地理— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for better fluency. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct minor grammatical errors.

範例: I really enjoy geography because it was my favourite subject in both junior high and high school. I find the natural landscapes and cultural aspects of different regions fascinating, which makes learning about them very interesting.

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your answer sound more confident. Also, improve sentence clarity and structure by using linking words and completing your thoughts fully.

範例: Yes, I believe geography is very useful, especially when visiting a new place. Understanding the geography of a region helps you to better grasp your surroundings and appreciate the local culture.

建議: Focus on using correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and concise.

範例: Yes, I have studied geography since elementary school and continued learning it through high school. However, now that I am in college, I don't have any specific geography courses.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid informal phrases like 'yeah' and 'maybe in reality'. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I would love to be a geography teacher if the salary was sufficient to support my living. Unfortunately, I believe that teachers' salaries are generally low, so realistically, I might not choose this profession.

建議: Improve sentence structure and grammar, such as subject-verb agreement and plural forms. Use linking words to make your answer more fluent and natural.

範例: Yes, I plan to learn more about the geography of other countries. Recently, I have become very interested in the geography of Japan and Korea because they are nearby countries, and I would love to travel there more often.

× I found that the natural and cultural parts of the region is so fascinating to me.

✓ I found that the natural and cultural parts of the region are so fascinating to me.

The subject 'parts' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× especially when you first been to a place

✓ especially when you first go to a place

The phrase 'when you first been' is incorrect; it should be 'when you first go' to match the present tense context of the sentence.

× knowing the geographies of that region can help you

✓ knowing the geography of that region can help you

The word 'geographies' is usually uncountable or singular when referring to the study of a region; 'geography' is the correct singular form here.

× I have learned geography since elementary school and keep learning and kept learning it to high school

✓ I have learned geography since elementary school and kept learning it through high school

The phrase 'keep learning and kept learning' is inconsistent; 'kept learning' is correct for past continuous action, and 'through high school' is a better preposition.

× I don't have a specific lessons for geography.

✓ I don't have specific lessons in geography.

The phrase 'lessons for geography' is less natural; 'lessons in geography' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× Oh, I think I would love to be if the payment is enough for me to make a living.

✓ Oh, I think I would love to be one if the payment is enough for me to make a living.

The sentence is missing the object 'one' after 'be' to specify the profession.

× I think there are the nearby country for me

✓ I think there are nearby countries for me

'Country' should be plural 'countries' to agree with 'are' and the context of multiple countries.

× I think there are the nearby country for me

✓ I think there is a nearby country for me

Alternatively, if referring to one country, use singular verb 'is' and article 'a' before 'nearby country'.