天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中语法和用词不够准确，'snowing' 应为 'snow'，句子结构稍显重复，建议简化表达并注意时态和名词使用。

範例: I like snow because it looks beautiful. After heavy snow, I enjoy building snowmen and having snowball fights with my family and friends.

建議: 表达不够流畅，语法错误较多，如 'when I in cold weather' 应为 'when I am in cold weather'，建议使用更自然的句式并注意主谓一致。

範例: I prefer cold weather because I can wear different layers of clothes. In hot weather, I feel uncomfortable because I sweat a lot.

建議: 回答中出现了明显错误，如 'white weather' 应为 'wet weather' 或 'dry weather'，句子结构混乱，建议理清思路，使用正确词汇表达观点。

範例: I prefer wet weather because in dry weather my skin feels uncomfortable and dry, and I don't like drinking a lot of water.

建議: 表达不够连贯，语法错误较多，如 'I want to going out' 应为 'I want to go out'，时间表达不准确，建议使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: I don't usually check the weather forecast, but when I plan to go out or play with my friends, I check it about once a week.

建議: 句子结构不完整，表达重复，建议使用更准确的句式并提供具体例子来支持观点。

範例: I think climate change has caused summer temperatures to rise compared to previous years, making the weather hotter than before.

建議: 表达不清晰，词汇使用错误，如 'different classmates' 应为 'different climates'，句子结构混乱，建议理清思路并使用正确词汇。

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I can learn new things and experience different cultures, which is very interesting.

× I like snowing because I think snow is very beautiful and after heavy snowing I can build a snowman or have a snowball fight with my friends or my parents.

✓ I like snow because I think snow is very beautiful and after heavy snow I can build a snowman or have a snowball fight with my friends or my parents.

动词“like”后面通常接名词或动名词，但“snowing”作为动名词表示正在下雪的动作，不适合此处表达喜欢雪的状态，应使用名词“snow”。

× because when I in cold weather I can vary many clothes, but in hot weather I can't reduce my clothes, you know, and weather make me sweat is so uncomfortable.

✓ because when I am in cold weather I can wear many clothes, but in hot weather I can't reduce my clothes, you know, and the weather making me sweat is so uncomfortable.

缺少动词“am”，导致句子结构不完整；“vary many clothes”应为“wear many clothes”，动词使用错误；“weather make me sweat”缺少冠词且动词形式错误，应为“the weather making me sweat”。

× I prefer white weather because when I'm in dry weather my skin always feels uncomfortable and I don't like and I'm not like drinking water so in dry weather my skin is so dry.

✓ I prefer wet weather because when I'm in dry weather my skin always feels uncomfortable and I don't like it and I don't like drinking water so in dry weather my skin is so dry.

“white weather”应为“wet weather”，词汇错误；“I don't like and I'm not like drinking water”结构混乱，应改为“I don't like it and I don't like drinking water”，代词使用错误。

× Umm, actually checking the weather forecast. Not my habit, but when I want to going out or play with my friends outdoors, I always check in the weather forecast. Maybe one hour times a week.

✓ Umm, actually checking the weather forecast is not my habit, but when I want to go out or play with my friends outdoors, I always check the weather forecast. Maybe once or twice a week.

句子缺少谓语动词，导致结构不完整；“want to going out”应为“want to go out”，动词不定式错误；“check in the weather forecast”应为“check the weather forecast”，介词使用错误；“one hour times a week”表达不准确，应为“once or twice a week”。

× Well, I think the effects of climate change in recent years may be as in summer the temperature is higher than previous years, actually is more and more higher.

✓ Well, I think the effects of climate change in recent years are that in summer the temperature is higher than in previous years, actually it is getting higher and higher.

“may be as”表达不清，应改为“are that”引导表语从句；“actually is more and more higher”中“more and more higher”重复比较级，应改为“getting higher and higher”。

× Yes, I like, I think I can learn about new things about it. And what's great about visit other cities that have different classmates is that I can meet different culture. It's very interesting.

✓ Yes, I like it. I think I can learn new things about it. And what's great about visiting other cities that have different climates is that I can experience different cultures. It's very interesting.

“I like”后应加宾语“it”；“visit”应为动名词“visiting”；“different classmates”应为“different climates”，词汇错误；“meet different culture”应为“experience different cultures”，动词和名词复数形式错误。