花— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you love flowers?
考生
Yes, I do love flowers and I think it goes without saying that umm, everybody loves flowers because of their undeniable beauty. Me too, but I have never plant flowers because I don't have a green thumb.
考官
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
考生
Yes I know man. He's one of my friends and he comes from the USA. His home has a lot of flowers and all of them are planted by him. I think he has green fingers because all of them are so pretty and like well raised.
考官
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
考生
Yes, they are, because I'm living in Vietnam, an agricultural country where people mostly know how to plant things, plant flowers, cheese. So there's a lot of greenery around my place.
考官
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
考生
No I don't, I love flowers but I'm not into them that much more of the frozen on my phone or the pictures of my cat because I love it more compared to flowers.
考官
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
考生
It depends on various factors such as occasions, personalities, a lot of things like that. For example, my mom, she is an avid flower but I'm not that type of person. So in special occasions my father gives her flowers but.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you love flowers?
分數: 70.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I have never plant flowers' nên sửa thành 'I have never planted flowers'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'umm'.
範例: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and can brighten up any space. However, I have never planted them myself because I don't have a green thumb.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
分數: 75.0建議: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'man' trong ngữ cảnh trang trọng. Ngoài ra, câu cuối nên rõ ràng hơn và dùng từ đúng như 'well cared for' thay vì 'well raised'.
範例: Yes, I have a friend from the USA who loves flowers. He has many flowers at his home, all planted and well cared for by himself.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
分數: 60.0建議: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không phù hợp như 'plant flowers, cheese'. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời dùng từ chính xác hơn.
範例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because Vietnam is an agricultural country. People here are skilled at planting flowers and maintaining greenery around their homes.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
分數: 65.0建議: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không rõ nghĩa như 'more of the frozen on my phone'. Bạn nên diễn đạt rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.
範例: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers. I prefer taking pictures of my cat because I love it more than flowers.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
分數: 60.0建議: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'she is an avid flower'. Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời và dùng từ đúng như 'avid flower lover'.
範例: It depends on the occasion and the person. For example, my mother is an avid flower lover, so my father often gives her flowers on special occasions.
文法
× Me too, but I have never plant flowers because I don't have a green thumb.
✓ Me too, but I have never planted flowers because I don't have a green thumb.
The verb 'plant' should be in the past participle form 'planted' after 'have never' to form the present perfect tense correctly.
× I think he has green fingers because all of them are so pretty and like well raised.
✓ I think he has green fingers because all of them are so pretty and well raised.
The word 'like' is incorrectly used here; it should be removed to correctly connect the adjectives describing the flowers.
× Yes, they are, because I'm living in Vietnam, an agricultural country where people mostly know how to plant things, plant flowers, cheese.
✓ Yes, they are, because I'm living in Vietnam, an agricultural country where people mostly know how to plant things, plant flowers, and grow rice.
The word 'cheese' is incorrectly used here; it should be replaced with a suitable agricultural product like 'grow rice' to make sense in context.
× No I don't, I love flowers but I'm not into them that much more of the frozen on my phone or the pictures of my cat because I love it more compared to flowers.
✓ No, I don't. I love flowers but I'm not into them that much. I have more photos on my phone of my cat because I love it more compared to flowers.
The sentence structure is confusing and pronouns are misused. Breaking into two sentences and clarifying pronouns improves clarity and grammar.
× For example, my mom, she is an avid flower but I'm not that type of person.
✓ For example, my mom, she is an avid flower lover but I'm not that type of person.
The word 'flower' is incorrectly used as a noun here; it should be 'flower lover' to correctly describe a person who loves flowers.
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