地理— Part 1 評分報告

建議: คำตอบควรใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องตามหลักไวยากรณ์และหลีกเลี่ยงความซ้ำซ้อน เช่น การใช้ tense ให้เหมาะสม และควรจัดระเบียบประโยคให้ชัดเจนมากขึ้น เช่น เริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักแล้วตามด้วยรายละเอียดที่สนับสนุน พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

範例: I like geography because it shows me how different countries have unique landscapes. For example, some countries have mountains while others have beautiful beaches, which I find fascinating.

建議: คำตอบดีแล้ว แต่ควรระวังการใช้คำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'closest' ควรเป็น 'clothes' และเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค เช่น 'Moreover' หรือ 'In addition'

範例: Absolutely. Geography is very useful, especially when I travel to another country. For example, knowing about the climate helps me choose the right clothes so I can stay comfortable during my trip. Moreover, understanding the geography of a place helps me plan my activities better.

建議: ควรใช้ tense ให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'have learned' แทน 'learned' และปรับประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น พร้อมเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความต่อเนื่อง

範例: I have been learning geography since I was seven. In primary school, we had many geography lessons, and I enjoyed the way my teacher taught us because the classes were always joyful.

建議: ควรปรับโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'good at explaining' แทน 'good to explain' และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

範例: I have never thought about becoming a geography teacher because I am not very good at explaining things clearly. Also, I think teaching is an exceptionally difficult profession.

建議: ควรใช้ tense และโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'when I see' แทน 'when I saw' และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

範例: If you mean studying on my own, I often do that. Sometimes, when I see small tips about geography on YouTube or Instagram, I usually search for more information during my free time.

× I think the special things about geography is give me an interesting feeling when I saw a different countries have a different geography, like some have mountain or some have beach, it feels special for me.

✓ I think the special things about geography are that it gives me an interesting feeling when I see different countries have different geography, like some have mountains or some have beaches; it feels special to me.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'Give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (referring to geography). 'Saw' should be 'see' to match present tense. 'A different countries' is incorrect; 'different countries' is plural without 'a'. 'Mountain' and 'beach' should be plural as 'mountains' and 'beaches' to match 'some'. 'For me' is better expressed as 'to me' in this context.

× I think the special things about geography is give me an interesting feeling when I saw a different countries have a different geography, like some have mountain or some have beach, it feels special for me.

✓ I think the special things about geography are that it gives me an interesting feeling when I see different countries have different geography, like some have mountains or some have beaches; it feels special to me.

The verb 'saw' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'see' because the feeling is ongoing or general.

× For example, knowing about the climate helps me choose the right closest so I can stay comfortable during my trip.

✓ For example, knowing about the climate helps me choose the right clothes so I can stay comfortable during my trip.

The word 'closest' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'clothes' referring to garments.

× In my primary school we have a lot of geography lessons and I like the way the teacher taught me.

✓ In my primary school we had a lot of geography lessons and I liked the way the teacher taught me.

The verb 'have' should be past tense 'had' to match 'taught' which is past tense. 'Like' should be 'liked' to maintain past tense consistency.

× In my primary school we have a lot of geography lessons and I like the way the teacher taught me.

✓ In my primary school we had a lot of geography lessons and I liked the way the teacher taught me.

The sentence refers to past events, so verbs should be in past tense: 'had' and 'liked'.

× I never thought about it before because I'm the person that's not really good to explain something and people can't understand me well.

✓ I never thought about it before because I'm a person who is not really good at explaining things and people can't understand me well.

'The person that's' is incorrect; 'a person who is' is correct. 'Good to explain something' should be 'good at explaining things' to use the correct preposition and gerund form.

× I never thought about it before because I'm the person that's not really good to explain something and people can't understand me well.

✓ I never thought about it before because I'm a person who is not really good at explaining things and people can't understand me well.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect after 'good'; the correct preposition is 'at' followed by a gerund ('explaining').

× If you mean did I study more on my own, I would say I often do that because sometimes when I saw a little tips about geography in YouTube or Instagram, I usually search about it more in my free time.

✓ If you mean whether I study more on my own, I would say I often do that because sometimes when I see little tips about geography on YouTube or Instagram, I usually search for more about it in my free time.

'Did I study' should be 'whether I study' for indirect question. 'Saw' should be 'see' for present tense. 'A little tips' is incorrect; 'little tips' or 'some tips' is correct. 'In YouTube' should be 'on YouTube'. 'Search about it' should be 'search for more about it'.