花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is heartfelt but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors like 'each type of flower have' which should be 'has'. Try to directly answer the question first, then add a specific reason or example using linking words.

範例: Yes, I love flowers because each type seems to carry a special meaning. For instance, roses often symbolize love, which makes me feel connected to them.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar ('one of my friend' should be 'one of my friends') and by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid informal contractions like 'cause' in formal speaking.

範例: Yes, one of my friends really likes flowers, so it's easy to choose her birthday present. Since she loves roses because of their association with love, we usually give her roses on her birthday.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be more structured and concise. Avoid repeating 'but' and use linking words like 'however' to improve coherence. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary instead of 'simple flowers'.

範例: Honestly, there are not many flowers in my area. However, some trees bloom flowers that are different from lilies or roses; they are common wildflowers found around my house.

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Use correct expressions like 'a lot of photos' instead of 'multiple amount of photos'. Also, complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I often take a lot of photos of flowers because I believe each flower tells a unique story. While photographing them, I feel like I am capturing their hidden beauty.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors such as subject-verb agreement ('people who really likes' should be 'people who really like'). Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas and avoid repetition.

範例: In my country, not many people send flowers to each other. However, some people, including me and my friend, enjoy exchanging flowers because we love them.

× I feel like each type of flower have a secret message or like the secret journey they speak about.

✓ I feel like each type of flower has a secret message or like the secret journey they speak about.

The subject 'each type of flower' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.

× One of my friend really likes flowers, so it's really easy for us to decide her birthday present because we don't have to think about much 'cause we just know that she loves flowers.

✓ One of my friends really likes flowers, so it's really easy for us to decide her birthday present because we don't have to think about much 'cause we just know that she loves flowers.

The phrase 'one of my friend' is incorrect because 'friend' should be plural as 'friends' when used with 'one of'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× In my country not a lot of people send flowers to each other but there I can say there are some people who really likes flowers and send them like I do.

✓ In my country not a lot of people send flowers to each other but there I can say there are some people who really like flowers and send them like I do.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'like' instead of 'likes' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I like flowers and my friend love flowers so I send her and she sends to me.

✓ I like flowers and my friend loves flowers so I send her and she sends to me.

The subject 'my friend' is singular, so the verb should be 'loves' instead of 'love' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.

× So I would not say that there are many people who sends flowers but there are people.

✓ So I would not say that there are many people who send flowers but there are people.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'send' instead of 'sends' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.