地理— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid repetition and improve fluency by speaking more smoothly. Also, provide a clearer topic sentence and support it with concise reasons or examples. For instance, instead of repeating "I like geography," you could say, "I enjoy studying geography because it helps me understand the world better, although I sometimes find it challenging to remember all the countries."

範例: I enjoy studying geography because it helps me understand the world better, although I sometimes find it challenging to remember all the countries on the map.

建議: Avoid unclear or confusing phrases like "getting from jewelry." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific. For example, you could say, "Yes, geography is very useful because it helps people travel easily and understand different cultures and traditions."

範例: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps people travel easily and understand different cultures and traditions around the world.

建議: Make sure your sentences are complete and clear. Avoid incomplete thoughts like "Various new friends among the." Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details. For example, "Yes, I studied geography in school. Although I sometimes forget place names, I enjoyed learning about different cultures and traditions, which helped me make new friends."

範例: Yes, I studied geography in school. Although I sometimes forget place names, I enjoyed learning about different cultures and traditions, which helped me make new friends.

建議: Avoid unclear phrases like "developer teacher" and incomplete sentences. Respond directly with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. For example, "I don't want to be a geography teacher because I find it hard to remember places, but I respect those who teach the subject."

範例: I don't want to be a geography teacher because I find it hard to remember places, but I respect those who teach the subject and share their knowledge.

建議: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like "I will start restricting." Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. For example, "Yes, I would love to learn more about the geography of other countries because it will improve my knowledge and understanding of different cultures, which will positively influence my personality."

範例: Yes, I would love to learn more about the geography of other countries because it will improve my knowledge and understanding of different cultures, which will positively influence my personality.

× Well, speaking about geography, I I like geography, but I find it difficult to remember, so sometimes I might forget where a particular country is in this map.

✓ Well, speaking about geography, I like geography, but I find it difficult to remember, so sometimes I might forget where a particular country is on this map.

The sentence contains a repeated word 'I I' which is a sentence structure error. Also, the preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'map'; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to locations on a map.

× sometimes I might forget where a particular country is in this map.

✓ sometimes I might forget where a particular country is on this map.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'map'. The correct preposition is 'on' when referring to locations on a map.

× But yes, I will I I like this subject.

✓ But yes, I like this subject.

The phrase 'I will I I like' is incorrect and redundant. The sentence should be simplified to 'I like this subject' to be grammatically correct.

× Those who have good knowledge of geography, they can even go to any particular place, travel to a particular place smoothly without much hassle.

✓ Those who have good knowledge of geography can even travel to any particular place smoothly without much hassle.

The sentence has redundancy with 'they' after 'Those who'. Also, 'go to any particular place, travel to a particular place' is repetitive. The sentence is corrected by removing redundancy and repetition.

× And it's great to learn about different cultures and tradition that we get it from getting from jewelry.

✓ And it's great to learn about different cultures and traditions that we get from traveling.

The phrase 'get it from getting from jewelry' is incorrect and unclear. Likely, the intended meaning is 'get from traveling'. Also, 'tradition' should be plural 'traditions' to match 'cultures'.

× different cultures and tradition

✓ different cultures and traditions

The noun 'tradition' should be plural 'traditions' to agree with the plural noun 'cultures'.

× Yes I have learned geography in my school days.

✓ Yes, I learned geography in my school days.

The phrase 'have learned' is less appropriate here because the time frame 'in my school days' refers to a finished past period. Simple past tense 'learned' is more suitable.

× I enjoy learning different culture, tradition also.

✓ I enjoy learning about different cultures and traditions also.

Both 'culture' and 'tradition' should be plural to match the context. Also, 'learning different cultures and traditions' is better expressed as 'learning about different cultures and traditions'.

× Various new friends among the.

✓ I made various new friends among them.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb and object. Adding 'I made' and 'them' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Actually, I would say I won't be able to be a developer teacher because my geography is really bad.

✓ Actually, I would say I won't be able to be a geography teacher because my geography is really bad.

The phrase 'developer teacher' is incorrect and likely a misstatement. It should be 'geography teacher' to match the context.

× I can't remember the places, but I I. Appreciate the geography teacher and all those people who are teaching geography and spreading.

✓ I can't remember the places, but I appreciate the geography teachers and all those people who teach geography and spread knowledge.

The sentence has a repeated 'I I.' and ends abruptly with 'spreading'. It is corrected by removing repetition and completing the sentence meaningfully.

× Well, I would say I will definitely love to learn about geography or different countries.

✓ Well, I would say I will definitely love learning about the geography of different countries.

The phrase 'love to learn about geography or different countries' is awkward. Using 'love learning about the geography of different countries' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× It help, it will help me because it will help me to improve my knowledge, gain knowledge of different cultures, tradition and it will definitely have a good impact on my personality.

✓ It will help me because it will improve my knowledge, help me gain knowledge of different cultures and traditions, and definitely have a good impact on my personality.

The sentence has a fragment 'It help,' and is repetitive. It is corrected by removing the fragment and restructuring for clarity and conciseness. Also, 'tradition' should be plural 'traditions'.

× gain knowledge of different cultures, tradition

✓ gain knowledge of different cultures and traditions

The noun 'tradition' should be plural 'traditions' to agree with the plural noun 'cultures'.

× I will start restricting.

✓ I will start practicing.

The phrase 'start restricting' is incorrect and does not fit the context. Likely, the intended word is 'practicing' or 'studying'.