花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，并且避免重复表达。可以说“I really love flowers because they have a pleasant fragrance.”

範例: Yes, I really love flowers because they have a pleasant fragrance that makes me feel relaxed.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和口语填充词，且表达不够连贯。建议去掉“Uh, uh”，使用复数形式flowers，并且用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: My mother really loves flowers. When I was a child, she planted lots of flowers in our garden, which gave me many happy memories.

建議: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免使用俚语“friggin”，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Certainly, my garden now has many flowers planted by my mother. I usually pick them and enjoy their wonderful fragrance.

建議: 语法和表达不准确，句子不够自然。建议使用复数形式photos，改进句子结构，并且表达更清晰。

範例: Yes, I like taking photos of flowers because it allows me to keep their beauty forever.

建議: 用词不准确，“convenes”用错了，应该用“conveys”。建议使用更准确的词汇，并且表达更自然。

範例: Yes, Chinese people often send flowers to others because they convey love and symbolize romance.

× Yes, I really love flowers, especially it has a fragrant smell.

✓ Yes, I really love flowers, especially because they have a fragrant smell.

这里的代词“it”指代复数名词“flowers”，应使用复数代词“they”。

× when I was a child, she planted lots of flower in our garden.

✓ when I was a child, she planted lots of flowers in our garden.

“lots of”后面应接复数名词，故“flower”应改为复数形式“flowers”。

× Oh, it's a good memories.

✓ Oh, they are good memories.

“memories”是复数名词，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，且“good”修饰复数名词时不加冠词“a”。

× Certainly now my garden have lots of flowers which plant by my mother's.

✓ Certainly now my garden has lots of flowers which are planted by my mother.

主语“my garden”是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“has”。

× I usually pick up them and smell it is really friggin.

✓ I usually pick them up and smell them; they are really fragrant.

“pick up”后应直接跟宾语“them”，且“smell”后应接复数代词“them”，形容词“friggin”应为“fragrant”。

× I like taking photo of flowers.

✓ I like taking photos of flowers.

“photo”应使用复数形式“photos”，表示多张照片。

× I think take a photo could make the flower become permanent photos.

✓ I think taking a photo can make the flower's image permanent.

动词“take”应改为动名词“taking”，句子结构更通顺，且“make the flower become permanent photos”表达不清，改为“make the flower's image permanent”更准确。

× It convenes love and is a symbol of romantic things.

✓ It conveys love and is a symbol of romance.

“convenes”应为“conveys”，意为“传达”；“romantic things”表达不自然，改为“romance”更合适。