地理— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
How do you like geography?
考生
I like the geography because that's the way it I know about the earth, nature and the environment, how to lead to the human.
考官
Do you think geography is useful?
考生
Definitely geography is the most important part in the modern era for the environment, nature, cause in this way I know about that things are good for the future, for the environment and rather really important for individual.
考官
Have you ever learned geography?
考生
Yes, in my school time I take as a subject that time I would learn about geography. They really helped me in my life to understand the environment, climate and weather perfectly.
考官
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
考生
Yes, I want to a geography teacher because I want to teach the children about the yoga because that is the most important for the children. They have to know about the that things in the life because if they can to see.
考官
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
考生
Definitely I learn about the geography for no further countries for my death deeply knowledge because if I have to know that that weather of the other countries that are good for me. If I have to visit at any other country, so I always known about whether of those countries.
評估
總分
Part 1
How do you like geography?
分數: 50.0建議: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਸਹੀ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ ਇਹ ਕੁਝ ਅਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਹੈ। ਤੁਸੀਂ ਸਿੱਧਾ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਤਰੀਕੇ ਨਾਲ ਜਵਾਬ ਦੇਣਾ ਚਾਹੀਦਾ ਹੈ, ਜਿਵੇਂ ਕਿ ਤੁਸੀਂ ਭੂਗੋਲ ਨੂੰ ਕਿਉਂ ਪਸੰਦ ਕਰਦੇ ਹੋ ਅਤੇ ਇਸਦਾ ਮਹੱਤਵ ਕਿਵੇਂ ਹੈ।
範例: I like geography because it helps me understand the earth, nature, and how humans interact with the environment.
Do you think geography is useful?
分數: 45.0建議: ਤੁਹਾਡਾ ਜਵਾਬ ਲੰਬਾ ਅਤੇ ਕੁਝ ਹੱਦ ਤੱਕ ਅਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਹੈ। ਤੁਸੀਂ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਸੰਖੇਪ ਵਿੱਚ ਆਪਣੇ ਵਿਚਾਰ ਪ੍ਰਗਟ ਕਰੋ ਅਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਜਿਵੇਂ ਕਿ 'ਕਿਉਂਕਿ' ਜਾਂ 'ਇਸ ਲਈ'।
範例: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps us understand the environment and make better decisions for the future.
Have you ever learned geography?
分數: 60.0建議: ਤੁਹਾਡਾ ਜਵਾਬ ਸਧਾਰਨ ਹੈ ਪਰ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਵਿੱਚ ਸੁਧਾਰ ਦੀ ਲੋੜ ਹੈ। ਤੁਸੀਂ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਸਹੀ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ ਬਣਾਉਣ ਲਈ ਧਿਆਨ ਦਿਓ।
範例: Yes, I studied geography in school. It helped me understand the environment, climate, and weather better.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
分數: 40.0建議: ਤੁਹਾਡਾ ਜਵਾਬ ਅਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਗਲਤ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਭਰਪੂਰ ਹੈ। ਤੁਸੀਂ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਤੌਰ 'ਤੇ ਆਪਣੇ ਮਨਸੂਬੇ ਬਾਰੇ ਦੱਸੋ ਅਤੇ ਗਲਤ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਸਹੀ ਕਰੋ।
範例: Yes, I want to be a geography teacher because I want to teach children about the importance of geography in life.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
分數: 45.0建議: ਤੁਹਾਡਾ ਜਵਾਬ ਲੰਬਾ ਅਤੇ ਗਲਤ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਭਰਪੂਰ ਹੈ। ਤੁਸੀਂ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਸੰਖੇਪ ਵਿੱਚ ਆਪਣੇ ਵਿਚਾਰ ਪ੍ਰਗਟ ਕਰੋ ਅਤੇ ਗਲਤ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਸਹੀ ਕਰੋ।
範例: Definitely, I want to learn more about the geography of other countries to understand their weather, especially if I plan to visit them.
文法
× I like the geography because that's the way it I know about the earth, nature and the environment, how to lead to the human.
✓ I like geography because that's how I learn about the earth, nature, and the environment, and how they relate to humans.
The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'geography' as it is an uncountable subject here. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.
× I like the geography because that's the way it I know about the earth, nature and the environment, how to lead to the human.
✓ I like geography because that's how I learn about the earth, nature, and the environment, and how they relate to humans.
The sentence is awkward and contains unnecessary words like 'it' and 'how to lead to the human'. It needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Definitely geography is the most important part in the modern era for the environment, nature, cause in this way I know about that things are good for the future, for the environment and rather really important for individual.
✓ Definitely, geography is the most important subject in the modern era for understanding the environment and nature, because this way I know which things are good for the future and the environment, and it is really important for individuals.
Incorrect prepositions like 'part in' should be 'subject in' or 'important in'. Also, 'cause in this way' is incorrect and should be replaced with 'because this way'. The sentence is long and needs punctuation for clarity.
× Definitely geography is the most important part in the modern era for the environment, nature, cause in this way I know about that things are good for the future, for the environment and rather really important for individual.
✓ Definitely, geography is the most important subject in the modern era for understanding the environment and nature, because this way I know which things are good for the future and the environment, and it is really important for individuals.
The word 'individual' should be plural 'individuals' to match the context. Also, 'that things' should be 'which things'.
× Yes, in my school time I take as a subject that time I would learn about geography.
✓ Yes, during my school time I took it as a subject and learned about geography.
The verbs 'take' and 'would learn' are incorrectly used in present and conditional forms instead of past tense 'took' and 'learned'.
× They really helped me in my life to understand the environment, climate and weather perfectly.
✓ It really helped me in my life to understand the environment, climate, and weather perfectly.
The pronoun 'They' is incorrect because 'geography' is singular and should be referred to as 'It'.
× Yes, I want to a geography teacher because I want to teach the children about the yoga because that is the most important for the children.
✓ Yes, I want to be a geography teacher because I want to teach children about yoga, which is very important for them.
The phrase 'want to a geography teacher' is missing the verb 'be'. Also, 'the yoga' should be 'yoga' without 'the'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.
× They have to know about the that things in the life because if they can to see.
✓ They have to know about those things in life because they can see their importance.
'The that things' is incorrect; it should be 'those things'. Also, 'if they can to see' is ungrammatical and needs rephrasing.
× Definitely I learn about the geography for no further countries for my death deeply knowledge because if I have to know that that weather of the other countries that are good for me.
✓ Definitely, I will learn about the geography of other countries to gain deep knowledge because it is good for me to know the weather of other countries.
The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'learn' instead of future 'will learn'. Also, 'for no further countries' and 'my death deeply knowledge' are incorrect phrases.
× Definitely I learn about the geography for no further countries for my death deeply knowledge because if I have to know that that weather of the other countries that are good for me.
✓ Definitely, I will learn about the geography of other countries to gain deep knowledge because it is good for me to know the weather of other countries.
Incorrect prepositions like 'for no further countries' should be 'of other countries'. Also, 'my death deeply knowledge' is incorrect and should be 'deep knowledge'.
× If I have to visit at any other country, so I always known about whether of those countries.
✓ If I have to visit any other country, I will always know about the weather of those countries.
The preposition 'at' after 'visit' is incorrect and should be omitted. Also, 'always known' should be 'always know' to match future intention.
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