花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih jelas dan langsung, serta hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

範例: Yes, I love sunflowers because they remind me of someone special in my life, my ex-boyfriend. They always brighten my day and have a unique charm.

建議: Jawaban Anda agak membingungkan dan kurang koheren. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan jelas untuk menyampaikan ide Anda.

範例: Yes, I love flowers myself. In my family, no one else really cares about flowers, so I am the only one who often brings them home.

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan langsung menjawab pertanyaan.

範例: No, there are not many flowers where I live because my family and I decided not to have a garden in front of our house since we don't have enough time to take care of plants.

建議: Jawaban Anda terlalu panjang dan agak berbelit. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta perbaiki tata bahasa.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of fresh flowers that people give me because they are meaningful to me. I think flowers are beautiful and a great way to express love.

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih jelas dan gunakan kata penghubung yang tepat.

範例: People in my country don't usually send flowers daily, but on Valentine's Day, many couples send flowers to express their feelings to each other.

× Sunflower it's my favorite flowers all the time because sunflowers always remembering me as a one persons who always have a special part in my life.

✓ Sunflower is my favorite flower all the time because sunflowers always remind me of a person who always has a special part in my life.

The word 'flowers' should be singular 'flower' to match 'favorite'. 'Sunflowers' as plural subject requires the verb 'remind' not 'remembering'. 'A one persons' is incorrect; it should be 'a person'. Also, 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular 'person'.

× Sunflower it's my favorite flowers all the time because sunflowers always remembering me as a one persons who always have a special part in my life.

✓ Sunflower is my favorite flower all the time because sunflowers always remind me of a person who always has a special part in my life.

The verb 'remembering' is incorrectly used here; the correct form is the base verb 'remind' after 'sunflowers always'.

× Sunflower it's my favorite flowers all the time because sunflowers always remembering me as a one persons who always have a special part in my life.

✓ Sunflower is my favorite flower all the time because sunflowers always remind me of a person who always has a special part in my life.

The phrase 'remembering me as a one persons' is incorrect; it should be 'remind me of a person' to correctly express the idea and use proper pronouns.

× Myself because in my family I don't think so that they have any preference about their favorite flowers, because the most all the time in my home, in my house will always bring back flowers.

✓ I do because in my family I don't think they have any preference about their favorite flowers, because most of the time in my home, my family always brings back flowers.

Using 'Myself' as a subject is incorrect; it should be 'I'. Also, 'the most all the time' is awkward and should be 'most of the time'. 'Will always bring back flowers' should be 'always brings back flowers' to agree with singular 'family' or plural 'family members'.

× Myself because in my family I don't think so that they have any preference about their favorite flowers, because the most all the time in my home, in my house will always bring back flowers.

✓ I do because in my family I don't think they have any preference about their favorite flowers, because most of the time in my home, my family always brings back flowers.

The phrase 'will always bring back flowers' is incorrect because 'family' as a singular noun requires 'brings' not 'bring'.

× Myself because in my family I don't think so that they have any preference about their favorite flowers, because the most all the time in my home, in my house will always bring back flowers.

✓ I do because in my family I don't think they have any preference about their favorite flowers, because most of the time in my home, my family always brings back flowers.

The pronoun 'they' is used correctly here referring to family members, but the sentence structure is awkward and 'I don't think so that they have' should be 'I don't think they have'.

× I thought no because my family and I decide to not have garden in front of our home because we didn't have any much time to protect them especially.

✓ I think no because my family and I decided not to have a garden in front of our home because we didn't have much time to take care of them, especially.

'I thought no' is incorrect; it should be 'I think no' or better 'I don't think so'. 'Decide to not have' should be 'decided not to have'. 'Any much time' is incorrect; it should be 'much time'. 'Protect them' is better expressed as 'take care of them' in this context.

× I thought no because my family and I decide to not have garden in front of our home because we didn't have any much time to protect them especially.

✓ I think no because my family and I decided not to have a garden in front of our home because we didn't have much time to take care of them, especially.

The verb 'decide' should be in past tense 'decided' to match the past context indicated by 'didn't have'.

× When someone always giving me a fresh flowers, I always take a pictures for them because it's really memorizing me and really mean to me.

✓ When someone always gives me fresh flowers, I always take pictures of them because they really remind me and mean a lot to me.

'A fresh flowers' is incorrect; 'flowers' is plural so 'a' should be removed. 'A pictures' is incorrect; 'pictures' is plural so 'a' should be removed. 'Memorizing me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'remind me'.

× When someone always giving me a fresh flowers, I always take a pictures for them because it's really memorizing me and really mean to me.

✓ When someone always gives me fresh flowers, I always take pictures of them because they really remind me and mean a lot to me.

The verb 'giving' should be in the simple present form 'gives' to agree with 'someone' and the adverb 'always'. 'Memorizing' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'remind'.

× I'm always as crazy as every people who always showing his love or her love or their love with flowers because they are very pretty and beautiful.

✓ I'm always as crazy as every person who always shows his, her, or their love with flowers because they are very pretty and beautiful.

'Every people' is incorrect; it should be 'every person'. 'Showing' should be 'shows' to agree with singular 'person'. The pronouns 'his love or her love or their love' are better expressed as 'his, her, or their love'.

× For a daily purpose is the answer is no, but for like Valentine's, it's probably yes because a lot of coupling here, really waiting the day to express things, her feelings, their feelings, each others.

✓ For daily purposes, the answer is no, but for occasions like Valentine's Day, it's probably yes because a lot of couples here really wait for the day to express their feelings to each other.

'For a daily purpose' should be 'for daily purposes'. 'A lot of coupling' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of couples'. 'Waiting the day' should be 'wait for the day'. 'Each others' should be 'each other'.