花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using proper sentence structures and linking words. Avoid redundancy and clarify your points with specific details. For example, mention specific flowers and their qualities, and explain how they make you feel.

範例: Yes, I love flowers because of their beautiful fragrance and vibrant colours. For instance, roses have a sweet scent that makes me feel relaxed. Moreover, different flowers have unique shapes and colours, which always brighten my day.

建議: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Be specific about your friend's habits and explain why she loves flowers. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy.

範例: Yes, I know many people who love flowers, especially my best friend Nidhi. She often decorates her room with fresh flowers because she enjoys their fragrance and the cheerful atmosphere they create.

建議: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and using linking words. Provide specific examples and explain why these flowers attract you. Avoid vague statements and redundancy.

範例: Yes, there are many types of flowers where I live, such as lilies, roses, sunflowers, and jasmine. Although I don't know the names of all flowers, their beautiful shapes, colours, and fragrances always attract me.

建議: Focus on improving grammar and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Be specific about why you take photos and what you find interesting about the flowers.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of flowers regularly because their vibrant colours and unique shapes attract me. Every day, I discover new flowers that inspire me to capture their beauty through photography.

建議: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary to make your answer clearer and more natural. Use linking words to explain reasons and give specific examples of occasions when people send flowers.

範例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to express their feelings. For example, boys and girls give roses to show love, and flowers are also sent to celebrate happy occasions.

× Yes, I love flowers so much because of its fragrance shape, it's brightened colors and everything.

✓ Yes, I love flowers so much because of their fragrance, shape, bright colors, and everything.

The pronoun 'its' is incorrect because 'flowers' is plural, so the correct pronoun is 'their'. Also, 'brightened colors' should be 'bright colors' for correct adjective use.

× Yes, I love flowers so much because of its fragrance shape, it's brightened colors and everything.

✓ Yes, I love flowers so much because of their fragrance, shape, bright colors, and everything.

The phrase 'brightened colors' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'bright colors' to describe the flowers.

× It gives a fill a good and relaxed.

✓ They give me a good and relaxed feeling.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction uses proper subject-verb agreement and clearer expression.

× That's why I love the flowers.

✓ That's why I love flowers.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary here because 'flowers' is used in a general sense.

× Most flowers have different qualities like different fragments, different shape.

✓ Most flowers have different qualities like different fragrances and different shapes.

'Fragments' is incorrect; the intended word is 'fragrances'. Also, 'shape' should be plural 'shapes' to agree with 'different' and 'flowers'.

× Yes in my life I know so many people who love flowers but my one of the best friend is her name is Nidhi and she loves flowers so much.

✓ Yes, in my life I know many people who love flowers, but one of my best friends is Nidhi, and she loves flowers very much.

The original sentence has awkward structure and redundancy. The correction improves clarity and grammar.

× She always decorated their room with flowers and used for fragrance in house.

✓ She always decorates her room with flowers and uses them for fragrance in the house.

'Their' is incorrect for singular 'she'; it should be 'her'. Also, verb tense corrected to present simple to match habitual action. Added 'them' as object for 'uses'.

× Yes, there are so many types of flowers are available where I'm living like lilies, roses, sunflowers, Jasmine and so many flowers.

✓ Yes, there are many types of flowers available where I live, like lilies, roses, sunflowers, jasmine, and many more.

The phrase 'there are so many types of flowers are available' is redundant. Correct form is 'there are many types of flowers available'. Also, 'Jasmine' should be lowercase unless a proper noun.

× Some flowers name I don't know but that shapes, color and fragrance are beautiful and always attract to me.

✓ I don't know the names of some flowers, but their shapes, colors, and fragrances are beautiful and always attract me.

'Some flowers name' is incorrect; it should be 'the names of some flowers'. Also, plural forms 'shapes', 'colors', 'fragrances' are needed. 'Attract to me' should be 'attract me'.

× Yes, I would like to take a photos of flowers too much and regularly.

✓ Yes, I would like to take photos of flowers very much and regularly.

'A photos' is incorrect; 'photos' is plural and does not take 'a'. 'Too much' is better replaced with 'very much' for positive expression.

× I took photos for the flowers because it's attract to me with a different shape and vibrance color.

✓ I take photos of flowers because they attract me with their different shapes and vibrant colors.

'Took' changed to 'take' to match habitual action. 'Photos for the flowers' should be 'photos of flowers'. 'It's attract to me' is incorrect; correct is 'they attract me'. 'Vibrance color' should be 'vibrant colors'.

× So many new flowers I look every day and which gives me attraction for their pregnancy and shape.

✓ I see many new flowers every day, and they attract me with their fragrance and shape.

'I look' is incorrect; 'I see' is appropriate. 'Which gives me attraction' should be 'they attract me'. 'Pregnancy' is incorrect; likely intended 'fragrance'.

× I took photos for that.

✓ I take photos of them.

'Took' changed to 'take' for habitual action. 'Photos for that' is incorrect; correct preposition is 'photos of them'.

× Yes definitely people in my countries send flowers too much because of they express their feelings.

✓ Yes, definitely people in my country send flowers a lot because they express their feelings.

'Countries' should be singular 'country'. 'Too much' is better replaced with 'a lot' for positive frequency. 'Because of they' is incorrect; correct is 'because they'.

× Just for example in relationship peoples boys or girls gives the Rose for the love propositions and other feelings for happiness things.

✓ For example, in relationships, boys or girls give roses as love tokens and for other happy occasions.

'Peoples' is incorrect; use 'people'. 'Gives' should be 'give' to agree with plural subject. 'The Rose' should be 'roses'. 'Love propositions' is better expressed as 'love tokens'. 'Happiness things' is unclear; 'happy occasions' is better.