花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by making it more natural and coherent. Avoid starting with a fragment like 'Love flowers.' Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, and correct minor grammar errors such as 'in flower' to 'with flowers'.

範例: Yes, I love flowers because they smell wonderful and can brighten up any room. However, I don't usually buy flowers myself; instead, I prefer to enjoy them in parks where they grow naturally.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear phrases like 'buys at this bar bouquet' and 'beautiful buffet'. Try to use precise vocabulary and correct expressions. Also, use linking words to improve flow.

範例: Yes, I have a friend who really loves flowers. She buys a bouquet every week because she enjoys decorating her home with fresh flowers. In fact, she once gave me a beautiful bouquet as a gift, which I really appreciated.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar errors such as 'my neighbor have' to 'my neighbor has' and by using more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect ideas better.

範例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because there is a beautiful park near my home full of colorful flowers. Additionally, my neighbor has a large garden filled with blue-wing plants, which adds a lot of greenery to the area.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing such as 'vibrant colours flowers' and 'It helps me I appreciate'. Try to use linking words and correct sentence structures.

範例: Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers when I come across beautiful or unique ones during my walks. I really enjoy capturing their delicate details and vibrant colours because it helps me appreciate nature more and keeps me relaxed.

建議: Your answer is informative but can be improved by correcting grammar errors like 'birthday' to 'birthdays', 'colour' to 'colours', and by using linking words for better coherence. Also, clarify 'morning' which seems to be a mistake for 'mourning'.

範例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions such as birthdays, weddings, or festivals. However, they avoid giving white flowers because they are associated with mourning or funerals. Instead, they prefer bright colours like red or yellow.

× Love flowers.

✓ I love flowers.

The sentence lacks a subject, which is necessary for a complete sentence in English. Adding 'I' clarifies who loves flowers.

× I don't have much experience in flower because I don't buy them, although I have shared their beauty.

✓ I don't have much experience with flowers because I don't buy them, although I have shared their beauty.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'with' when talking about experience.

× I don't have much experience in flower because I don't buy them, although I have shared their beauty.

✓ I don't have much experience with flowers because I don't buy them, although I have shared their beauty.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'experience with' is the correct collocation.

× She buys at this bar bouquet every week because she enjoys decorating her home with fresh flowers.

✓ She buys a bouquet at this bar every week because she enjoys decorating her home with fresh flowers.

The phrase 'buys at this bar bouquet' has incorrect word order and missing article. Correct order is 'buys a bouquet at this bar'.

× In fact, she once gave me a beautiful buffet as a gift, which I really appreciated.

✓ In fact, she once gave me a beautiful bouquet as a gift, which I really appreciated.

The word 'buffet' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'bouquet' which means a bunch of flowers.

× Also, my neighbor have a large garden beside my home which is filled with blue wing plants and adds a lot of green into the area.

✓ Also, my neighbor has a large garden beside my home which is filled with blue wing plants and adds a lot of green to the area.

The subject 'neighbor' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'adds a lot of green into the area' should be 'adds a lot of green to the area'.

× Also, my neighbor have a large garden beside my home which is filled with blue wing plants and adds a lot of green into the area.

✓ Also, my neighbor has a large garden beside my home which is filled with blue wing plants and adds a lot of green to the area.

The preposition 'into' is incorrect here; 'adds a lot of green to the area' is the correct phrase.

× I really enjoy capturing the delicate details and vibrant colours flowers.

✓ I really enjoy capturing the delicate details and vibrant colours of flowers.

The phrase 'vibrant colours flowers' is missing the preposition 'of' to link 'colours' and 'flowers' properly.

× It helps me I appreciate nature more and keeps me relaxed.

✓ It helps me appreciate nature more and keeps me relaxed.

The phrase 'helps me I appreciate' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'helps me appreciate' without the pronoun 'I'.

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers on spiritual occasions such as birthday, weddings or any festivals.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers on spiritual occasions such as birthdays, weddings, or any festivals.

The word 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' to match the plural 'weddings' and 'festivals'. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× However, they avoid giving white flowers because it is associated with morning or funeral.

✓ However, they avoid giving white flowers because they are associated with mourning or funerals.

The word 'morning' is incorrect; the intended word is 'mourning'. Also, 'it is' should be 'they are' to agree with plural 'flowers'.

× They prefer bright colour like red or yellow instead of white ones.

✓ They prefer bright colours like red or yellow instead of white ones.

The word 'colour' should be plural 'colours' to match the examples 'red or yellow'.