花— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, correct grammar, avoid repetition and irrelevant personal detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons, and use linking words. Correct verb forms and singular/plural agreement (e.g., “they refresh my mind”).

範例: Yes, I love flowers. They refresh my mind with their colours and fragrance, and I enjoy placing a small vase of fresh flowers on my desk to brighten my day.

建議: Answer directly and avoid confusing wording. Use a clear subject (e.g., 'Yes, many people I know') and give a specific example of someone you know who likes flowers, with a reason. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'because'.

範例: Yes, many people I know love flowers. For example, my neighbour grows roses in her balcony because she finds gardening relaxing and enjoys their scent.

建議: Give a clear, concise answer with a reason and one supporting detail. Fix word order and articles (e.g., 'there are not many flowers where I live'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'however'.

範例: Not really — there are not many flowers where I live because my city is very busy and has few green spaces. However, there is a small park nearby with seasonal flower beds.

建議: Be natural and concise. Start with a topic sentence, then give one or two specific details about when and why you take photos. Use past/present tense correctly and avoid fillers like 'umm' and 'actually'.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I visit parks or botanical gardens because their colours and shapes are beautiful. I usually capture close-ups to remember the details and share them with friends.

建議: Answer directly and give a clear context (occasions). Use correct plural forms and simpler phrases: 'Yes, people often send flowers for celebrations.' Provide one or two common occasions as examples.

範例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers for occasions such as weddings, graduations and funerals. For example, friends usually send bouquets to congratulate someone on a promotion or to celebrate a birthday.

× I like flowers very much because it's refresh my minds.

✓ I like flowers very much because they refresh my mind.

The subject refers to 'flowers' (plural) so use the pronoun 'they' not 'it'. 'Refresh' must be base form with plural subject: 'they refresh'. 'Mind' should be singular unless referring to multiple minds; here the speaker means their own mind, so use 'my mind'.

× Also, umm actually my father loves me like flowers, that's why I like flowers very much.

✓ Also, actually my father loves me like a flower; that's why I like flowers very much.

The phrase 'loves me like flowers' is unclear. If the speaker means 'likes me like a flower' (simile) use 'like a flower'. Alternatively if they mean 'loves flowers like me' the structure should change. Added article 'a' before 'flower' for correctness. If intended meaning is different, rephrase more clearly.

× Yes, I know anyone who likes flowers because it's the part anyone no one can ignore it because all types of humans are loves a flowers a lot.

✓ Yes, I know many people who like flowers because it is something almost no one can ignore; people of all ages love flowers a lot.

'Anyone' is incorrect here—use 'many people' or 'someone'. 'It's the part anyone no one can ignore it' is ungrammatical; replace with 'it is something almost no one can ignore'. 'All types of humans' is better as 'people of all ages' or 'all kinds of people'. 'Are loves a flowers' has subject-verb and article errors—use 'love flowers'. Remove extra articles and match verb number to subject.

× Actually where where I live in this place not enough flowers because in my city is very busy city that's why umm not very lots of flowers in my where I live.

✓ Actually, where I live there are not enough flowers because my city is very busy; that's why there are not many flowers where I live.

Sentence had missing verbs and subject-verb agreement issues. Use 'there are' for plural 'flowers'. 'Not very lots of flowers' is incorrect; use 'not many flowers'. Remove duplicate words and add commas for clarity.

× Actually when I went some, uh, garden or park, so I just saw a flowers and suddenly I clicked some photos or videos because it's very pretty moment for me.

✓ When I go to a garden or park, I see flowers and sometimes I take photos or videos because it is a very pretty moment for me.

For habitual action use present simple 'go' and 'see' instead of past 'went' and 'saw'. 'Some garden' should be 'a garden' or 'gardens'; 'a flowers' is wrong—use 'flowers' without 'a'. 'Clicked some photos' is informal past; for habitual actions use 'take photos'. 'It's very pretty moment' needs article: 'a very pretty moment'.

× And actually I love flower most that's why I click some photos.

✓ And actually I love flowers the most; that's why I take photos of them.

Use plural 'flowers' and 'the most' for superlative. 'Click some photos' is informal and awkward; 'take photos' is more natural. Add 'of them' or 'of flowers' to show what the photos are of.

× Umm yes, some people's often many times send a flowers or any others because it's a part when your success time.

✓ Yes, some people often send flowers or other gifts many times because it is customary when you succeed.

'Some people's' is incorrect possessive; use 'some people'. 'Many times' placement improved. 'Send a flowers' has article error; use 'flowers' without 'a'. 'Any others' unclear; use 'other gifts'. 'It's a part when your success time' is ungrammatical—rephrase as 'it is customary when you succeed'.

× Some people's wishing you uh, like umm, for flower, uh, with flowers also some Congrats like.

✓ Some people send flowers to congratulate you; others say congratulations with flowers.

Remove incorrect possessive 'people's' and use simple subject 'some people'. 'Wishing you for flower' is ungrammatical—use 'send flowers to congratulate you' or 'say congratulations with flowers'. Simplify structure and use correct verb forms 'send' and 'say'.