花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'very catchy and very attractive' and use correct grammar such as 'its fragrance'. Also, limit your answer to about 4-5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses because their fragrance is very pleasant. I have grown many rose plants in my garden, and their beauty always amazes me.

建議: Improve grammar and clarity. Use correct verb forms like 'loves' instead of 'love'. Avoid unclear phrases like 'great case of searching'. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific details.

範例: Yes, my sister loves flowers. She often researches different types and buys many varieties. She even has a special room where she keeps and grows her flowers.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and more natural phrasing. For example, instead of 'so to keep them fresh', say 'to keep them healthy and fresh'. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

範例: Yes, there are many flowers around where I live, both outside and inside my garden. I take care of them by watering them daily to keep them healthy and fresh.

建議: Try to avoid repetition like 'usually' twice. Use linking words to connect ideas and make your answer more natural. Also, use simpler and clearer expressions.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers and post them on social media. I enjoy sharing colorful flowers because they make my profile look more attractive.

建議: Good answer but improve grammar by saying 'use' instead of 'used to' for habitual actions. Also, use linking words like 'especially' and 'because' to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, many people in my country send flowers to friends and family, especially on occasions like weddings and birthdays. I think flowers are not just gifts but also a beautiful way to express love.

× Yes, I really love flowers and from all categories I prefer rose flower because it's fragrance is very catchy and very attractive and I have also grown many rose flowers in my garden which usually blow my mind.

✓ Yes, I really love flowers and from all categories I prefer roses because their fragrance is very catchy and very attractive and I have also grown many rose flowers in my garden which usually blow my mind.

The word 'rose flower' should be plural 'roses' to match the context of preference among categories (plural). Also, 'it's fragrance' should be 'their fragrance' because 'roses' is plural and requires a plural possessive pronoun.

× Yes, my sister really love flowers.

✓ Yes, my sister really loves flowers.

The verb 'love' should be 'loves' to agree with the third person singular subject 'my sister'.

× She has a great case of searching about flowers and to buy flowers and she has a separate cabin in which she usually put the flowers and she not just by, she also grown.

✓ She has a great interest in searching for flowers and buying flowers and she has a separate cabin in which she usually puts the flowers and she not just buys, she also grows them.

The phrase 'case of searching' is incorrect; 'interest in searching' is better. 'Put' should be 'puts' for third person singular present tense. 'By' is a typo for 'buy'. 'Grown' should be 'grows' to match present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, there are a number of flowers where I live, not only outside of my house but also inside within my garden of different varieties and I usually take care of them and water them daily so to keep them fresh.

✓ Yes, there are a number of flowers where I live, not only outside my house but also inside my garden of different varieties and I usually take care of them and water them daily to keep them fresh.

The phrase 'outside of my house' is better as 'outside my house' for natural usage. 'So to keep them fresh' should be 'to keep them fresh' for correct infinitive usage.

× Yes, I usually take a lot of photos of flowers and post on social media because I really like to put different kinds of colourful flowers to make my profile look more beautiful and that's why I usually prefer to take photos.

✓ Yes, I usually take a lot of photos of flowers and post them on social media because I really like to show different kinds of colourful flowers to make my profile look more beautiful and that's why I usually prefer to take photos.

The verb 'post' requires an object, so 'post them on social media' is correct. 'Put' is not appropriate here; 'show' or 'display' fits better when referring to photos.

× Yes, a lot of people in my country used to send flowers to their friends and to family members, especially on different occasions like on marriage ceremonies or birthdays.

✓ Yes, a lot of people in my country send flowers to their friends and family members, especially on different occasions like marriage ceremonies or birthdays.

'Used to send' implies past habit; since the question is about current habits, simple present 'send' is appropriate. Also, 'on marriage ceremonies' is better as 'marriage ceremonies' without 'on'.

× And I think it is not just a gift, it is very good way to show your love.

✓ And I think it is not just a gift, it is a very good way to show your love.

The phrase 'very good way' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.