地理— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения, что снижает его естественность и эффективность. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, избегать повторов и структурировать ответ с четким вступлением и поддерживающими деталями.

範例: I really like geography because my teacher introduced me to it when I was young. Since then, I have enjoyed learning about different countries and cultures around the world.

建議: Ответ содержит неточности и нечеткие формулировки, а также повторения. Следует использовать более точные выражения и связующие слова для логичности, а также конкретизировать, почему география полезна.

範例: Yes, I think geography is very useful because it helps us understand the environment and how different natural sciences like biology and physics relate to the Earth. Also, it teaches practical skills like reading maps and finding directions.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена, избегать повторов и строить предложение логично с использованием связующих слов.

範例: Yes, I have studied geography. Currently, I am attending university where the geography faculty has many experienced and knowledgeable teachers.

建議: Ответ немного повторяется и содержит паузы. Рекомендуется говорить более уверенно, избегать слов-паразитов и структурировать ответ с четким объяснением причин.

範例: Yes, I want to be a geography teacher because it has been my dream since childhood. I enjoy teaching children about the world, and I plan to work at a school next year.

建議: Ответ содержит повторения и грамматические ошибки. Рекомендуется использовать более точные выражения, избегать повторов и связать идеи логично с помощью связующих слов.

範例: Definitely yes, because one day I want to travel to other countries and learn about their geography. Understanding different places helps me know more about the world.

× I am crazy about geography because when I was young my teacher studied me geography and after that I started learning geography because you know in the geography you can learn a lot of things about about the world.

✓ I am crazy about geography because when I was young my teacher taught me geography and after that I started learning geography because you know in geography you can learn a lot of things about the world.

The verb 'studied' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'taught' when referring to teaching someone. Also, 'in the geography' is incorrect; 'in geography' is the proper phrase. The error is related to the use of the past tense verb and preposition usage.

× Actually yes, because when you study geography you can learn a lot of subjects such as biology, chemistry, physics or another science, sciences and when you study geography you can find your way.

✓ Actually yes, because when you study geography you can learn a lot of subjects such as biology, chemistry, physics, or other sciences, and when you study geography you can find your way.

The phrase 'another science, sciences' is incorrect; it should be 'other sciences' to correctly refer to multiple sciences. Also, a comma is needed before 'or' in a list. This is an error in quantifier and plural usage.

× Yes, I learned geography and nowadays I'm studied at university and my and in the geography faculty there are a lot of teachers who really good at their job in in geography.

✓ Yes, I learned geography and nowadays I'm studying at university and in the geography faculty there are a lot of teachers who are really good at their job in geography.

The phrase 'I'm studied' is incorrect; the correct present continuous form is 'I'm studying'. Also, 'who really good' lacks the verb 'are'. These are errors in present tense usage and sentence structure.

× Yes, I learned geography and nowadays I'm studied at university and my and in the geography faculty there are a lot of teachers who really good at their job in in geography.

✓ Yes, I learned geography and nowadays I'm studying at university and in the geography faculty there are a lot of teachers who are really good at their job in geography.

The repeated preposition 'in in' is incorrect; only one 'in' is needed. Also, 'at their job in geography' is correct prepositional usage. The error is in preposition repetition.

× Actually yes, because uh, geography teacher is my childhood dream and nowadays I'm trying to be a geography teacher because I like teaching about geography for children and I try to work in the school next year.

✓ Actually yes, because being a geography teacher is my childhood dream and nowadays I'm trying to be a geography teacher because I like teaching geography to children and I plan to work in a school next year.

The phrase 'geography teacher is my childhood dream' lacks the gerund 'being' to function as a subject. Also, 'teaching about geography for children' is better expressed as 'teaching geography to children'. 'Try to work in the school' is better as 'plan to work in a school'. These are errors in verb form and preposition usage.

× I say definitely yes because, uh, no one day I will, I will go to another countries for traveling and learn, learn about these countries because geographies, you know about the world, you have to.

✓ I definitely say yes because one day I will go to other countries to travel and learn about these countries because geography helps you know about the world, you have to.

The phrase 'no one day' is incorrect; it should be 'one day'. 'Another countries' is incorrect plural usage; 'other countries' is correct. 'For traveling' should be 'to travel'. 'Geographies' is incorrect; 'geography' is uncountable here. These are errors in future tense, plural usage, and preposition usage.