地理— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 'I like science to deal with volcano' 대신에 'I like science, especially studying volcanoes'와 같이 명확하고 자연스럽게 표현하는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 답변이 너무 짧고 구체적인 이유가 부족합니다.

範例: I don't like geography very much, but I enjoy science, especially studying volcanoes because they are fascinating natural phenomena.

建議: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 'To make person comfortable and convenient' 대신에 'It helps people live comfortably and conveniently'와 같이 자연스럽게 표현해야 합니다. 또한, 이유를 좀 더 구체적으로 설명하는 것이 좋습니다.

範例: Yes, I think geography is useful because it helps people live comfortably and conveniently by providing information for navigation and understanding the environment.

建議: 문법과 표현이 부자연스럽고 혼란스럽습니다. 'I run geography'는 잘못된 표현이며, 'I studied geography at university when I was 20 years old'와 같이 수정해야 합니다. 또한, 'Junior School'의 의미가 불분명하므로 명확하게 설명하는 것이 필요합니다.

範例: Yes, I studied geography at my university when I was 20 years old. Before that, I also learned geography in junior high school.

建議: 답변은 비교적 명확하지만, 'I like song and play guitar' 대신에 'I like singing and playing the guitar'와 같이 자연스럽게 표현하는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 답변을 조금 더 풍부하게 만드는 것이 좋습니다.

範例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. I want to be a singer because I enjoy singing and playing the guitar.

建議: 답변이 모순적이고 명확하지 않습니다. 'I will learn more about other countries'와 'I just want to know my city'가 상충됩니다. 따라서, 답변을 일관성 있게 하고 구체적인 이유를 덧붙이는 것이 좋습니다.

範例: Yes, I want to learn more about the geography of other countries, but I am especially interested in the geography of my city, Sejong City, because I want to understand it better.

× I like science to deal with volcano.

✓ I like science to deal with volcanoes.

The word 'volcano' should be plural 'volcanoes' because it refers to volcanoes in general, not just one. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× I like science to deal with volcano.

✓ I like science to deal with volcanoes.

The noun 'volcano' should be plural 'volcanoes' to correctly refer to multiple volcanoes. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× Yes, geography is. To make person comfortable and convenient because geography can use for making navigation.

✓ Yes, geography is useful. It makes people comfortable and convenient because geography can be used for navigation.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'To make person comfortable and convenient' is incorrect; it should be 'It makes people comfortable and convenient.' Also, 'geography can use for making navigation' should be 'geography can be used for navigation.' This is a sentence structure error (ID 26).

× Yes, I run geography in my university when I was 20 years old.

✓ Yes, I studied geography at my university when I was 20 years old.

The verb 'run' is incorrect in this context; the past tense 'studied' is appropriate to describe past learning. Also, 'in my university' should be 'at my university.' This is a past tense issue (ID 5) and preposition issue (ID 11).

× Yes, I run geography in my university when I was 20 years old.

✓ Yes, I studied geography at my university when I was 20 years old.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate the place of study. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× In my university, I learned the geography in Junior School.

✓ At my university, I learned geography in Junior School.

The preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to the university. Also, 'the geography' should be 'geography' without 'the.' This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) and article error (ID 22).

× In my university, I learned the geography in Junior School.

✓ At my university, I learned geography in Junior School.

The definite article 'the' before 'geography' is unnecessary because 'geography' is an uncountable noun here. This is an article error (ID 22).

× I want to be a singer because I like song and play guitar.

✓ I want to be a singer because I like songs and playing the guitar.

The noun 'song' should be plural 'songs' to indicate general liking. Also, 'play guitar' should be 'playing the guitar' to correctly express the activity. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and verb + -ing form (ID 8).

× I want to be a singer because I like song and play guitar.

✓ I want to be a singer because I like songs and playing the guitar.

The verb 'play' should be in the gerund form 'playing' when used after 'like' to express enjoyment of an activity. This is a verb + -ing form issue (ID 8).

× I just want to know the geography of my city of Sejong city.

✓ I just want to know the geography of my city, Sejong.

The phrase 'my city of Sejong city' is redundant. It should be 'my city, Sejong.' Also, 'Sejong city' is better as 'Sejong' when used appositively. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) and sentence structure error (ID 26).