花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít (ví dụ: 'I am a big fan' thay vì 'I am big fans'). Ngoài ra, tránh lỗi phát âm và từ sai chính tả như 'frac fragrances' nên là 'fragrant fragrances' hoặc 'fragrances'. Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I am a big fan of flowers because they are colorful and beautiful. I especially like roses and sunflowers because they have lovely fragrances and cheerful colors.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp số ít và số nhiều (ví dụ: 'a big fan' thay vì 'a big fans'), và sử dụng thì đúng (ví dụ: 'comes to my mind' thay vì 'come to my mind'). Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

範例: The first person who comes to my mind is my mother, who is a big fan of flowers and gardening. She enjoys spending time in the garden every day, watering and taking care of various flowers, especially roses and sunflowers.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, 'Many because' không đúng ngữ pháp, nên dùng 'This is because'. Ngoài ra, câu cuối cùng không rõ nghĩa và cần được sửa lại. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và logic hơn.

範例: Absolutely, there are many flowers where I live because my mother is a big fan of gardening. She plants a variety of flowers and takes great care of them by watering and nurturing the seeds. Recently, she even started a small flower garden in our backyard.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý đến cách dùng thành ngữ và cụm từ đúng, ví dụ 'not really my cup of tea' thay vì 'not my really cup of tea'. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý đến số nhiều và số ít (a big flower enthusiast). Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

範例: To be honest, I don't usually take photos of flowers because they are not really my cup of tea. However, my mother is a big flower enthusiast, so I often see her taking pictures of her flowers and uploading them to social media.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý đến cách dùng giới từ và danh từ số nhiều, ví dụ 'to their loved ones' thay vì 'to their loved one', và 'a common way' thay vì 'common way'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể thêm liên từ để mạch lạc hơn.

範例: In Vietnam, people often send flowers to their loved ones as a lovely present to express their emotions and respect. For example, they usually give flowers on special occasions such as birthdays, weddings, or festivals. Sending flowers is a common way to show care and appreciation.

× Well honestly I am big fans of flowers because they are colorful and very beautiful.

✓ Well honestly I am a big fan of flowers because they are colorful and very beautiful.

The phrase 'big fans' is plural, but the subject 'I' is singular. The correct form is 'a big fan' to match the singular subject.

× Besides that, I especially like roses and sunflowers because it make a lot of lovely frac fragrances and very cheerful color.

✓ Besides that, I especially like roses and sunflowers because they make a lot of lovely fragrances and have very cheerful colors.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect for plural subjects 'roses and sunflowers'; it should be 'they'. Also, 'make' should agree with plural subject. 'Frac' seems a typo and is removed. 'Color' should be plural 'colors' to match 'roses and sunflowers'.

× Well, the first person who come to my mind is my mother who is a big fans of flowers and everything they related to gardening.

✓ Well, the first person who comes to my mind is my mother who is a big fan of flowers and everything related to gardening.

The verb 'come' should be 'comes' to agree with singular subject 'person'. 'Big fans' should be singular 'big fan' to agree with singular 'mother'. 'They related' is incorrect; 'related' should be used without 'they'.

× Besides, she loves spending time in the garden every day, watering the plants and taking care of different kinds of flowers, especially roses and sunflowers.

✓ Besides, she loves spending time in the garden every day, watering the plants and taking care of different kinds of flowers, especially roses and sunflowers.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence.

× Absolutely, there are many flowers where I live. Many because my mother is a big fan of gardening.

✓ Absolutely, there are many flowers where I live. Many because my mother is a big fan of gardening.

The sentence 'Many because my mother is a big fan of gardening.' is incomplete and unclear but does not contain a grammar problem from the list. No correction applied.

× Besides, she plans a variety of flowers every day and take great care of them by watering and nurturing the seeds.

✓ Besides, she plants a variety of flowers every day and takes great care of them by watering and nurturing the seeds.

The verb 'plans' is incorrect; it should be 'plants' to fit the context. 'Take' should be 'takes' to agree with singular subject 'she'.

× Recently, seeds even started planting small flower garden in our backyard to make.

✓ Recently, we even started planting a small flower garden in our backyard.

The original sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. 'Seeds' cannot 'start planting'; likely the speaker meant 'we'. 'To make' is unnecessary and incomplete. Added article 'a' before 'small flower garden'.

× Well, to be honest, I don't usually take photos of flowers because they are not my really cup of tea.

✓ Well, to be honest, I don't usually take photos of flowers because they are not really my cup of tea.

The adverb 'really' should come before 'my cup of tea' to modify it correctly. 'My really cup of tea' is incorrect word order.

× However, my mother is a big flowers enthusiast so I often see her taking pictures with her flowers and uploading them to social media.

✓ However, my mother is a big flower enthusiast so I often see her taking pictures with her flowers and uploading them to social media.

'Flowers enthusiast' is incorrect; the noun 'flower' should be singular when used as an adjective before 'enthusiast'.

× Just in Vietnam, people often send flowers to their loved one as a lovely presence to express their emotions and respect.

✓ In Vietnam, people often send flowers to their loved ones as a lovely present to express their emotions and respect.

'Loved one' should be plural 'loved ones' to agree with plural 'people'. 'Presence' is incorrect; the correct word is 'present' meaning gift.

× For example, they usually give flowers on special occasions such as birthdays, weddings or festival.

✓ For example, they usually give flowers on special occasions such as birthdays, weddings, or festivals.

'Festival' should be plural 'festivals' to match the plural list. Also, a comma is added before 'or' for clarity.

× Sending flowers is common way to show care and appreciation.

✓ Sending flowers is a common way to show care and appreciation.

The phrase 'common way' needs the article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.