. For example, sometimes someone wants to travel, they need to learn about some cultures, about geography, to learn about the place that they want to travel.
考官
Have you ever learned geography?
考生
Yes, of course. During my primary school I learned about geography and I think the culture about geography is very useful and meaningful.
考官
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
考生
Absolutely not, because my major is Chinese literature and I pay more attention on the Chinese literature and in the future I want to be a Chinese teacher.
考官
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
考生
Maybe it's caring because Karen is my favorite place that I want to travel, so I want to learn about something about Korean, for example, their cultures and their interesting places.
評估
總分
文法
× I pay more attention on the Chinese literature and in the future I want to be a Chinese teacher.
✓ I pay more attention to Chinese literature and in the future I want to be a Chinese teacher.
介词短语中，动词短语“pay attention”后应接介词“to”，而不是“on”。正确用法是“pay attention to”。
× Maybe it's caring because Karen is my favorite place that I want to travel, so I want to learn about something about Korean, for example, their cultures and their interesting places.
✓ Maybe it's caring because Korea is my favorite place that I want to travel to, so I want to learn about something about Korean culture, for example, their cultures and their interesting places.
地名后表示目的地应使用介词“to”，如“travel to”。另外，“Karen”应为“Korea”，且“learn about something about Korean”表达不清，应改为“learn about Korean culture”。
× During my primary school I learned about geography and I think the culture about geography is very useful and meaningful.
✓ During my primary school, I learned about geography and I think the culture related to geography is very useful and meaningful.
“culture”在此处应明确指“与地理相关的文化”，原句表达不够准确，需调整以明确含义。
× For example, sometimes someone wants to travel, they need to learn about some cultures, about geography, to learn about the place that they want to travel.
✓ For example, sometimes when someone wants to travel, they need to learn about some cultures and geography to learn about the place they want to travel to.
原句中“someone”与“they”指代不一致，需加“when”引导时间状语从句，使句子更通顺；“travel”后应加介词“to”表示目的地。
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