地理— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应避免语法错误和重复表达，保持语言自然流畅。可以简洁明了地表达对地理的兴趣，并适当说明原因，避免负面评价影响整体印象。

範例: I really enjoy geography because it allows me to learn about different places around the world, which broadens my perspective. Although I found some topics challenging in high school, I still find the subject fascinating.

建議: 回答应更清晰具体，避免模糊和不连贯的表达。可以举具体例子说明地理的实用性，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, geography is very useful in daily life. For example, it helps us understand time zones and navigate different environments. Although I find some aspects difficult, I hope to improve my skills in the future.

建議: 回答应避免语法错误，保持句子简洁。可以直接回答问题并补充具体细节，表达对地理的兴趣和学习经历。

範例: Yes, I studied geography as a compulsory subject in primary and high school. Although I found it challenging, I still find it fascinating and hope to learn more in the future.

建議: 回答应更流畅，避免重复和语法错误。可以明确表达愿望并说明原因，同时保持积极态度。

範例: Yes, if I had the opportunity, I would like to try being a geography teacher because I want to explore more knowledge in this field. However, I know it might be challenging since I struggled with geography in high school.

建議: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节，使内容更具体。

範例: Yes, I find the geography of different countries very interesting. For example, learning about the habitats of various animals helps me understand how they adapt and why certain species live in specific areas, which I find fascinating.

× I find the subject of geography is super interesting 'cause you can see many different places in the world.

✓ I find the subject of geography super interesting because you can see many different places in the world.

句中“find”后面不需要再用“is”，应直接用形容词“super interesting”来描述“the subject of geography”。这是动词现在分词用法错误，正确用法是动词后直接接形容词。

× But I to be honest, I didn't do well in geography when I was a high school student.

✓ But to be honest, I didn't do well in geography when I was a high school student.

“I to be honest”中“我”多余，应去掉“我”，正确表达是“to be honest”。这是代词使用错误。

× I'm afraid of those, this subject.

✓ I'm afraid of this subject.

“those”和“this”指代不一致，且“those”多余，应去掉。正确用法是“this subject”。这是代词使用错误。

× For example, there's time you can use your knowledge about geography to tell the time and what is according to surroundings.

✓ For example, there are times when you can use your knowledge about geography to tell the time and what is according to the surroundings.

“there's time”应为复数“there are times”，且缺少“when”引导时间状语从句，另外“according to surroundings”前应加定冠词“the”。这是“there be”结构错误和冠词使用错误。

× what is according to surroundings.

✓ what is according to the surroundings.

“surroundings”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指周围环境。

× But I think As for me, it's a little bit difficult, but hopefully I'll grasp that skill in the future.

✓ But I think, as for me, it's a little bit difficult, but hopefully I'll grasp that skill in the future.

“As for me”前应加逗号，且首字母小写，表示插入语。

× Yes, it is a compulsory lessons during our primary school and high schools, but unfortunately I didn't do well with that.

✓ Yes, it is a compulsory lesson during our primary school and high schools, but unfortunately I didn't do well with that.

“lessons”应为单数“lesson”，因为前面用的是“it is”，主谓不一致。

× Yes, it is a compulsory lessons during our primary school and high schools,

✓ Yes, it is a compulsory lesson during our primary school and high school,

“high schools”应改为单数“high school”，与前文保持一致。

× I felt geography very difficult and I hope in the future I might learn more about geography 'cause I still believe it is very fascinating.

✓ I felt geography was very difficult and I hope in the future I might learn more about geography because I still believe it is very fascinating.

“felt”后应接形容词或形容词短语，缺少“was”；“'cause”应正式写为“because”。

× Yeah, if I have the chance, I would say I, I'd like to give it a try to be a geography teacher and to experience like explore different more geography knowledge, but in it might not be practical because I didn't do well in geography when I was a student in high school.

✓ Yeah, if I have the chance, I would say I'd like to give it a try to be a geography teacher and to experience and explore more different geography knowledge, but it might not be practical because I didn't do well in geography when I was a student in high school.

“experience like explore”结构不正确，应改为“experience and explore”；“different more”词序错误，应为“more different”；“in it might”多余“in”，应去掉。

× Yes, I think the geography of umm, different areas in the world are really interesting and fascinating.

✓ Yes, I think the geography of different areas in the world is really interesting and fascinating.

“the geography”是单数，谓语动词应用单数“is”。

× You've got to see many animals live in the different places and you can learn how they grow and why the specific species live here.

✓ You've got to see many animals living in different places and you can learn how they grow and why specific species live here.

“live”应改为现在分词“living”表示正在发生的动作；“the different places”中“the”多余，应去掉；“the specific species”中“the”多余，应去掉。