花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question, then adding specific supporting details with proper linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'reflection of peaceful life' without explanation.

範例: Yes, I love flowers because they come in many bright colors that brighten up any space. For example, we often use flowers to decorate events like weddings and birthdays, which makes the atmosphere more attractive and lively.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unrelated or unclear expressions like 'brings way in people's face' and improve grammar.

範例: Yes, I know my sister loves flowers because she is fascinated by nature. She often says that flowers symbolize peace and happiness, which is why she enjoys having them around.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about the types of flowers or the hobby.

範例: Yes, there are many types of flowers where I live. My grandmother and I enjoy planting different kinds of flowers in our garden as a hobby, which helps us feel peaceful and relaxed.

建議: Your answer is good but can be more natural and concise. Avoid awkward phrases like 'take off my phone' and improve grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually take photos of flowers every day. For instance, when I wake up and see a beautiful flower, I take out my phone to capture its beauty because it helps me feel relaxed.

建議: Your answer has some pronunciation or spelling errors ('Yasmin' instead of 'Yes, I mean', 'flour' instead of 'flowers') and awkward phrasing. Make sure to answer clearly and use correct vocabulary. Provide specific reasons and examples with linking words.

範例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others because flowers symbolize peace and happiness. For example, during celebrations and festivals, sending flowers is a common way to express good wishes.

× Yes, I love flowers as they have many bright colors in it.

✓ Yes, I love flowers as they have many bright colors in them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular, but 'flowers' is plural, so the correct pronoun is 'them' to agree in number.

× Also known as the reflection of peaceful life.

✓ They are also known as the reflection of peaceful life.

The original sentence is a fragment lacking a subject and verb. Adding 'They are' completes the sentence structure.

× We can use flower in many events or we can use flowers in anything which makes more attractive.

✓ We can use flowers in many events or in anything which makes them more attractive.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context. Also, 'makes more attractive' needs an object 'them' to be clear.

× As I know everyone loves flower but I like to make some nice sister because they have been always fascinated by nature and flower often symbolize peace and happiness.

✓ As far as I know, everyone loves flowers, and I like to make some nice sisters because they have always been fascinated by nature, and flowers often symbolize peace and happiness.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to agree with 'everyone loves'. 'Sister' should be plural 'sisters' to match 'some'. The sentence also needed rephrasing for clarity and tense correction.

× It also brings way in people's face and they are commonly used in silence.

✓ It also brings a smile to people's faces, and they are commonly used in silence.

The phrase 'brings way in people's face' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'brings a smile to people's faces'. Also, 'in silence' is acceptable but could be clearer.

× Yes, there are several several types of flower where I live as me and my grandmother like to plant different time different kind of flowers in our garden as it is our hobby and it provide a peaceful life.

✓ Yes, there are several types of flowers where I live, as my grandmother and I like to plant different kinds of flowers in our garden because it is our hobby and it provides a peaceful life.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'Different kind' should be 'different kinds' to agree in number. 'Me and my grandmother' should be 'my grandmother and I' for correct pronoun case. 'Provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× Yes, I usually take photos of flower everyday like when I wake up in the morning I see a beautiful flower and I have to take off my phone and take picture of that flower because it provide a sense of relaxation in my mind whenever I see flowers.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos of flowers every day. When I wake up in the morning, I see a beautiful flower and I have to take out my phone and take a picture of that flower because it provides a sense of relaxation in my mind whenever I see flowers.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' when talking generally. 'Everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb). 'Take off my phone' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take out my phone'. 'Take picture' should be 'take a picture'. 'Provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× Yasmin, people in my country often send flour to others because flower often symbolizes of peace and happiness, and people in my country are able to share peace and happiness to each other as we can celebrate every function by using flowers.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others because flowers often symbolize peace and happiness, and people in my country are able to share peace and happiness with each other as we can celebrate every function by using flowers.

'Yasmin' seems to be a typo for 'Yes'. 'Flour' is incorrect; it should be 'flowers'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to agree with 'often symbolize'. 'Symbolizes of' is incorrect; it should be 'symbolize'. 'Share peace and happiness to each other' should be 'share peace and happiness with each other'.