花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to form complete sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain why you like lilies specifically.

範例: Yes, I really love flowers because of their vibrant colors and pleasant fragrance. For example, I especially like lilies because their white color symbolizes peace and purity, which I find very calming.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and repetitions. Try to organize your ideas logically and use correct verb forms. Provide specific examples to support your answer.

範例: Yes, my best friend loves flowers very much because she adores their beauty. Whenever she sees flowers, she picks some and gives them to me. She is very kind-hearted and enjoys sharing flowers with others.

建議: Your answer has some good points but lacks grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use plural forms correctly and avoid unnecessary words. Explain more clearly where the flowers are and what you do with them.

範例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. In my own field, a large number of flowers are planted. We often pick some flowers when we visit the temple or other places nearby.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use present tense for habitual actions and explain reasons clearly. Try to be more concise.

範例: I sometimes take photos of flowers, but not every day because I don't have much free time. Currently, I am quite busy, so I haven't been able to visit my field to take pictures recently.

建議: Your answer is good but has some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and use correct verb tenses. Provide a clear reason why flowers are given as gifts.

範例: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers to others. For example, on birthdays, it is common to give flowers as gifts because they are beautiful and have a calming effect, which makes the recipient happy.

× Yes, I really love flowers because of their colors and they smell so nice. Especially I like Lily because it's so I like the color of Lily is so peace and.

✓ Yes, I really love flowers because of their colors and their nice smell. Especially, I like lilies because their color is so peaceful.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect adjective use. 'They smell so nice' is better as 'their nice smell' for clarity. 'I like Lily because it's so I like the color of Lily is so peace and' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It should be corrected to 'I like lilies because their color is so peaceful' to properly use adjectives and convey meaning.

× Yes my best friend love the flowers very much because she adore the flowers.

✓ Yes, my best friend loves flowers very much because she adores flowers.

The subject 'my best friend' is singular, so the verbs should be in third person singular form: 'loves' and 'adores'. Also, 'the flowers' is unnecessarily specific; 'flowers' is more natural here.

× Whenever she she the flowers she pick it up and give it to me and take ourselves to see such a kind hearted and she loves to share flowers with me and I use I gave him a flower I gave her.

✓ Whenever she sees the flowers, she picks them up and gives them to me. She is kind-hearted and loves to share flowers with me. I also gave her a flower.

The original sentence has multiple grammar errors including missing verbs, incorrect verb forms, and unclear pronouns. 'She she the flowers' is incomplete; it should be 'she sees the flowers'. Verbs 'pick' and 'give' need to be in third person singular: 'picks' and 'gives'. 'Take ourselves to see such a kind hearted' is unclear and ungrammatical; rephrased to 'She is kind-hearted'. Pronouns and sentence structure are corrected for clarity.

× Yes, there are lots of flower where I am living. Then in my own field there are a huge amount of flower planting.

✓ Yes, there are lots of flowers where I live. In my own field, there is a huge amount of flower planting.

'Lots of flower' should be 'lots of flowers' because 'flower' is countable and plural is needed. 'Where I am living' is better as 'where I live' for natural expression. 'There are a huge amount of flower planting' is incorrect because 'amount' is used with uncountable nouns; 'flower planting' is uncountable, so 'there is a huge amount' is correct.

× We gradually we often pick them when we went to temple or somewhere.

✓ We often pick them when we go to the temple or somewhere else.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'We often pick' is present tense, so 'when we went' should be 'when we go' to maintain tense consistency. Also, 'to temple' needs the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific place.

× I took photos of flower but not in my daily life because I don't have that much time to capture the picture of flowers.

✓ I take photos of flowers, but not in my daily life because I don't have much time to capture pictures of flowers.

'I took' is past tense, but the context suggests habitual action, so present tense 'I take' is appropriate. 'Photos of flower' should be 'photos of flowers' (plural). 'That much time' is better as 'much time' in negative sentences. 'The picture of flowers' should be 'pictures of flowers' for generality.

× I am right now I am little bit busy so I won't go to my field and to capture flowers so that's why.

✓ Right now, I am a little bit busy, so I won't go to my field to capture flowers. That's why.

The sentence has redundant and awkward phrasing. 'I am right now I am little bit busy' should be 'Right now, I am a little bit busy'. 'To capture flowers' is better without 'and' before it. The sentence is split for clarity.

× Yes my best friend love the flowers very much because she adore the flowers. Whenever she she the flowers she pick it up and give it to me and take ourselves to see such a kind hearted and she loves to share flowers with me and I use I gave him a flower I gave her.

✓ Yes, my best friend loves flowers very much because she adores them. Whenever she sees flowers, she picks them up and gives them to me. She is kind-hearted and loves to share flowers with me. I also gave her a flower.

Pronouns like 'it' and 'ourselves' are incorrectly used. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'flowers'. 'Take ourselves' is incorrect; it is removed and replaced with a clearer expression. 'I use I gave him a flower I gave her' is unclear and corrected to 'I also gave her a flower'.

× Yes, in my country people often send flowers to others. For example, when someone's birthday is near they they gifted them some flowers as a gift.

✓ Yes, in my country, people often send flowers to others. For example, when someone's birthday is near, they gift them some flowers as a gift.

'They gifted' is past tense, but the context is habitual action, so present tense 'they gift' is appropriate. Also, a comma is added after 'birthday is near' for clarity.