花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be improved by correcting grammar errors and making the sentences more natural and concise. For example, avoid redundancy like "from my childhood I love" and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I've loved keeping flowers at home since I was a child. Even now, I have a few flower plants despite limited space because they make my home feel nicer and more relaxing.

建議: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your thoughts fully and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repetition and clarify your points.

範例: Yes, my grandmother really loved flowers and she helped me grow flower plants when I was a child. That's how I developed my interest in gardening.

建議: Your answer is good but could be more natural by fixing small errors and improving sentence flow. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing such as 'I off quite often visit'.

範例: Yes, definitely. Although I only have a few flower plants at home, there's a nearby park full of flowers these days. Since it's spring, I often visit the park to enjoy the beautiful scenery.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve coherence by using linking words and varying your vocabulary. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas unnecessarily.

範例: Yes, I do. My photo gallery is full of flower pictures. For instance, last weekend I visited a nearby park and took several photos of colourful flowers because the garden was truly beautiful.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to contrast ideas smoothly. Also, clarify phrases like 'wish for'.

範例: No, not really. In Sri Lanka, it's quite rare except among young people who send flowers to partners or friends. However, here in Australia, I've noticed many people send flowers to show appreciation or for occasions like Thanksgiving.

× Yes definitely from my childhood I love to keep flowers at home and even now I have few flower plants at my home.

✓ Yes, definitely, since my childhood I have loved to keep flowers at home and even now I have a few flower plants at my home.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the simple present tense 'love' to describe a continuous action from childhood to now. The present perfect tense 'have loved' is appropriate to express an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Also, 'few' should be 'a few' to indicate a small number rather than almost none.

× Although I don't have enough space, I think it's makes my place nicer and feel relaxed.

✓ Although I don't have enough space, I think it makes my place nicer and makes me feel relaxed.

The phrase 'it's makes' is incorrect because 'it' (third person singular) should be followed by 'makes' without 'is'. Also, the verb 'feel' needs a subject, so 'makes me feel' is correct to express the effect on the speaker.

× Yes, I my grandmother really loved flowers and she's the one who helped me to grow flower plants when I was a child.

✓ Yes, my grandmother really loved flowers and she's the one who helped me to grow flower plants when I was a child.

The phrase 'I my grandmother' is incorrect; the pronoun 'I' is unnecessary and should be removed to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× I think that's how I started growing flowers and thought of making my.

✓ I think that's how I started growing flowers and thought of making my own garden.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'making my.' Adding 'own garden' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× Since it's the spring season, I off quite often visit there to see the flowers and enjoy the nice sceneries there.

✓ Since it's the spring season, I quite often visit there to see the flowers and enjoy the nice scenery.

The word 'off' is incorrectly placed and should be removed. Also, 'sceneries' is incorrect; 'scenery' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralised.

× Even last weekend we went to visit a park nearby and I took several photos of flowers of different colours.

✓ Even last weekend, we went to visit a nearby park and I took several photos of flowers of different colours.

The phrase 'a park nearby' is better expressed as 'a nearby park' for natural adjective order. Also, adding a comma after 'last weekend' improves readability.

× Actually the garden was filled with beautiful flowers, so I took lots of photographs.

✓ Actually, the garden was filled with beautiful flowers, so I took lots of photographs.

A comma after 'Actually' improves sentence clarity and flow.

× No, not really. Back in Sri Lanka it's very rare.

✓ No, not really. Back in Sri Lanka, it is very rare.

Adding a comma after 'Sri Lanka' improves sentence clarity. Also, 'it's' is acceptable but spelling out 'it is' is clearer in formal speech.

× Only young people used to send flowers to their partner or a friend.

✓ Only young people used to send flowers to their partners or friends.

The plural forms 'partners' and 'friends' are more appropriate here to indicate any partner or friend, matching the plural subject 'young people'.

× But here in Australia I have seen lots of people send flowers to others for appreciation or Thanksgiving or wish for.

✓ But here in Australia, I have seen lots of people send flowers to others for appreciation, Thanksgiving, or well wishes.

The phrase 'wish for' is incomplete and unclear; 'well wishes' is a common expression. Also, commas improve the list clarity, and a comma after 'Australia' improves readability.