花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较为自然，但句子较长且有重复，建议简化表达，避免冗余，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I love flowers and enjoy seeing them in gardens because I don't have enough time to care for them at home.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，且表达不够简洁，建议注意时态和主谓一致，使用连接词使内容更连贯。

範例: Yes, my mom loves flowers and enjoys keeping small pots at home because she finds it rewarding to see them grow healthy.

建議: 回答中有语法和表达错误，句子结构复杂且重复，建议简化句子，注意语法，使用连接词提高连贯性。

範例: Yes, there are many flowers at my home because my mom takes great care of them every day, almost like they are her children.

建議: 回答中有用词错误和重复，建议注意词汇选择，避免重复表达，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I usually take photos of flowers on weekends when I visit parks with my parents, especially since my mom loves flowers.

建議: 回答表达基本清晰，但有语法错误和重复，建议注意句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

範例: Yes, people often send flowers during important events. For example, my mom sent me beautiful flowers when I graduated to show her appreciation for my hard work.

× she always like keeping a small pot of flowers at my home rather than me.

✓ she always likes keeping a small pot of flowers at my home rather than me.

主语是第三人称单数she，谓语动词like应加-s变为likes，表示主谓一致。

× My mom just have the patience and tolerance to keep these little plans and it's very meaningful and rewarding for my mom to see them keep healthier and stronger.

✓ My mom just has the patience and tolerance to keep these little plants and it's very meaningful and rewarding for my mom to see them keep healthier and stronger.

主语My mom是第三人称单数，谓语动词have应改为has，保持主谓一致。

× I prefer looking them maybe at the garden.

✓ I prefer looking at them maybe in the garden.

动词prefer后面搭配介词looking at，表示“喜欢看”；地点应使用in the garden而非at the garden。

× she always like keeping a small pot of flowers at my home rather than me.

✓ she always likes keeping a small pot of flowers at my home rather than I do.

rather than后面应接主格代词I或完整句I do，而非宾格me。

× My mom is a big fan of flowers so every time I will take picture of flowers with my mom.

✓ My mom is a big fan of flowers so every time I will take pictures of flowers with my mom.

take picture应为复数形式pictures，表示多张照片。

× I pray for taking the photos on weekends 'cause every weekend I always go to the park or the garden with my parents to take the picture of the flowers or some beautiful sceneries.

✓ I plan to take photos on weekends 'cause every weekend I always go to the park or the garden with my parents to take pictures of the flowers or some beautiful scenery.

原句中pray用错，应该用plan表示计划；take the picture应为take pictures；sceneries通常用不可数名词scenery。

× when I graduated from a university, my mom sent a very beautiful flower to me for for appreciating my work, hard working.

✓ when I graduated from university, my mom sent me a very beautiful flower to appreciate my hard work.

sent后直接接人me，不用to me；appreciate是动词，不用for appreciating；hard working应改为hard work，表示努力工作。