地理— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer wa natural ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'uh' ya 'somehow' nado no filler wa saisho kara saigo made tsukawanai you ni shite, kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite kudasai. Mata, 'swell composition' ya 'glove' wa machigatte iru node, seikaku na tango o tsukatte kudasai. Kotae wa 3-5 bunshou de, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai.

範例: I like geography because it helps me learn about different places around the world, such as their climates and landscapes. This information is interesting and useful for understanding how people live in various regions.

建議: Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, fukusetsu no jisho o tsukatte rikai o fukameru you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'geography is useful for planning construction projects because it provides important information about climate and land features.' no you ni, rikai shiyasui setsumei o shite kudasai.

範例: Yes, geography is very useful because it provides important information about climate and land features, which helps engineers plan construction projects effectively.

建議: Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, machigatta tango o tsukawanai you ni shite kudasai. 'Longevity' ya 'subsequent geography' nado wa kontekusuto ni awanai node, seikaku na tango o erande kudasai. Mata, kotae wa 3-5 bunshou de, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai.

範例: Yes, I learned geography when I was in Grade 8 at school. We studied about the climate and different landscapes around the world, which I found very interesting.

建議: Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, fukusetsu no jisho o tsukatte rikai o fukameru you ni shite kudasai. 'Empowerment in the landscape' ya 'young spring office' wa machigatte iru node, seikaku na tango o tsukatte kudasai. Kotae wa 3-5 bunshou de, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai.

範例: Yes, I want to be a geography teacher because it is my favorite subject and I enjoy learning about different parts of the world. I would like to share my knowledge with young students.

建議: Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. 'Alright, you belong' nado no fukuzatsu na hyougen wa tsukawanai you ni shite, kotae wa 3-5 bunshou de, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai.

範例: Yes, I want to learn more about the geography of other countries because I do not want to limit my knowledge to just my own country. As a future teacher, I think it is important to understand different countries to answer students' questions.

× I would like to know about lot of places throughout the world, uh, such as, uh, the climate and the swell composition throughout the glove.

✓ I would like to know about a lot of places throughout the world, such as the climate and the swell composition throughout the globe.

The phrase 'lot of' requires an article 'a' before it when used in this context. Also, 'glove' is a typo and should be 'globe'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Uh, this sort of information could be easily assessed in the geography.

✓ Uh, this sort of information could be easily accessed in geography.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'accessed' is the correct verb instead of 'assessed' to convey the intended meaning. Also, 'geography' as a subject does not need 'the' before it.

× Somehow I like the landscape when every.

✓ Somehow, I like the landscape everywhere.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'everywhere' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes, definitely geographies are very beneficial.

✓ Yes, definitely geography is very beneficial.

The noun 'geography' is uncountable and should be singular here. Using 'geographies' is incorrect in this context.

× It is beneficial while mapping for the climate in other engineering purposes such as this sort of information are recorded so that we could make a plan in use for the construction, construction.

✓ It is beneficial for mapping the climate and other engineering purposes, as this sort of information is recorded so that we can make plans for construction.

The sentence had multiple issues: 'while' should be 'for'; 'are' should be 'is' to agree with 'information'; 'make a plan in use' is incorrect and replaced with 'make plans for'; repetition of 'construction' removed for clarity.

× Yes, I have longevity while I was in school, yeah, I would think it was in Grade 8.

✓ Yes, I studied geography while I was in school; I think it was in Grade 8.

'Have longevity' is incorrect; the intended meaning is past study, so 'studied geography' is appropriate. Also, 'would think' is changed to 'think' for clarity.

× There was a subsequent geography in which we were teased about the clove of man, glove of wall or about the climate and the location of the various landscape.

✓ There was a geography subject in which we were taught about the globe, climate, and the location of various landscapes.

'Subsequent geography' is unclear; 'teased' is incorrect and replaced with 'taught'; 'clove of man, glove of wall' are likely typos for 'globe'; 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes'.

× I find that pretty.

✓ I found that pretty interesting.

The sentence is incomplete; adding 'interesting' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× Well, as since geography is one of my favorite subject and I like to know a lot of things about the different part of world, such as the climate, uh, empowerment in the landscape.

✓ Well, since geography is one of my favorite subjects and I like to know a lot of things about different parts of the world, such as the climate and environment in the landscape.

'As since' is redundant; 'subject' should be plural 'subjects'; 'different part of world' should be 'different parts of the world'; 'empowerment' is incorrect and replaced with 'environment'.

× So I would often like to share my knowledge to the young spring office.

✓ So I would often like to share my knowledge with young students.

'Young spring office' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'young students'. Also, 'share knowledge to' should be 'share knowledge with'.

× Yes, of course it is because I do not want to limit my knowledge to the only to the country.

✓ Yes, of course, because I do not want to limit my knowledge only to my country.

The phrase 'to the only to the country' is incorrect; 'only to my country' is the correct expression. Also, adding commas improves readability.

× Alright, you belong.

✓ Alright, you belong here.

The sentence is incomplete; adding 'here' completes the thought. However, the original meaning is unclear; this correction assumes intended meaning.

× Since uh students are very curious about other countries, I would like to be a teacher, so while often want to know about other countries geography.

✓ Since students are very curious about other countries, I would like to be a teacher, so they often want to know about other countries' geography.

'While often want' is incorrect; replaced with 'they often want'. Also, possessive form 'countries' geography' corrected to 'countries' geography'.