写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจน เช่น การใช้ tense ที่เหมาะสมและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ นอกจากนี้ควรตอบตรงประเด็นและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์เพื่อความเป็นธรรมชาติและเข้าใจง่าย

範例: I sometimes write when I need to note important information to prioritize my tasks. I find writing useful for keeping records.

建議: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัดเจนและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น ใช้คำว่า 'minutes of meetings' และอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน พร้อมใช้ linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหลของคำตอบ

範例: I like to write agendas and minutes during meetings because it helps me remember important information and stay organized.

建議: คำตอบควรชัดเจนและตรงประเด็น หลีกเลี่ยงการถามกลับและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์เพื่อแสดงความเห็นของตนเองอย่างมั่นใจ

範例: I don't think the things I write will change because they are factual notes that remain the same over time.

建議: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และความชัดเจนของประโยค รวมถึงใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดและอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because when I attend meetings, I can quickly and clearly organize agendas and minutes by writing them down.

建議: ควรใช้คำศัพท์และโครงสร้างประโยคที่เหมาะสม เช่น ใช้ 'diaries' อย่างถูกต้อง และอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจนโดยใช้ linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหล

範例: I never keep diaries because I prefer to keep my emotions and feelings private rather than writing them down.

建議: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำและโครงสร้างประโยคให้ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติ รวมถึงใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดและอธิบายวิธีการบันทึกชีวิตอย่างละเอียด

範例: I usually use my phone to record reminders for tasks or work activities. I type notes and set alarms to help me stay organized.

× Sometimes I writing if I want to lecture some important text to prioritize complete activities, but I I really like writing them useful for recording.

✓ Sometimes I write if I want to lecture some important text to prioritize completing activities, but I really like writing them because they are useful for recording.

The verb 'writing' is incorrectly used after 'I' without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is 'I write'. Also, 'prioritize complete activities' should be 'prioritize completing activities' to use the gerund form after 'prioritize'. Additionally, 'them useful' needs a linking verb 'because they are useful'.

× Sometimes I writing if I want to lecture some important text to prioritize complete activities, but I I really like writing them useful for recording.

✓ Sometimes I write if I want to lecture some important text to prioritize completing activities, but I really like writing because it is useful for recording.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrectly used to refer to 'writing'. 'Writing' is a gerund and should be referred to as 'it'.

× I like to write agenda or minutes of meeting during meeting and I participate that meeting.

✓ I like to write agendas or minutes of meetings during meetings that I participate in.

The plural form 'agendas' and 'meetings' should be used. Also, 'participate that meeting' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'participate in that meeting'.

× I like to write agenda or minutes of meeting during meeting and I participate that meeting.

✓ I like to write agendas or minutes of meetings during meetings that I participate in.

The verb 'participate' requires the preposition 'in' before the object.

× I like to write down the minute of meeting and to not improve information important memorizing.

✓ I like to write down the minutes of meetings to help improve important information memorization.

The phrase 'to not improve information important memorizing' is unclear and incorrectly structured. It should be 'to help improve important information memorization'. Also, 'minute' should be plural 'minutes' and 'meeting' plural 'meetings'.

× I don't think so. Am I right? Will be. Is this no change at all? Because the the the unit of write down is not change will will be.

✓ I don't think so. Am I right? Will there be no change at all? Because the unit of writing down will not change.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Will be' needs a subject, so 'Will there be' is correct. 'Unit of write down' should be 'unit of writing down'. Also, 'is not change will will be' is incorrect; it should be 'will not change'.

× I prefer handwriting rather than typing because I if I participate in the meeting, it is able to write down agendas or minutes of meeting to to to organize clearly and fast.

✓ I prefer handwriting rather than typing because if I participate in the meeting, I am able to write down agendas or minutes of meetings to organize them clearly and quickly.

'It is able to' is incorrect; the subject 'I' should be used with 'am able to'. Also, 'minutes of meeting' should be plural 'minutes of meetings'. 'Fast' as an adverb should be 'quickly'.

× I never keep Diaries in the note because I don't like to share my emotional or my feeling on the book because I like to save in my heart and keep secret, not exposed.

✓ I never keep diaries in a notebook because I don't like to share my emotions or feelings in a book; I prefer to keep them in my heart and keep them secret, not exposed.

'Diaries' should not be capitalized. 'In the note' is better as 'in a notebook'. 'Emotional' should be 'emotions' and 'feeling' plural 'feelings'. 'Save in my heart' is better expressed as 'keep them in my heart'.

× I usually use telephone to record. Reminding me to do something or to complete the the employment activities.

✓ I usually use my telephone to record reminders to do something or to complete employment activities.

'Use telephone' should be 'use my telephone'. 'Reminding me' is incorrect; it should be 'reminders'. 'The the employment activities' has a repeated article and should be 'employment activities' without 'the'.

× Uh, uh, I usually typing on phone and uh, alarm with the clock.

✓ Uh, uh, I usually type on my phone and set an alarm with the clock.

'Usually typing' is incorrect; it should be 'usually type'. 'Alarm with the clock' is unclear; the correct phrase is 'set an alarm on the clock'.