花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和用词需更准确，避免重复表达。例如“flowers always a symbol of hope”应为“flowers are always a symbol of hope”。同时，句子结构应更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I really love flowers because of their vibrant colors, and they are always a symbol of hope. Therefore, I often buy flowers to celebrate important or meaningful events.

建議: 注意主谓一致和词汇使用，如“my mom really love”应为“my mom really loves”。“brings some flowers on the Internet”表达不清，应改为“orders flowers online”。

範例: Yes, my mom really loves flowers, especially roses. She is an energetic person with a positive attitude towards life, so she often orders flowers online to decorate our home and celebrate important events.

建議: 表达应更准确自然，如“weather condition isn't suitable for flower to grow up”应为“the weather conditions are not suitable for flowers to grow”。避免重复和语法错误。

範例: No, because the weather conditions here are not suitable for flowers to grow. For example, in Chongqing, the summers are extremely hot and the winters are very cold, which is harmful to flower growth.

建議: 注意时态和表达准确性，如“flowers always appeared in my photo”应为“flowers always appear in my photos”。避免重复和语法错误。

範例: Yes, flowers always appear in my photos because I often buy them to celebrate important events and take pictures with them. Their vibrant colors add beauty to my photos.

建議: 回答中应避免口头语“uh”，并注意语法，如“to expressing”应为“to express”。句子应更流畅自然。

範例: Yes, flowers are regarded as a symbol of hope. So when people have special events or occasions, they send flowers to express their gratitude or special feelings.

× Yes, I really love flowers because of its vibrant colors and also the flowers always a symbol of hope.

✓ Yes, I really love flowers because of their vibrant colors and also flowers are always a symbol of hope.

这里的flowers是复数，指代词应该用their而不是its；另外，flowers作为主语时，谓语动词需要用复数形式are。

× and also the flowers always a symbol of hope.

✓ and also flowers are always a symbol of hope.

句子缺少谓语动词，导致结构不完整，应补充动词are。

× So when I made some important or meaningful events, I will buy flowers to celebrate it.

✓ So when I have some important or meaningful events, I will buy flowers to celebrate them.

made与events搭配不当，应该用have；events是复数，指代词应为them。

× Yes, my mom really love flowers, especially Rose.

✓ Yes, my mom really loves flowers, especially roses.

主语my mom是单数，谓语动词love应加s变为loves；Rose应为复数roses。

× She is an energetic person who always have a positive attitude towards the life,

✓ She is an energetic person who always has a positive attitude towards life,

关系代词who指代单数person，谓语动词应用has；life前不需要定冠词the。

× towards the life,

✓ towards life,

life前不需要定冠词the，去掉the更符合习惯用法。

× so she always brings some flowers on the Internet to decorate our home and to celebrate important events.

✓ so she always buys some flowers on the Internet to decorate our home and to celebrate important events.

动词brings与后文语境不符，通常买花用buy；此处无复数错误。

× she always brings some flowers on the Internet to decorate our home

✓ she always buys some flowers on the Internet to decorate our home

表达“在网上买花”应使用buy而非bring，bring强调带来，buy更准确。

× No because the weather condition isn't suitable for flower to grow up.

✓ No, because the weather conditions aren't suitable for flowers to grow.

weather condition应为复数conditions；flower应为复数flowers；grow up不合适，grow即可。

× the weather condition isn't suitable

✓ the weather conditions aren't suitable

weather conditions为复数，谓语动词应使用are而非is。

× for flower to grow up.

✓ for flowers to grow.

grow up通常指成长为成人，植物生长用grow即可。

× As you know in Chongqing the summer is extreme hot and the winter is extreme cold which will harm for which is harmful to flowers growth.

✓ As you know, in Chongqing the summer is extremely hot and the winter is extremely cold, which is harmful to flower growth.

extreme应改为副词extremely；句子结构混乱，去掉多余部分，调整为which引导的定语从句；flowers growth应为flower growth。

× the summer is extreme hot and the winter is extreme cold

✓ the summer is extremely hot and the winter is extremely cold

extreme是形容词，修饰形容词hot和cold应使用副词extremely。

× which will harm for which is harmful to flowers growth.

✓ which is harmful to flower growth.

短语中多余的for和which，应删除，表达清晰。

× Yes, flowers always appeared in my photo because I always buy some flowers to celebrate some important events and take photos with them.

✓ Yes, flowers always appear in my photos because I always buy some flowers to celebrate important events and take photos with them.

时态应为一般现在时appear；photo应为复数photos；some important events中some可保留。

× flowers always appeared in my photo

✓ flowers always appear in my photos

表达习惯和频率时用一般现在时appear。

× Their vibrant color also brings some beauty in my photo.

✓ Their vibrant colors also bring some beauty to my photos.

flowers复数，color应为colors；bring与复数主语一致；in my photo改为to my photos更自然。

× So it it all always appeared in my photo.

✓ So it always appears in my photos.

it it为重复错误；时态应为一般现在时appears；all位置不当且多余，去掉。

× Yes, flowers are regarded as a symbol of hope.

✓ Yes, flowers are regarded as symbols of hope.

flowers复数，symbol应为复数symbols。

× they will send flowers to others to expressing their, uh, gratitude or special feelings.

✓ they will send flowers to others to express their, uh, gratitude or special feelings.

to后应接动词原形express，而非动名词expressing。