花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cavabınızda daha təbii və səlis ifadələr istifadə etməlisiniz. Məsələn, rəngləri və səbəbləri daha aydın və qısa şəkildə ifadə edin, təkrarlardan qaçının.

範例: Yes, I love flowers, especially red and white ones. I enjoy their pleasant fragrance, and I often like to receive them as birthday gifts.

建議: Cümlələrinizi daha düzgün qurun və təkrarlardan qaçının. Həmçinin, əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edərək fikirlərinizi daha məntiqli edin.

範例: Yes, my best friend loves flowers. Her birthday is next week, so I plan to buy her some. I'm excited because I know she will be very happy to receive them.

建議: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin və fikirlərinizi daha aydın ifadə edin. Məsələn, "I live in Baku, the capital of Azerbaijan, where there are many flowers, especially in parks." kimi.

範例: I live in Baku, the capital of Azerbaijan, where there are many flowers. I often see them in parks and enjoy taking pictures of them because I love flowers.

建議: Cümlələrinizi tamamlamaq və qrammatik səhvləri düzəltmək lazımdır. Əlavə olaraq, əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin ki, fikirləriniz daha axıcı olsun.

範例: Yes, I enjoy going to the park in my free time because the scenery is beautiful. Flowers make me happy, so I often take photos of them because they are very attractive.

建議: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və qrammatik cəhətdən düzgün qurun. Təkrarlardan qaçının və fikirlərinizi daha konkret ifadə edin.

範例: Yes, in my country, many women like flowers. Therefore, men often buy flowers for them on special occasions, which makes the women happy. Some even take pictures of the flowers they receive.

× especially red and white colors are favorite one of me

✓ especially red and white colors are my favorite ones

The phrase 'favorite one of me' is incorrect because 'me' is an object pronoun and does not show possession. The correct possessive pronoun is 'my'. Also, 'colors' is plural, so 'ones' should be used instead of 'one'.

× because they have so good smell

✓ because they have such a good smell

The phrase 'so good smell' is incorrect. 'Smell' is a noun and needs an article 'a' and the adjective should be preceded by 'such' to modify the noun properly.

× and also that's why I love it

✓ and also that's why I love them

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'flowers' which is plural, so the correct pronoun is 'them'.

× I like the flowers like a birthday gift

✓ I like flowers as a birthday gift

The preposition 'like' is incorrectly used here. 'As' is the correct preposition to indicate the role or function of something.

× she will be a birthday next week

✓ her birthday will be next week

The phrase 'she will be a birthday' is incorrect because a person cannot 'be' a birthday. The correct expression is 'her birthday will be'.

× I will buy flowers for for her

✓ I will buy flowers for her

There is a repeated preposition 'for'. Only one 'for' is needed before 'her'.

× I see every there are a lot of flowers everywhere

✓ I see that there are a lot of flowers everywhere

The phrase 'I see every there' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'I see that there are...' to introduce a clause.

× I live in city, the capital of Azerbaijan

✓ I live in the city, the capital of Azerbaijan

The noun 'city' requires the definite article 'the' when specifying a particular city.

× there are so good scenery

✓ there is such good scenery

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun and singular, so 'there is' is correct. Also, 'such' is used with uncountable nouns and adjectives to emphasize quality.

× flowers makes me happy

✓ flowers make me happy

The verb should agree with the plural subject 'flowers', so 'make' is correct instead of 'makes'.

× I take photos flowers everywhere

✓ I take photos of flowers everywhere

The verb 'take photos' requires the preposition 'of' before the object being photographed.

× they are so attractive and they

✓ they are so attractive

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and they' which is incomplete and should be removed for clarity.

× most women like flowers very much

✓ most women like flowers very much

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× men try to buy flowers in the special days for the woman

✓ men try to buy flowers on special days for women

The correct preposition for days is 'on'. Also, 'the special days' should be 'special days' and 'the woman' should be plural 'women' to match context.

× a woman flowers makes the makes the woman happy

✓ flowers make the woman happy

The phrase 'a woman flowers' is incorrect. The subject should be 'flowers' which is plural, so the verb is 'make'. Also, 'makes the makes the' is a repetition and should be corrected.

× because they are so attractive even they take picture of

✓ because they are so attractive that people even take pictures of them

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'that people even take pictures of them' completes the thought and corrects the structure.