花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਸਹੀ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ ਕਈ ਵਾਰ ਗਲਤ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਵਰਤੇ ਗਏ ਹਨ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਧਾਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਬਣਾਓ, ਅਤੇ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਤੌਰ 'ਤੇ ਸਹੀ ਕ੍ਰਮ ਵਿੱਚ ਰੱਖੋ।

範例: Yes, I love flowers. I grow them at home, and seeing them in the morning makes me feel very happy.

建議: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਗ੍ਰਾਮਰ ਦੀਆਂ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ ਅਤੇ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਲੜੀ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਤੌਰ 'ਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਜੋੜੋ।

範例: Yes, I have a friend who loves flowers a lot. He inspired me to grow flowers at home because they make the place more beautiful.

建議: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਗਲਤ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ ਕਈ ਵਾਰ ਅਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਹੈ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਧਾਰਨ, ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਤੌਰ 'ਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਜੋੜੋ।

範例: Yes, there are many flowers near me. I grow some at home, and there is a park nearby with many different types of flowers.

建議: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਗ੍ਰਾਮਰ ਅਤੇ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਚੋਣ ਦੀਆਂ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਸਹੀ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ਾਂ ਵਿੱਚ ਬਦਲੋ।

範例: Yes, I often take photos of different kinds of flowers, especially when I visit new places and see unique varieties.

建議: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਗ੍ਰਾਮਰ ਦੀਆਂ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ ਅਤੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਅਧੂਰਾ ਹੈ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਪੂਰਾ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਬਣਾਓ, ਅਤੇ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਤੌਰ 'ਤੇ ਸਹੀ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਵਰਤੋਂ।

範例: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers to friends and relatives on special occasions like weddings and anniversaries because flowers symbolize good wishes.

× Yes, I love the flower and I have to grow the flower in my home was in the morning time when I to see the flower so I feel very good on that time.

✓ Yes, I love flowers and I grow flowers in my home. In the morning, when I see the flowers, I feel very good.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general, not a single flower. Also, 'have to grow' is incorrect here; simple present 'grow' fits better to express habitual action. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Yes, I know that one person in my life would love a lot of the flowers and I also inspired from those person.

✓ Yes, I know one person in my life who loves a lot of flowers and I am also inspired by that person.

Incorrect pronouns 'those person' should be 'that person' because 'person' is singular. Also, 'inspired from' should be 'inspired by'. 'Would love' is changed to 'loves' to indicate a habitual action.

× He's my friend. He also advised to me to grow the flower at the home.

✓ He's my friend. He also advised me to grow flowers at home.

'Advised to me' is incorrect; the correct form is 'advised me'. 'The flower' should be plural 'flowers' and 'at the home' should be 'at home'.

× They can to make the more beautiful.

✓ They can make it more beautiful.

'They' is incorrect as it refers to 'flowers' which is plural, but the sentence context suggests 'it' (the home or garden). 'Can to make' is incorrect; modal verb 'can' is followed by base verb without 'to'. 'The more beautiful' should be 'more beautiful'.

× Uh, yes, I have to show the lot of flowers near to me.

✓ Uh, yes, I have a lot of flowers near me.

'Have to show' is incorrect; it should be 'have a lot of'. 'Near to me' should be 'near me'.

× Firstly I have to grow the flower in my home.

✓ Firstly, I grow flowers in my home.

'Have to grow the flower' is incorrect; simple present 'grow flowers' is better to express habitual action. 'The flower' should be plural 'flowers'.

× Then other hand my hometown park a near to the my home and take the very good for me because it's can grow the different types of varieties on flower on it the park.

✓ On the other hand, my hometown park is near my home and is very good for me because it has different types of flowers in the park.

'Then other hand' should be 'On the other hand'. 'A near to the my home' is incorrect; correct is 'is near my home'. 'Take the very good for me' is unclear; corrected to 'is very good for me'. 'It's can grow' is incorrect; corrected to 'it has'. 'Varieties on flower on it the park' is corrected to 'different types of flowers in the park'.

× Uh, just I am take the different different picks of the flowers, different picks of flowers because I have to want the different different varieties of flowers when I have to bizarre to the onion new place and to that time I will see.

✓ Uh, I just take different pictures of flowers because I want different varieties of flowers when I visit a new place, and at that time I will see them.

'I am take' is incorrect; should be 'I take'. 'Picks' should be 'pictures'. 'I have to want' is incorrect; should be 'I want'. 'Bizarre to the onion new place' is unclear; corrected to 'visit a new place'. 'To that time I will see' corrected to 'at that time I will see them'.

× Yes, in the country view people can to send the flower one other person right?

✓ Yes, in the country, people can send flowers to other people, right?

'Can to send' is incorrect; modal verb 'can' is followed by base verb without 'to'. 'The flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'One other person' should be 'other people'.

× Like as friends and relatives under a special occasion like marriage functions and anniversaries, because flower are the.

✓ Like friends and relatives on special occasions like marriage functions and anniversaries, because flowers are important.

'Like as' is incorrect; 'like' alone is sufficient. 'Under a special occasion' should be 'on special occasions'. 'Flower are' should be 'flowers are'. The sentence is completed for clarity.