花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and word choice. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I love flowers because their colors and fragrances give me energy. I always decorate my home with them."

範例: I love flowers because their vibrant colors and pleasant fragrances give me energy. Therefore, I always decorate my home with fresh flowers to create a lively atmosphere.

建議: Focus on using correct tense and sentence structure. Avoid filler words and repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, "Yes, my daughter loves flowers. She often decorates her room with different kinds and colors of flowers."

範例: Yes, my daughter loves flowers. She often decorates her room with various types and colors of flowers, changing them from time to time to keep the room fresh and vibrant.

建議: Improve grammar and clarity by using correct articles and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Yes, there are many flowers where I live, especially in my garden. I mainly find roses, which have a lovely fragrance, and there are many rose plants."

範例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live, especially in my garden. I mainly find roses, which have a lovely fragrance, and there are numerous rose plants growing there.

建議: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Yes, I often take photos of flowers during family picnics in the garden. I also sometimes take selfies."

範例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I go on picnics with my family in the garden. Additionally, I sometimes take selfies to capture the moment.

建議: Use correct plural forms and sentence structure. Avoid filler words and be more specific. For example, "Yes, people in my country often send flowers to each other, especially on special occasions like Valentine's Day, to express their feelings."

範例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to each other, especially on special occasions like Valentine's Day, to express their love and appreciation.

× I love flower flowers because I the colors and the fragments of the different type of flowers and give me energy.

✓ I love flowers because I like the colours and the fragrance of the different types of flowers and they give me energy.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context. 'Fragments' is incorrect; the correct word is 'fragrance'. 'Different type' should be plural 'different types' to agree with plural 'flowers'. Also, the sentence was missing 'like' after 'I' and needed 'they' before 'give me energy' for clarity.

× Yes, I knew, knew a person who love flowers.

✓ Yes, I know a person who loves flowers.

The verb 'knew' is past tense but the context suggests present tense 'know'. Also, 'love' should be 'loves' to agree with the third person singular subject 'a person'.

× Uh, ** *** always decorate her room with flowers and change the, the different color and different, uh, flowers time to time.

✓ She always decorates her room with flowers and changes the different colours and different flowers from time to time.

The verbs 'decorate' and 'change' need to be in third person singular form 'decorates' and 'changes' to agree with the subject 'She'. 'Color' should be plural 'colours' to match 'different' and 'time to time' should be 'from time to time'.

× Yes, there are lot of flowers where I live and in my garden there are variety of the flowers.

✓ Yes, there are lots of flowers where I live and in my garden there is a variety of flowers.

'Lot' should be plural 'lots' after 'there are'. 'Variety' is singular and requires singular verb 'is' and article 'a'. 'The flowers' should be just 'flowers' as it is general.

× I mainly found off the Rose rose fragrance.

✓ I mainly find the rose fragrance.

'Found' is past tense; context suggests present tense 'find'. 'Off the Rose rose fragrance' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'the rose fragrance'. Capitalization of 'Rose' is unnecessary.

× So there are too many plants of the Rose.

✓ So there are too many rose plants.

'Plants of the Rose' is awkward; 'rose plants' is the correct plural noun phrase. 'Rose' should be lowercase.

× Whenever I go for a picnic with families in the garden gardens, then I take different type of pictures of different flowers.

✓ Whenever I go for a picnic with my family in the garden, I take different types of pictures of different flowers.

'Families' should be singular 'family' as it refers to the speaker's family. 'Garden gardens' is redundant; use 'garden'. 'Different type' should be plural 'different types' to agree with 'pictures'.

× Yes, pupils in our country often send flowers to each other.

✓ Yes, people in our country often send flowers to each other.

'Pupils' is not appropriate in this context; 'people' is the correct general term for the population.

× Uh, for example, there are special day in our countries, the Valentine Day.

✓ For example, there is a special day in our country, Valentine's Day.

'There are special day' should be 'there is a special day' because 'day' is singular. 'Countries' should be singular 'country'. 'Valentine Day' should be 'Valentine's Day'.

× On that day, every loved one gives to the flower to each other to express their feelings.

✓ On that day, every loved one gives flowers to others to express their feelings.

'Gives to the flower to each other' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'gives flowers to others'. 'Each other' is used for reciprocal actions between two people; 'others' is more appropriate here.