花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤り（例えば、"if somebody give me present a flower"は"if somebody gives me a flower as a present"が正しい）を修正し、より簡潔に表現しましょう。また、具体的な理由や感情を加えると良いです。

範例: Yes, I love flowers. Although I don't have a favorite type, I always feel happy when someone gives me flowers as a gift because they brighten my day.

建議: 文の構造が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。主語と動詞の一致や時制に注意し、文を分けて明確にしましょう。具体的な例を加えると良いです。

範例: Yes, my mother loves flowers. Every Mother's Day in Japan, I give her flowers as a present, and she is always delighted. She also sometimes buys new flowers for our home herself.

建議: 語彙の誤用（"flowers alert"や"flour"は誤り）を直し、文を簡潔で明確にしましょう。理由をはっきり述べ、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げることが大切です。

範例: As far as I know, there are not many flowers where I live because the company that manages the gardens and roads cuts the flowers regularly, so they don't grow anymore.

建議: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。理由を明確にし、自然な表現を使いましょう。

範例: I never take photos of flowers in my daily life because I feel it takes time to look at them again, and I think it's a waste of time.

建議: 文法の誤り（"that send"は"of sending"などに修正）を直し、より自然で明確な表現を使いましょう。意見を述べる際は理由も添えると良いです。

範例: No, in Japan, people don't often send flowers to others because there is no strong tradition of doing so. Nowadays, many people think that giving flowers as a present is not very common or suitable.

× if somebody give me present a flower, I will be very happy about that, I think.

✓ if somebody gives me a flower as a present, I will be very happy about that, I think.

The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'somebody'. Also, the phrase 'present a flower' is awkward; it should be 'a flower as a present' to be grammatically correct.

× Japan I gave flowers every year as a present, but she delighted with this every year and also she sometimes buy new flower by herself.

✓ In Japan, I gave flowers every year as a present, and she was delighted with them every year, and also she sometimes bought new flowers by herself.

The verb 'delighted' needs an auxiliary verb 'was' to form the past tense passive voice. 'Buy' should be in past tense 'bought' to match the past time frame. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context.

× she sometimes buy new flower by herself.

✓ she sometimes buys new flowers by herself.

The verb 'buy' should be 'buys' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to indicate more than one.

× there's no flowers alert because the garden or Rd. is controlled by the company and they cut the flour every time so there's no flour anymore.

✓ there are no flowers around because the garden or road is controlled by the company and they cut the flowers every time, so there are no flowers anymore.

'alert' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'around'. 'flour' is a misspelling of 'flower'. Also, 'there's' should be 'there are' to agree with the plural noun 'flowers'.

× they cut the flour every time so there's no flour anymore.

✓ they cut the flowers every time, so there are no flowers anymore.

'flour' is a misspelling of 'flowers'. Also, 'there's' should be 'there are' to agree with the plural noun 'flowers'.

× Never take a photo or flower in my daily life because by taking flower I don't have time.

✓ I never take photos of flowers in my daily life because taking photos of flowers takes up my time.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has awkward phrasing. Adding 'I' as the subject and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Into watch it again and it is waste of time so I never take a photo of flowers.

✓ to look at them again, and it is a waste of time, so I never take photos of flowers.

'Into watch' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to look at'. Also, 'waste of time' needs the article 'a' before it.

× And I think nowadays many people start to thinking like uh, present as flower is not good.

✓ And I think nowadays many people start to think that giving flowers as presents is not good.

'start to thinking' should be 'start to think' or 'start thinking'. Also, 'present as flower' is incorrect; it should be 'giving flowers as presents' for clarity and correctness.