地理— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınız doğal ve samimi ancak bazı ifadeler belirsiz ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Daha açık ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları azaltarak cevabınızı daha etkili hale getirebilirsiniz.

範例: I enjoy geography because it helps me understand different cultures and regions around the world, which is useful since I love to travel.

建議: Cevabınız doğrudan ve anlaşılır ancak daha spesifik detaylar ekleyerek cevabınızı güçlendirebilirsiniz. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi daha akıcı yapabilirsiniz.

範例: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps us understand the environment and cultures around us, which is important for making informed decisions.

建議: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve belirsizlikler var. Daha net ve doğrudan cevaplar verin. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi daha tutarlı hale getirin.

範例: I first learned geography in elementary school with my teacher, who made the subject very interesting for me.

建議: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve ifade sorunları var, bu da anlamı zorlaştırıyor. Daha basit ve net cümleler kurmaya çalışın ve duygularınızı açıkça ifade edin.

範例: No, I don't want to be a teacher because I find it stressful and I prefer other jobs.

建議: Cümleniz karışık ve bazı kelimeler yanlış kullanılmış. Daha açık ve doğru ifadeler kullanarak cevabınızı geliştirin. Bağlaçlarla cümlelerinizi bağlayın.

範例: Yes, I definitely want to continue learning about the geography of other countries because it helps me prepare for my travels and understand different cultures better.

× I like to learn about the new cultures, new genes and the about the. Part of the world.

✓ I like to learn about new cultures, new genes, and different parts of the world.

The original sentence has incorrect and redundant prepositions such as 'the about the' which is grammatically incorrect. The phrase 'the about the' should be removed and replaced with 'different parts of the world' to make the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× Of course it's useful 'cause it's important to know anything about the world that you're living in.

✓ Of course it's useful because it's important to know about the world you live in.

The phrase 'know anything about the world that you're living in' is awkward and incorrect. 'Anything' is unnecessary here and 'that you're living in' can be simplified to 'you live in' for clarity and correctness.

× Firstly, I learned with my teacher back when I was in school and elementary school.

✓ Firstly, I learned with my teacher back when I was in elementary school.

The phrase 'in school and elementary school' is redundant because elementary school is a type of school. It is clearer to say 'in elementary school' only. Also, 'learned with my teacher' is acceptable but could be improved for clarity.

× I guess I started with learning geography with her.

✓ I guess I started learning geography with her.

The phrase 'started with learning' is incorrect; the correct form is 'started learning'. The preposition 'with' after 'started' is unnecessary here.

× No, I don't want to be an UH teacher and any other. Parts of the being teacher 'cause I don't like being a teaching part of it.

✓ No, I don't want to be a teacher or any other kind of teacher because I don't like the teaching part of it.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect phrases such as 'an UH teacher', 'any other. Parts of the being teacher', and 'being a teaching part of it'. These should be corrected to clear and grammatically correct expressions.

× I'm getting very angry and I don't want to be.

✓ I get very angry and I don't want to be.

The present continuous 'I'm getting' is less appropriate here than the simple present 'I get' to express a habitual feeling.

× Please, of course I will be maintain my process, maintain my goals for travel the world, so it is my part of the learning about the countries, cultures and ATC.

✓ Of course, I will maintain my progress and my goals to travel the world, so it is part of learning about countries, cultures, and so on.

The phrase 'I will be maintain' is incorrect; it should be 'I will maintain'. 'Maintain my process' is better as 'maintain my progress'. 'Goals for travel the world' should be 'goals to travel the world'. 'ATC' is unclear and replaced with 'so on' to indicate continuation.