花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response and explain why you love flowers using simple and clear sentences. Avoid confusing phrases.

範例: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and colorful. They make me feel happy and relaxed.

建議: Your answer is confusing and difficult to understand. Focus on giving a clear and direct answer with supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I know my sister loves flowers. She likes colorful flowers like roses and lilies because they make her feel happy.

建議: Your answer is short and has some unclear words. Try to use correct vocabulary and expand your answer with more details using linking words.

範例: Not really, because I live in the city. However, there are some flowers in parks and gardens nearby.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to use varied vocabulary and correct grammar. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers. Whenever I see beautiful flowers on the street, I like to capture their colors and shapes with my camera.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Give a full sentence answer and explain with examples or reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: Not really. In my country, only some people send flowers on special occasions like birthdays or weddings.

× Yes I love flowers and someone said what do you like my mind catching with the flowers?

✓ Yes, I love flowers, and someone asked me, 'What do you like? My mind is caught by the flowers.'

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper sentence structure and punctuation. It combines multiple ideas without clear connections. The correction separates the ideas and clarifies the meaning, improving readability and grammatical correctness.

× Whenever she see color she's so colorful flower like rose and lilies, she feels so happy.

✓ Whenever she sees colors, especially colorful flowers like roses and lilies, she feels very happy.

The verb 'see' should be in third person singular present tense 'sees' to agree with the subject 'she'. Also, 'color' should be plural 'colors' to match the context, and 'colorful flower' should be plural 'colorful flowers' for consistency.

× Not really. I live in the city area so there are some sorties of flowers.

✓ Not really. I live in the city area, so there are some sorts of flowers.

The word 'sorties' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'sorts' meaning types or kinds. Also, a comma is added for clarity.

× I like to taking picture of the flowers.

✓ I like taking pictures of the flowers.

After 'like', the verb should be in the gerund form 'taking' without 'to'. Also, 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match the context.

× Whenever, whenever I go anywhere I can see flower and I follow take a picture of them because I like to taking picture of the flowers.

✓ Whenever I go anywhere, I can see flowers and I take pictures of them because I like taking pictures of flowers.

The verb 'follow take' is incorrect; it should be 'take'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. Also, 'like to taking' is incorrect; it should be 'like taking'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.