花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Javobingizda grammatik xatolarni tuzatish va gaplarni yanada tabiiyroq qilish kerak. Masalan, 'they fresh' o'rniga 'they are fresh' deyish va takroriy fikrlarni qisqartirish foydali bo'ladi. Shuningdek, gaplarni qisqa va aniq qilib, ortiqcha takrorlanishlardan qoching.

範例: I love flowers because they are fresh and brighten my mood. For example, I often give flowers to my mother, who really appreciates them.

建議: Javobingizda gaplarni aniq va to'liq ifodalashga e'tibor bering. Keraksiz 'uh' larni kamaytiring va gaplarni mantiqan bog'lang. Masalan, 'she likes to take photos of flowers and post them on Instagram' kabi aniq va to'liq gaplar tuzing.

範例: Yes, my sister loves flowers. She enjoys taking photos of them and posting these pictures on Instagram because she finds them beautiful.

建議: Savolga to'liq va aniq javob berishga harakat qiling. Bu savolga qisqa va to'liq gap bilan javob bering, masalan, 'Yes, there are many flowers in my area' yoki 'No, there are not many flowers where I live'.

範例: No, there are not many flowers where I live because the climate is quite dry.

建議: Javobingizni grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri va mantiqan bog'langan qilib tuzing. Gaplarni qisqa va aniq qilib, ortiqcha so'zlardan qoching. Masalan, 'I don't see many flowers in my city, but in Namangan, there was a flower festival every year where people brought flowers.'

範例: I don't see many flowers in my city, but when I lived in Namangan, there was an annual flower festival where everyone brought flowers to celebrate.

建議: Javobingizni grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri va aniq qilib ifodalashga harakat qiling. Keraksiz 'uh' larni olib tashlang va bayonotingizni yanada ravshan qiling. Masalan, 'People often send flowers on holidays like International Women's Day, Independence Day, and birthdays. Recently, I gave a bunch of flowers to my sister, which was a very appreciated gift.'

範例: People in my country often send flowers on special occasions such as International Women's Day, Independence Day, and birthdays. For example, I recently gave my sister a bouquet of flowers, and she really appreciated it.

× I really love flowers because they fresh and they improve my mood and that's why I like it.

✓ I really love flowers because they are fresh and they improve my mood and that's why I like them.

The verb 'are' is missing after 'they' to correctly describe the plural subject 'flowers' in present tense. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'flowers'.

× Especially I gave flowers to my mother because she really liked it and that's why I like flowers.

✓ Especially, I gave flowers to my mother because she really liked them and that's why I like flowers.

The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'flowers'. The past tense 'gave' and 'liked' are correct here.

× Yes, of course I know uh, this person is too uh too relative for me she's my sister.

✓ Yes, of course I know her; she is a close relative of mine, my sister.

The phrase 'too relative for me' is incorrect. 'Close relative of mine' is the correct expression. Also, 'this person' should be replaced with 'her' to refer to the sister properly.

× My sister loves flowers because uh, they had uh, she like uh, take a photo with them and post on Instagram because it's one of the most.

✓ My sister loves flowers because she likes to take photos with them and post on Instagram because it's one of the most popular things.

The verb 'like' should be 'likes' to agree with third person singular subject 'she'. The phrase 'they had' is incorrect and removed for clarity. 'Take a photo' should be 'take photos' to match plural 'flowers'. The sentence was incomplete and corrected for clarity.

× Flowers where you live.

✓ Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. It should be a question matching the examiner's question.

× To be honest I don't see much flowers in my city but when I lived in Namangan I used to see a lot of flowers here and every year there were a special holiday that was flowers ceremony and everyone come to with flowers to hear.

✓ To be honest, I don't see many flowers in my city, but when I lived in Namangan, I used to see a lot of flowers there. Every year, there was a special holiday called the flower ceremony, and everyone came with flowers to it.

'Much flowers' should be 'many flowers' because 'flowers' is countable. 'Come' should be 'came' to match past tense. 'To hear' is incorrect and replaced with 'to it' to complete the sentence. Commas added for clarity.

× Absolutely. Especially in holidays such kinda age, March to Independence Women Day or uh, in birthdays, uh, for example, uh, recently I gave bunch of flowers to my sister.

✓ Absolutely. Especially on holidays like International Women's Day in March or on birthdays. For example, recently I gave a bunch of flowers to my sister.

'In holidays' should be 'on holidays'. 'Such kinda age' is incorrect and replaced with 'like International Women's Day'. 'Gave bunch' should be 'gave a bunch'.

× It's really awarded gift for them.

✓ It's a really appreciated gift for them.

'Awarded' is incorrect here; 'appreciated' or 'valued' is appropriate to describe a gift that is well received.