地理— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih natural dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih langsung dan hindari pengulangan kata seperti 'around'. Tambahkan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

範例: I like geography because it allows me to learn about different seasons and cultures around the world, especially in my country, Indonesia. Moreover, it helps me understand the places I love to travel to.

建議: Jawaban kurang lengkap dan terputus. Perbaiki kalimat agar lebih jelas dan lengkap. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dan hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

範例: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps us understand the weather, seasons, and cultural aspects of different places. This knowledge can make traveling more enjoyable and informative.

建議: Perbaiki penggunaan tata bahasa seperti 'I've ever learned' menjadi 'I learned'. Buat kalimat lebih singkat dan jelas dengan struktur yang baik. Tambahkan kata penghubung untuk kelancaran jawaban.

範例: I learned geography in junior high school about 10 years ago, and a little in senior high school. Although I didn't like the subject much, I appreciate it because it helps me when I travel.

建議: Jawaban tidak jelas dan berulang. Perbaiki tata bahasa dan buat kalimat yang jelas dan langsung. Hindari pengulangan dan lengkapi kalimat agar maknanya tersampaikan dengan baik.

範例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher or any kind of teacher because I am not confident that I can remember all the geography knowledge well.

建議: Perbaiki pengulangan kata dan tata bahasa. Buat kalimat lebih singkat dan jelas dengan menggunakan kata penghubung yang tepat. Lengkapi kalimat agar jawaban lebih efektif.

範例: Yes, I will learn more about the geography of other countries because I want to travel the world. Knowing the geography helps me prepare, such as checking the weather forecast before I go.

× I think I like geography by travel around the world, around Indonesia, my country, and learn about the season of that place, the social in that place.

✓ I think I like geography by traveling around the world, around Indonesia, my country, and learning about the season of that place, the social aspects in that place.

The verbs 'travel' and 'learn' should be in the '-ing' form after 'by' to indicate the method or way of liking geography. Using the base form is incorrect here.

× I think I like geography by travel around the world, around Indonesia, my country, and learn about the season of that place, the social in that place.

✓ I think I like geography by traveling around the world, around Indonesia, my country, and learning about the seasons and the social aspects of those places.

The preposition 'of' is incorrectly used with 'season' and 'social'. It should be 'seasons and social aspects of those places' to correctly express belonging or relation.

× And yeah, I just love travel.

✓ And yeah, I just love traveling.

After 'love', the verb should be in the '-ing' form to express enjoyment of an activity.

× Geography is really useful because I think that when we learn about geography, we can learn about the weather, the season, the forecast, I mean, and the social culture in there.

✓ Geography is really useful because I think that when we learn about it, we can learn about the weather, the seasons, the forecast, and the social culture there.

The sentence is a bit awkward and redundant. 'The season' should be plural 'seasons'. Also, 'in there' is better as 'there'. 'I mean' is unnecessary and interrupts the flow.

× I've ever learned geography when I was in junior high school, it happened about 10 years ago, and in my Senior High School I just learned it a little and I don't really like that subject actually.

✓ I've learned geography when I was in junior high school, about 10 years ago, and in my Senior High School I just learned a little, and I don't really like that subject actually.

'I've ever learned' is incorrect; 'I've learned' or 'I learned' is correct. Also, 'just learned it a little' is better as 'just learned a little'.

× No, I don't really want to be geography teacher.

✓ No, I don't really want to be a geography teacher.

The article 'a' is missing before 'geography teacher'. Also, 'geography teacher' is a countable noun and needs an article.

× Actually I don't really want I don't really want to be a teacher, but geography teacher No one 100% no, because I don't really I I'm sure if I can remember about the geography in.

✓ Actually, I don't really want to be a teacher, especially not a geography teacher, 100% no, because I'm not sure if I can remember the geography well enough.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I will learn more about the geography of other countries because I I think that I want to travel around the world so that I must learn.

✓ Yes, I will learn more about the geography of other countries because I think that I want to travel around the world, so I must learn.

The sentence is mostly correct but has a repeated 'I'. Removing the extra 'I' improves clarity.

× I have to learn about its Geo geography so that I can prepare if I go to there like watch the forecast or.

✓ I have to learn about its geography so that I can prepare if I go there, like watching the forecast or other things.

'Go to there' is incorrect; it should be 'go there'. Also, 'like watch' should be 'like watching' to maintain parallel structure after 'like'.