地理— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to give a direct and clear answer to the question first, then add supporting details. Avoid vague phrases like 'solar planet' and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to connect your thoughts smoothly.

範例: I don't like geography very much because I find it less interesting. However, I enjoy learning about the solar system and mysterious aspects of the world, which makes science more fascinating for me.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be more concise and structured. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' to explain your points clearly. Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow.

範例: Yes, I think geography is very useful, especially in the future. For example, it helps us understand weather forecasts and predict natural disasters, which can protect people and the environment.

建議: Try to organise your answer with clear sentences and avoid grammatical errors. Use linking words like 'although' to contrast ideas. Also, be specific about what you liked or disliked.

範例: Yes, I studied geography from 7th to 10th grade. Although I found maps a bit difficult, I really enjoyed learning about the solar system and how the Earth moves.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using better sentence structure and linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

範例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I did not study geography deeply in school, and I did not continue it in higher education, so I prefer to choose another career.

建議: Try to avoid awkward phrases like 'get to know many more knowledge'. Use simpler and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to explain reasons logically.

範例: Yes, I plan to learn more about the geography of other countries because it helps me understand different cultures better, and gaining knowledge is always useful.

× Honestly I don't like geography that much but instead I like solar planet and how the world is controlled.

✓ Honestly I don't like geography that much but instead I like the solar system and how the world is controlled.

The phrase 'solar planet' is incorrect because 'solar' relates to the sun and 'planet' is a noun; the correct term is 'solar system' which refers to the sun and its planets. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'solar system' to specify it.

× Yes, I believe geography is very essential for upcoming years because we can know about what is happening in our world.

✓ Yes, I believe geography is very essential for the upcoming years because we can know what is happening in our world.

The phrase 'know about what is happening' is incorrect; 'know what is happening' is the correct usage. Also, 'the' is needed before 'upcoming years' to specify the time period.

× We can get to know about weather forecast and any, if any bad impact will come or affect our world, we can get to know about it.

✓ We can get to know the weather forecast and, if any bad impact will come or affect our world, we can get to know about it.

The phrase 'get to know about weather forecast' is incorrect; it should be 'get to know the weather forecast' because 'weather forecast' is a specific noun phrase requiring the definite article 'the'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding commas for clarity.

× Yes I have started learning geography when I was in 7th grade till my 10th standard I learned geography and it was very interesting subject.

✓ Yes, I started learning geography when I was in 7th grade and continued until my 10th standard. I learned geography and it was a very interesting subject.

The present perfect tense 'have started' is incorrectly used with a specific past time 'when I was in 7th grade'. Simple past 'started' is appropriate. Also, the sentence is long and needs to be split for clarity. 'Very interesting subject' needs an article 'a' before 'very'.

× Honestly maps were not that good but learning about our solar system and how world moves that are very lovable.

✓ Honestly, maps were not that good but learning about our solar system and how the world moves is very enjoyable.

The phrase 'how world moves that are very lovable' is incorrect. 'World' needs the definite article 'the'. 'That are very lovable' is grammatically incorrect; 'is very enjoyable' is a better expression to convey liking something.

× Honestly, no, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I haven't learned a geography that nicely in my school times and I haven't continued it in my higher education so I prefer not to be.

✓ Honestly, no, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I haven't learned geography that well in my school days and I haven't continued it in my higher education, so I prefer not to be.

The article 'a' before 'geography' is incorrect because 'geography' is an uncountable noun. 'That nicely' should be 'that well' to correctly modify the verb 'learned'. 'School times' is better expressed as 'school days'. A comma is needed before 'so' to separate clauses.

× Yes, I believe I will learn more about the geography of other countries because I can get to know many more knowledge about other countries and gaining knowledge is a good skill.

✓ Yes, I believe I will learn more about the geography of other countries because I can gain much more knowledge about other countries, and gaining knowledge is a good skill.

The phrase 'get to know many more knowledge' is incorrect; 'gain much more knowledge' is the correct collocation. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate independent clauses.